MayUr FF: With Or Without You (Ch.11 - Pg109) Fin. - Page 25

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Posted: 15 years ago
nice update dear
love sa's decesion😉
but mayur what happened between them😕
con soon👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: -Jess-

Awesome update Akki.... I loved Shilpa Aunty's filmy drama... putting their hands on her forhead and emotionally blackmailing them.... 😆 yeah! Drama is good for life..! 😆

Also loved the husband -wife convo in the bed... trespassing into private property.... 😆.... how do write this kind of stuff when you are not even married yaar....😳. Di...aap aam khao..guthliyaan mat gino..😆 Hehehe!!.. simply awesome.....Thanks..! And you're making me conscious😳
Awesome update.... you are very very good writer AK... keep it up....Thank you again..really i am humbled.!!!!

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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Akansha,
Whats up???
Okay, I need you to do this thing for me....
Please read the fourth commented line of the second comment in this link.... Its pretty important and quite serious too...
Please Read!!


Okay, You must have already guessed my question now, haina???

If not, then please read all the MOST IMPORTANT things of the first comment in the same link....
I am sure you know what I mean by most important 😉

And now, the most important question,
When are you gonna update 'With or Without You'???

Look, I have not at all threatened you or troubled you, I am just showing you some proofs which say that you better UPDATE....😃😆
Will come back soon with more creative and mischievous ideas for making you update..... 😆 (Jus Kiddin!!)

Anyways, waiting for your update which will be 7 OR MORE pages in word, font times new roman size 12...!!! *giggles*


Waiting,

Pooja
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: mjhtnupurmayank

Hey Akansha,
Whats up???
Okay, I need you to do this thing for me....
Please read the fourth commented line of the second comment in this link.... Its pretty important and quite serious too...
Please Read!!


Okay, You must have already guessed my question now, haina???

If not, then please read all the MOST IMPORTANT things of the first comment in the same link....
I am sure you know what I mean by most important 😉

And now, the most important question,
When are you gonna update 'With or Without You'???

Look, I have not at all threatened you or troubled you, I am just showing you some proofs which say that you better UPDATE....😃😆
Will come back soon with more creative and mischievous ideas for making you update..... 😆 (Jus Kiddin!!)

Anyways, waiting for your update which will be 7 OR MORE pages in word, font times new roman size 12...!!! *giggles*


Waiting,

Pooja



Pooja..I am writing With Or Without You..It should be updated soon..

I am sorry for the delay!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ak12



Pooja..I am writing With Or Without You..It should be updated soon.. Yippee... Thanx a lot...!!!

I am sorry for the delay! No probs... And I am also sorry... Was in a mood for some mischief....!!!


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Posted: 15 years ago

first of all the dedication was so cute

i loved the update too the core
but found it too short yaar
mayur kiss was really passionate
mayank's confession to himself was so cute
let's see how will they resolve their differences
i don't think it will be so soon
i really loved the poem in the end
it was so amazing
continue soon
luv
mahima
Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Muaahhhhhhh Sweetu...!! Love u !!
EDIT:
Akki....blowing hugs and kisses to you... 🤗🤗🤗
This is such a biggggggg surprise for me....!!!
A whole update dedicated to me? 😲....that too of my favorite FF..... 😳😳...Awww.... this has to be my lucky day...☺️☺️☺️....thank u Sweetu....Muaahhh....!!
I know i know...you are leading in scores... but this surprise tops everything.... I'm in love with this FF.... and you gave me amazing update today... thanks to my constant bugging you for updates....... Didn't I tell you how much amazing writer you are?...⭐️....
This update went perfect with the title.... With or Wihtou you.... Gosh, I love that song... I feel like listening to it rightnow and forget about commenting here... but then you will come out of the computer to threaten me... so I better continue on commenting....🤣
Okay... Jess.. focus and concentrate.... nahi toh yeh bachhi tumhe kachhi chaba jayegi.....waise bhi kitni late comment kar raho ho... 😆
Sooooooooo.... about the update....
It was FANTASTIC....AWESOME...SUPERB...AMAZING....FABULOUS.....sorry I'm running out of adjectives...😆.....but you get the point na....
The best part I loved about this is the feeling it gave me... the feeling of longingness....passion... the feeling of sweet pain of love... the feeling of with or without you... I loved it to the core...
Mayank decided to give their relationship second chance... to try hard to win her back... because he loves her to death... but poor Nupur heard the half part of Mayank's convo with Shilpa and misunderstands him further... *sigh*...the pain she was going through... you portayed it so well.... each and every detail you wrote about Mayank's feelings, his empowering love, touching her gently, removing her frawn... everythig was amazingly written... I so wish Nupur would have heard his confession... 😍
The elevator part gave me goosbumps... somehow MN and trip-fall-catch seems to be never ending...but everytime it happens, my heart skips a beat... I can sense their eye-lock... and that drowning into each other's eyes....and the passion...and the kiss... 😍😍....uff... this is sooo good... but it ended.... of course MN won't reconcile in just one kiss... there is much more to be done.. they need to talk it out... work it out... at least Mayank is determined to work it out... I hope Nupur will reciprocate soon...
I love this FF Akki... I wish something like this would have shown in season 2....😍
You are amazing writer Sweetu... proud of you... keep it up...
Ahem ahem... bahot tarif ho gayi....still you need to do less I-Fing and concentrate on your studies... 😆.... so I can score more....😉
I'm gonna count one point for this update... 8-7 it is then....😃
Edited by -Jess- - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Akshiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

what a beautiful update.

Totally rocking

Maynk- Nupur both are in bewilderment about their love.

Both of them madly love each other. And they knew i.

Though they knew it they have so many Q's in their mind.

Sometimes maynk thought that nups dint love her and don't want to give a chance of their marriage.

And nups has the same thought like maynk.

And nups also misunderstood maynk becoz she didn't hear the whole convo of mayu nd mayu.mom.

I loved when mayus confess his feelings in the car.

But afsos nups didn't hear it becoz she was sleeping.

Awwwwwww nyps was dreaming a sweet moment with maynak. And she felt very good.

I loved their closeness in the lift.

Haye they were kissing each other but then nups push him away and told him that he pretended as he loves her.

Tak tak poor mayu. Akshi ye misunderstanding kab dur hoga?

R a kuch tou kar.

Cant c mayur in this way

Plzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzzzzz do something

Clear all misunderstanding b/w . I want to c my mayur happy.

Akshiiiiiiiiiii tremendous update.

Loved it totally.

Keep updating.

Edited by fariaa70 - 15 years ago

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