MayUr FF: With Or Without You (Ch.11 - Pg109) Fin. - Page 26

It was just Awesuuuuuuuummmmmmmmmmm part.

fabulous update.......
no words to describe
really enjoyed while reading
plzz cont soon
n dear tnx fr pm

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ah! caught up with this FF at last...
fab update Akansha!
hmm....Shilpa's words have surely truly touched Mayank's heart, coz the sudden change n him indicates that....
but in case of Nupur, the poor gal's had a serious misunderstanding...perfect example 4 how words uttered at the wrong place n wrong time affects the person....
waiting 2 read how Mayank will make her understand his regained love 4 her....
do cont. soon okay...😃

hey Akkiii :D

Well, the point is u write really well, and u write it on Mn and u write it on MN conflict

and it gets better and better..they love each other madly but then they are also bound by the set of events that transpired that made them move apart

looking forward to reading more and more :)

oh god!
It was so long......
I read but will comment later properly bfor u shout at me.
I need to run from you

Bachaao....

But bfore that u confused this 'confused soul' lil more.....

Was it nupur's dream or mayu really confessed????????

Now m runing tp save my life.........

Hey Akansha,

I am dancing here seeing your pm for update..... And I am dancing a little more by reading the update....!!!!!!!!

Yipppppeeee....!!! The determined-to-win Mayank Sharma is BACK WITH A BANG...!!!
So, now he is gonna win HIS Nupur back....

You have no idea how MUCH haaaappppppy I was to read that Mayank confessed everything in the car... I had almost imagined their full reconcilation, the cancellation of divorce, the Maa-Mayur scene, Mayur love... Everything and then *Dream Bubble Burst*

Oh... Shilpa Aunty.... She is great.... !!! Seriously, she is the best....!!!!!!!! I am saluting her....!!!

Oh... Nupur has misunderstood Mayank... She heard only half of the convo and then in the lift..................................
Hmmmm.... But, no probs, Mayank will win her back in such a way that she won't misunderstand him again.... Haina??????😉


Loved this update.... Pls Continue soon.....

- Pooja

this one was beautiful .... so clearly you brought out their feelings ... their thoughts ... most amazing part being the way you played with the words .... just perfect ... loved each emotion they faced ... eagerly waiting for the next part ... thanks for the pm ....

hey akki....not fair...suddenly what happened to Nupur? uff! it was all going so beautiful.........but i guess she was totally confused so it was all to much for her to handle........uff! i loved this update..mayank's confession was so sweet...only if nupur could hear it........
plz plz update next part soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Awesome one........