Lamhein..With Rajeev(Shot fics)ud pg14 & siggy 1pg - Page 4

Originally posted by: Gauri_s

very very very...angry with u di.....😡 😡 😡 ha ha ha......tune apni asli saqal yahan par kyoun post ki......😆 😆 😆

tune is shot ka romantic part EDIT kyoun kiya...😡 😡 😡 uffo......samjhaya toh tha tujhe......😃

tu bahat buri hai...😡 😡 😡 is me naya kya hai...jab bhi milti hai......yahi toh bolti hai......😆

ab main tujh se kabhiiiiiiiiii baat nahi karungi...kattiiiiiii 😡 😡 😡 ab gussa thuk bhi de.....!!! stupid yahan par nahi...... bahar ja kar......thuk......😆

Originally posted by: sun_423

pri ab yeh kya baat hui... chalo post the unedited version.. abhi post karo.... i'am waiting....

Originally posted by: prerna1

that was really good
plz keep updating such shots

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Beautiful story You should have posted it ealier will be waiting to read more stories which you write

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Priya Hiiii suhana...😃

How r u??? not f9 yaar...dimag ki batti gull hai...😕

This OS is one of the best I have ever read..U know aap bahut accha likhti hain.👏👏👏👏 I was so mesimerized after reading this...😊 sachhhiiii😳 😳 😳 😳 thanxxxxx a lot...😃 😃 😃

Raj n Suman ka pyaar unka itezaar bina kuchh kahe bhi bahut kuchh keh gaya..especially title bahut hi khoosurat tha..😃 last moment par yeh title dimag me aaya..

i really love this song..Lyrics is just so beautiful.. yeh Gazal Jagjeet singh ki hai...one of my fav gazal singer n my fav gazal too..😃

Raj aur Suman ki pehli mulakaatbahut cute thi..Raj is really very talented😛😃 raj k talented hone par tumhe shaq hai kya...😛

Suman ne ragging ki wajah se hi sahi par propose to kiya tha..😆😉 aur nahi toh kya...galati se sahi kaam kar diya...😆

Shayad Bhagwanji ne unka ek doosre se milna likha tha.. 😊 tabhi to har baar door hokar bhi woh aur paas aate rahe😃nahi yaar...bhagwan jee ko kyoun taklif deti ho...yeh sab kiya karya...mera tha...😆

par dono ne chup reh kar bhi pyaar ke har ehsaas ko jeeya..Mann mein dono hi jante the ki woh ek doosre se pyaar karte hain par shayad unke iss ehsaas ko lafzon ki zaroorat thi.. kuch baton ko lafzon ki jarurat hoti hai...!!! varna samne wala khud is uljhan me rahta hai ki jo voh soch raha hai voh kahan tak sahi hai...😃

Suman ki shadi tai hone ke baad Raj to ek dum toot gaya... phir bhi kehte hain na jeet hamesha sacche pyaar ki hi hoti hai..Raj ne Suman ke baba se saari baatein keh di aur woh unke pyaar ko samajh bhi gaye😃 sare father Amrish Puri ki tarah thode hi hote hain...kuch father Amitabh bachhan ki tarah samajhdaar bhi hote hain😆

Saari mushkilon ke baad bhi Suman n Raj ek ho gaye..😊 toh phir mujhe THANX kaho na...dimag toh mera hi kharab kiya tha na un dono ne...😆

Yeh unedited version kaun sa hai??Kripya usko bhi postkarein😃 rahne do na yaar......raat gayi baat gayi...😆

Bye😊

Originally posted by: nihatri

lovely

Originally posted by: pinky901

beautiful story dear

keep writing such short fics on rajeev

luv u

bye

Originally posted by: sania_58

awsome OS

loved it

aise post karte raho

superb

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

bohot he sweet haai story

loved it

Originally posted by: fanatic 21

soooooooooooo beautiful.................👏👏👏👏
loved it completely........👏👏 d way it began and till d end same tempo was der.......loved it.....👏👏

awesome way of presenting suman and raj and also der parts in diff ways.....👏 thanxxxx...thanxxxx...thanxxxxx a lottttt Lipi😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

as usual ur dialogue part is always ur plus point.....aur haan bichme aapki kuch lines jaise yeh

(mujhe pata hai ki aap sab kya soch rahe honge...RAJ...border par jo gaya tha...matlab kuch BAHT BURA...😆!!! come on guys...dis is Priya...bura toh kuch ho hi nahi sakta...aur agar kuch hua bhi toh main hun na...use thik karne k liye...)

adds to the flavour......😉😊 ha ha ha...yeh mera plus point nahi...mere paas dimag ki kaami hai...yeh baat aap sab ko yaad dilati hai...😆 😆 😆

was it poem or song dnt know..(sry for dat)...but it was beautiful...👏👏👏 first one 's a Gazal by Jagjeet singh n second one s a song...jise maine apne aunty k poem dairy me padha tha...😃

also kindly post ur unedited version as well....😛😊 use main kisi aur fic me add kar dungi...okay😃😃

keep posting such beautiful and wonderful creations by u.....😊😊😊😛 sure...par us se pahle aap soch lo...ki kya aap sach me PAKNA chahti ho inhe padh kar...😆 😆 😆