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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 15 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

@...Gauri, Suri, Suhana, Lipi, Guglu, Yogi, Rakhi, Sumi n all (jo bhi mujhe galiyaan dene k mood me hain😆)

mujhe maaf karo yaar...!!! maine kuch parts is ka EDIT kiya hai...!!! actually aaj kal phones aur e-mail k zamane me koi kisi ko khat likhta hai kya...??? par Gauri ne mujhe ek Task diya tha...ki main is par ek SHOT likhun...!!! aur meri kahani ki suruwat toh rajeev se hi hoti hai...aur usi par khatam bhi...toh maine Rajeev par likhna suru kiya aur maine bakwaas likhna suru kar diya...hala ki natiza baht bura tha...mujhe saar peetne ka mann karr raha tha ise padhne k baad...!!!ab yeh sach hai ki is SHOT me ek romantic part tha...par mujhe laga ki kahin yeh kuch jyada na ho jaye...!!! mera dimag kuch jyada chalta hai...yeh toh aap sab jante hi hoge...isiliye...!!!

ab maaf bhi kar do...main us scene ko kisi aur SHOT me add kar dungi...agar aap log abhi bhi bore hona chahte hoge toh...!!!

Hmm....the last lines sounded better!! Kisi aur shot me.....hmm....I think it will do for me....waise agar tumne cut kiya hai.....may be it was for better!! Ek writer sabse zyada achhese samajhti hai na? Anyways....main na likhna bhul gayi thi.....wo poems/songs.....jo bhi the....they were beautiful!!!👏👏 😉

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Suhana

@suhana.dixit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

@...Gauri, Suri, Suhana, Lipi, Guglu, Yogi, Rakhi, Sumi n all (jo bhi mujhe galiyaan dene k mood me hain😆)

mujhe maaf karo yaar...!!! maine kuch parts is ka EDIT kiya hai...!!! actually aaj kal phones aur e-mail k zamane me koi kisi ko khat likhta hai kya...??? par Gauri ne mujhe ek Task diya tha...ki main is par ek SHOT likhun...!!! aur meri kahani ki suruwat toh rajeev se hi hoti hai...aur usi par khatam bhi...toh maine Rajeev par likhna suru kiya aur maine bakwaas likhna suru kar diya...hala ki natiza baht bura tha...mujhe saar peetne ka mann karr raha tha ise padhne k baad...!!!ab yeh sach hai ki is SHOT me ek romantic part tha...par mujhe laga ki kahin yeh kuch jyada na ho jaye...!!! mera dimag kuch jyada chalta hai...yeh toh aap sab jante hi hoge...isiliye...!!!

ab maaf bhi kar do...main us scene ko kisi aur SHOT me add kar dungi...agar aap log abhi bhi bore hona chahte hoge toh...!!!

Hi Priya

Mujhe tumhe maarne ka mann nahin kar raha hai..u know main hinsa mein vishwaas nahin rakhti to shanti se edited part kabhi kissi doosre shot mein post kar dena😃

jaisa sumi ne kaha u r the best one to decide whether to keep or edit the scene in your fiction

Bye😊

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#23

hey priya dear very beautiful story.............loved it..............they simple and very lovely.................but i liked the para u added saying u wont make anything go bad.................lovely story.................

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#24

hi pri!!!

Wonderful Shot !!!

and a very appropriate name !!! 👏 👏 👏 👏

Bhala ho Gauri ka jisne tumhein kasam di aur tumne yeh shot post kiya....warna...huh..!

Gauri...agar aur bhi kuch likha hai inhone and if you know...then plzzzzzz feel free to give her the 'KASAM'....😛 Hum sab ki bahoooot duayein milegi tumhe !! 😉

coming to the shot....it was simply superb !!

All the feelings ....friendship, separation, love, pain...everything was described just perfectlyyyy !!! 👏 ⭐️ ⭐️

Aur kya kahu? yaar....really am short of words now...

haan...par tumhein apne DUSRE skills dikhane ki zaroorat nahi hai okay? Mujhe pata hai...tumhein bahot ACHCHI EDITING karna aata hai...but isse tum apne shots par use karke prove mat kiya karo....

welll.... You can use your EDITING skills on your ENDLESS NOTES and USELESS EXCUSES for not updating your fics early....😆 😆 😆

Chal ab aur khichai nahi karti tumhari....

And.....

THANKS FOR THE PM !! 😃

( 'Feel free to ignore it , if you are not interested'..huh! Yeh uske liye tha...)

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Esha

@esha143

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 15 years ago

#25

Amazingly nice shot Priya.............superb 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

ab kyun ki tere do fics khatam hone waale hai.........toh tu aur bhi shots likh sathi hai...........aisa nahi hai ki I don't want you to start on a new fic but still..........sochna jaroor...........😛

this shot is one of the best I have read till now............

and jaise Mana ne kaha hai...........THANX FOR THE PM!!

and NO THANX FOR UR NOTE WITH IT !!😡(agar agli baar aisi galthi hui tujhse toh anjaam bohuth bura hoga...........yaad rakhna........😈)

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385641

Hibernated

Posted: 15 years ago

#26

very very beautiful part.

nice one👏

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Purnima

@-purnima-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#27

awesome 👏 brilliant......👏.............one shot.....very intresting...........
bich bich mein dara bhi diya tha( by sending raj on border, 9 din mein suman ki shadi.....)............but by reaching the end......made me happy........😃.......
really superb👏

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: sun_423
priii this was so beautiful.. Thanxxxxx a lot Suri😃

the emotions were perfect, the turmoil, sentiments...love, pain, sacrifice...tears.. everything was present... it was just too good... the situation was very well put forth.. the moral of the story is the best part.. GODDDD...kuch choda hai tum ne...is SHOT k bare me ek hi line me sab kuch kah diya...thanxxxx yaar...😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

according to me the moral of this ff is 'Never hide your feelings from the one's you love..Or may be there will be a time when you will be given no chance to explain'... raj & suman did get their second chance but life does not give everyone a second chance.. so one should never hesitate from telling what is in your heart.. it was very sweet... i really liked it very much....👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

kabhi kabhi main sochti hun ki tum kaise mere dimag ki baat jan leti ho...??? par sahi bhi hai...tum ne jo bhi kaha hai na...main bass vohi is shot me batana chahti thi...😃 aur itni sare claps k liye main thanx nahi kahungi...kuch chizain chup kar rahen toh achha hota hai...😃 😃 😃 samjhi😃 😃 😃

Do posts more shot ff's often.. would love to read them.... try karungi...matlab maine toh baht pahle se hi likhe hue the...par mujhe voh sab ajeeb lagte hain isiliye kabhi post karne k bare me socha nahi tha...😃

aur haan thank your cousin from my side kyunke because of her you have posted the wonderful one shot...😊 main us ki yeh baat kabhi bhi nahi maanti...agar us ne mujh se apne B'day par yeh promise nahi liya hota toh...!!! main toh bekar me fass gayi yaar...😆 😆 😆

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

Inactive

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Posted: 15 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Dhara_s
Nice one Priya...!!!! thanxxxx a lot Dhara jee...😃

Aise hi shots post karti rehna...!!!! tum sach me yeh chahti ho...😲??? pata hai mujhe kya lag raha hai...😛??? naaaahhhhhh...rahne do...main batayungi toh tum 'jo bole sau nihal' kah kar kripan le kar mere piche padd jayogi...😆

And I loved the title...!!!! thanxxxx...last moment par yeh idea dimag me aaya tha...😃