MayUr FF: With Or Without You (Ch.11 - Pg109) Fin. - Page 28

Updating after a loooooog time dear...awesome part....i'm glad mayankr ealised his felings for nupur.....continue soon

😭.😭.😭.😭.😭😭😭.😭.😭.👏.👏.👏.👏👏👏.👏

wat is it yaar........😭

not fair.........

mayyu ko pataa chal gya ki he luvs nupurrrrrrrrrr👏

but then these misunderstandings😡

nupur nupur nupur humeshaa galat baatein sunti hai and jab mayank ne confess kiya tab wo nhi suna.................😡

and that kiss was just😳

in the lift😆

yeh kya ho rha hai😭😭😭

plz inhe unite kar doooooooooooooooooooooooooooo🤢

awesome part

thnx for the pm

continue soon

love ya

pari😛

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

first of all the dedication was so cute

i loved the update too the core Thank you so much!!!!

but found it too short yaar What!!!!? Are you crazy? it wasnt short!

mayur kiss was really passionate

mayank's confession to himself was so cute

let's see how will they resolve their differences

i don't think it will be so soon Umm lets see..depends on my mood!

i really loved the poem in the end Uh! that was a song by U2...With Or Without You!

it was so amazing

continue soon

luv

mahima

Originally posted by: -Jess-

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Muaahhhhhhh Sweetu...!! Love u !! Love you too..😳

EDIT:

Akki....blowing hugs and kisses to you... 🤗🤗🤗 Oh! they reached! The hug almost crashed my ribs!! You are growing too uncontrollable these days!*shakes head*

This is such a biggggggg surprise for me....!!! *dances*

A whole update dedicated to me? 😲....that too of my favorite FF..... 😳😳...Awww.... this has to be my lucky day...☺️☺️☺️....thank u Sweetu....Muaahhh....!! Umm yeah! That was your lucky day actually! I mean, you got the score to 8-8..Thats something..*smirks*

I know i know...you are leading in scores... but this surprise tops everything.... I'm in love with this FF.... and you gave me amazing update today... thanks to my constant bugging you for updates....... Didn't I tell you how much amazing writer you are?...⭐️.... Aww...!!!! Thank you so much! 😳

This update went perfect with the title.... With or Without you.... Gosh, I love that song... I feel like listening to it right now and forget about commenting here... but then you will come out of the computer to threaten me... so I better continue on commenting....🤣 Nah! Seriously di.. I wouldnt have threatened you if it was for the song! I absolutely adore that song. Heaven is abstract but if someone asks me to describe it..i'd say its the feeling that possess me when i listen to With Or Without You..The song has so many interpretations...It makes it U2's best song till date.. This song makes me want to worship Bono for writing this! It has everything, every single emotion. The anger, the passion, the fury, the give-up, the pain, the love...WOW!!! OK i do realise i just went on and on..but oh well.. It surprises me..I am such a punk person but when it comes to WOWY, i can't help it at all!!!

Okay... Jess.. focus and concentrate.... nahi toh yeh bachhi tumhe kachhi chaba jayegi.....waise bhi kitni late comment kar raho ho... 😆 Yeah! Shyad mujhe bhi focus karna chahiye..😆

Sooooooooo.... about the update....Yeah..!

It was FANTASTIC....AWESOME...SUPERB...AMAZING....FABULOUS.....sorry I'm running out of adjectives...😆.....but you get the point na.... Thank you Thank you Thank you.Thank you..I am running out of words..But you get it na?😉

The best part I loved about this is the feeling it gave me... the feeling of longingness....passion... the feeling of sweet pain of love... the feeling of with or without you... I loved it to the core...Oh! I am glad the WOWY feeling came out..!😊

Mayank decided to give their relationship second chance... to try hard to win her back... because he loves her to death... but poor Nupur heard the half part of Mayank's convo with Shilpa and misunderstands him further... *sigh*...the pain she was going through... you portrayed it so well.... each and every detail you wrote about Mayank's feelings, his empowering love, touching her gently, removing her frawn... everything was amazingly written... I so wish Nupur would have heard his confession... 😍 I can just say..Whenever confession will happen, it will happen in a better way. Mayank confessed without looking in her eyes. That marks something very important. The next time he does it or they do it or whatever (It shows i havent thought about the story much..😆) it would be for final. Once and for all! And that would last for lifetime!

The elevator part gave me goosebumps... somehow MN and trip-fall-catch seems to be never ending...but everytime it happens, my heart skips a beat. Me too! I love those scenes! And the fact is that when ArTi do it..it doesn't look cliche...In fact it has an all new charm!.😍. I can sense their eye-lock... and that drowning into each other's eyes....and the passion...and the kiss... 😍😍....uff... this is sooo good... but it ended.... of course MN won't reconcile in just one kiss... there is much more to be done.. they need to talk it out... work it out... at least Mayank is determined to work it out... I hope Nupur will reciprocate soon...She will! She has to! If not, i'll force her to! 😆

I love this FF Akki... I wish something like this would have shown in season 2....😍

You are amazing writer Sweetu... proud of you... keep it up... Thank you so much di...for this long comment..It made my day! I cant tell you ho happy i feel to hear all this from you! Its just that i am humbled to receive your comments on my writings!

Ahem ahem... bahot tarif ho gayi....still you need to do less I-Fing and concentrate on your studies... 😆.... so I can score more....😉 Yeah! Jyada taarif ho gayi!!! I-Fing going to decrease in some time now!!!

I'm gonna count one point for this update... 8-7 it is then....😃
The latest score is 10-8 i believe!😃