' Two Wheels Made Us One' Part XVIII (story ends)

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Priya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#21

nice part dear

pls cont soon

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Bhoomi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: mjhtnupurmayank
Hiii....

Awesome concept... Perfect and Unique as always.... !!
Loved the title 'Two Wheels Made Us One'!!
I started reading non - serial based stories only because of your amazing writing...!!
Pls continue soon....
Will be waiting to read further...

- Pooja

Hi Pooja,

Aww u felt the concept to be good makes me sooo very happy.. and u liked the title fels nice to know.. i am trying to write better and hope u like it all the way dear..

I am overwhelmed that u felt like reading non serial based with my work.. its readers like u who have have given me so much encoruagment to write more and more of these though they dont have serial charcter names..

yup will post next part today.and hope u like..it as it proceeds..

thanks for ur lovely comments...

Bhoomi

Originally posted by: Sur_Singhania
Hey Bhoomi
thanx alot for the pm dear

this seems like another great story...started quite differently.

lets see what happens in Akshaya's life now

i just love ur writing style, with poems and all...

keep up the good job

LOve

Sur

Hi Sur,

glad i could Pm to most.. this time.. i do miss that and recollect when readers ask me why i didnt..ehhe dont know how this story will be for u all.. hope i really dont disppoint u all.. thanks so much for reading and comentign encouraging my effort it means so much more..

yup Akshaya life will take twist..hope u enjoy that.. aww thansk so much for likign my writign style..tits all very simple and a bit real in nature i try..

luvu dear..tc

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

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Posted: 15 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Kanuk
Bhoomi all i want to say for this part ,

" abhi na jao chod ke , ke dil abhi bhara nahi "

will wait for more parts .

Kanu

Hi Kanu,

wow!1 ur song is so very sweet.. and i did get what it was sayign to me.. yup more to come and the story will progress in the direction u all must be wanting... hope u enjoy the next part dear... tc

Bhoomi

Originally posted by: pinky901
nice part dear
pls cont soon

HI Pinky,

glad u liked this part dear.. hope u enjoy the next too..tc

Bhoomi

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Escapist

@Escapist

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Posted: 15 years ago

#24

wow bhoomi...thts just awesome dying to knw what happens next n tht too in mere 55 mins?? gosh its gonna b too interesting !! lovely 😊

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#25

bhoomi you know i was just thinking if you have updated Two Wheels Made Us One... & then when i refreshed the page i got your pm, about the update.... & i was so happy.. jaldi jaldi i came to this thread part padha aur ab i'am writing a comment for you... well dear that was a very nice part.. it was interesting indeed.. i was think akshaya & manidhar will meet at work or some where else but i did not know that they would meet in the auditorium in such circumstances.... but it was a nice way for the both of them to meet.. so as soon as akshaya sees mani she remembers him & knows that he is the guy who rejected her proposal.. & on the other hand manidhar realizes akshaya is the same girl whom they had rejected the proposal off.. naam sunnthe hii mani ko bhi yaad aagaya... well this indicates that though mani has rejected the proposal & though akshaya has accepted it, but still at the back of both their minds that rejected proposal lingers ussi wajah se tho they remember each other, jab kii unke gharwaale are looking for other matches.. but may be mani is guilty kii usne ladki ko bina jaane usse mana karr diya.. aur shayad akshaya even though does not sho it but has a sense of sadness in her heart because she actually liked manidhar's match... tho this shows that jaane anjaane mein both mani & akshaya have left a mark on each other lives... bhoomi is akshaya a tamilian... because chitappa is tamil right... i know that because i'am a tamilian.. but i did not know if akshaya is a tamilian... anyway coming back to the comment, well mani getting a proper look at akshaya, akshaya trying to avoid him... both being uncomfortable... hmmm... yeh sab dekhkar i can tell that un dono ke dilon mein toofan uth raha hai.... so as luck permits it there is no taxi & mani is willing to drop akshaya home.. ahhh.. that's a perfect gentleman... hmm.. so now a journey of akshaya with mani to her home.. a ride on the bike for 55 minutes.. & i'am sure this ride will change their lives forever.. & now after reading the second part i understand the significance of your fanfics title 'Two Wheels Made Us One', it is the bike ride & the two wheels of the bike which will get them together that too most probably in these 55 minutes of the ride...very nice bhoomi... well written....👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏bhoomi continue soon pleasee.. actually continue ASAP... can't wait to read more..😊

Edited by sun_423 - 15 years ago

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Sri

@RadiantTreasure

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Posted: 15 years ago

#26

Hey bhoomi..
Wowo..u updated fastly..u said u almost competed 75% but i didnt expected such a fast update..
Now..see this is what is said as destiny..two people who thought would never meet again after their proposal broke met n now they have to travel together..
This journey sure has lot of twists n turns in store for them n they are going to understand eachother well..not as they thought earlier..Akshaya n Manidhar has a long journey to go..lets see what happens..
waiting for next part..
Good wishes..
Sri:-)

Edited by sri_4 - 15 years ago

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

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Posted: 15 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: sun_423
bhoomi you know i was just thinking if you have updated Two Wheels Made Us One... & then when i refreshed the page i got your pm, about the update.... & i was so happy.. jaldi jaldi i came to this thread part padha aur ab i'am writing a comment for you... well dear that was a very nice part.. it was interesting indeed.. i was think akshaya & manidhar will meet at work or some where else but i did not know that they would meet in the auditorium in such circumstances.... but it was a nice way for the both of them to meet.. so as soon as akshaya sees mani she remembers him & knows that he is the guy who rejected her proposal.. & on the other hand manidhar realizes akshaya is the same girl whom they had rejected the proposal off.. naam sunnthe hii mani ko bhi yaad aagaya... well this indicates that though mani has rejected the proposal & though akshaya has accepted it, but still at the back of both their minds that rejected proposal lingers ussi wajah se tho they remember each other, jab kii unke gharwaale are looking for other matches.. but may be mani is guilty kii usne ladki ko bina jaane usse mana karr diya.. aur shayad akshaya even though does not sho it but has a sense of sadness in her heart because she actually liked manidhar's match... tho this shows that jaane anjaane mein both mani & akshaya have left a mark on each other lives... bhoomi is akshaya a tamilian... because chitappa is tamil right... i know that because i'am a tamilian.. but i did not know if akshaya is a tamilian... anyway coming back to the comment, well mani getting a proper look at akshaya, akshaya trying to avoid him... both being uncomfortable... hmmm... yeh sab dekhkar i can tell that un dono ke dilon mein toofan uth raha hai.... so as luck permits it there is no taxi & mani is willing to drop akshaya home.. ahhh.. that's a perfect gentleman... hmm.. so now a journey of akshaya with mani to her home.. a ride on the bike for 55 minutes.. & i'am sure this ride will change their lives forever.. & now after reading the second part i understand the significance of your fanfics title 'Two Wheels Made Us One', it is the bike ride & the two wheels of the bike which will get them together that too most probably in these 55 minutes of the ride...very nice bhoomi... well written....👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏bhoomi continue soon pleasee.. actually continue ASAP... can't wait to read more..😊

Hi Surya,

I am so glad to get ur reply so soon , pretty quick i must say. U wanted ot read the update of the story makes me feel so special.. and happy that u r enjoyign reading this story, though its in the initial stage.

Yup u had mentioned that they may meet at work but they didnt .. u like this concpet of meeting too na.. Yup Akshaya did like the proposal na..so she has his pic in mind. and somewhere also a bit confused why they rejected what made them, it happens na we tend to feel its not effectign and soemwhere deep down it remains in u somewhere.. and thats what happened here.. Yup Mani too recollected it..and so nice to see them together looking at each other in person now.. eheh U were saygin na sparks will fly when they will meet.. dekho inki mulakat aisi huee key inkey hosh gum hogaye..lol.

Yup Yup akshaya is tamil brahmin and daughter of head priest of a temple.. while Manidhar is a kannada brahmin here.. if u notice by the surname i have given him.. tried to have names which reflect their culture and religion so that u feel the charcters.. U r tamil .. ahh so chitappa r right name for uncle na.. I enjoy having little of the language of the charcters to be there .. readers know and feel the story more i feel..

so what u say Akshaya and Mani what will they feel in these 55 minutes.. and is it so easy to feel anything at such a time when her father is unwell.. it will sound very weird that her father is unwell and yehan pyaar ka chakkar ho.. to phir hoga kya??? hmm keep thinking and guessing..and hope u like the way the story unfolds later.. i seriously hope so.. U r such an amazing writer urself that i am nervous how u will react with the story progress but as u r my friend i know u will love me as lawyas.. and i am learning and enjoygin the introcpection how u do in ur comments of the story so far.. its so much fun to read and enjoy.. thansk for that.. lovely comments and u usually get their feeligns right.. :D

tc dear..
Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

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Posted: 15 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: charming.angel
wow bhoomi...thts just awesome dying to knw what happens next n tht too in mere 55 mins?? gosh its gonna b too interesting !! lovely 😊

Hi ,

I am so happy to tknow u have enjoyed reading the story so far though its in its startgin now.. and wonderign what will happen next.. am so nervous with the fact that whatever happens will u like it or not.. hope u do... will post next part soon.. hope u like and enjoy reading that too... thansk for ur lovely. comments..tc

bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: sri_4
Hey bhoomi..
Wowo..u updated fastly..u said u almost competed 75% but i didnt expected such a fast update..
Now..see this is what is said as destiny..two people who thought would never meet again after their proposal broke met n now they have to travel together..
This journey sure has lot of twists n turns in store for them n they are going to understand eachother well..not as they thought earlier..Akshaya n Manidhar has a long journey to go..lets see what happens..
waiting for next part..
Good wishes..
Sri:-)

Hi Sri,
dear u have seen me updating, i sometimes update 2-3 parts in a day.. usually such stories are short and they end pretty soon too. Here i am takgin my time somewher ei feel with update of 1 part that too how much ever short it is..and not more .. trygin to test the patience of my readers here..lol.. 75% story yaa i have written and rest i am writing now..so its like 80%story typed already..

Yup this is destiny and its not fictional somewhere we do wodner how we meet people whom we never thought we woudl meet at a point its so pretty impossible to have them along.. and thats what happen with these two.. Yes u r right they will know each other.. but here her fathr isnt well..so what can they talk..and why will they.. two mature people knwoign rejected proposal what will they speak and how can those talks be of importance makign a difference in their life.. lets see what happens..hope u enjoy the next part whcih i will post later..
tc
luvu and thanks for ur wishes..
Bhoomi

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: bhoomikauttam

Hi Surya,
I am so glad to get ur reply so soon , pretty quick i must say. U wanted ot read the update of the story makes me feel so special.. and happy that u r enjoyign reading this story, though its in the initial stage.

Yup u had mentioned that they may meet at work but they didnt .. u like this concpet of meeting too na.. Yup Akshaya did like the proposal na..so she has his pic in mind. and somewhere also a bit confused why they rejected what made them, it happens na we tend to feel its not effectign and soemwhere deep down it remains in u somewhere.. and thats what happened here.. Yup Mani too recollected it..and so nice to see them together looking at each other in person now.. eheh U were saygin na sparks will fly when they will meet.. dekho inki mulakat aisi huee key inkey hosh gum hogaye..lol.

Yup Yup akshaya is tamil brahmin and daughter of head priest of a temple.. while Manidhar is a kannada brahmin here.. if u notice by the surname i have given him.. tried to have names which reflect their culture and religion so that u feel the charcters.. U r tamil .. ahh so chitappa r right name for uncle na.. I enjoy having little of the language of the charcters to be there .. readers know and feel the story more i feel..

so what u say Akshaya and Mani what will they feel in these 55 minutes.. and is it so easy to feel anything at such a time when her father is unwell.. it will sound very weird that her father is unwell and yehan pyaar ka chakkar ho.. to phir hoga kya??? hmm keep thinking and guessing..and hope u like the way the story unfolds later.. i seriously hope so.. U r such an amazing writer urself that i am nervous how u will react with the story progress but as u r my friend i know u will love me as lawyas.. and i am learning and enjoygin the introcpection how u do in ur comments of the story so far.. its so much fun to read and enjoy.. thansk for that.. lovely comments and u usually get their feeligns right.. :D

tc dear..
Bhoomi

bhoomi dear yes i'am a tamilian.. & yes chitappa means uncle, chitappa means father's younger brother... yup it is a nice way to use the language of the characters involved as it adds more feel to it... well bhoomi as you said 55 minutes of the journey... ab yeh kya rang laayegi yeh tho dekhna hii padega... yaa as you said her father is unwell.. but i somewhere feel that may be during this journey of 55 minutes mani & akshaya will start talking, where may be akshaya will be very pareshaan for her dad aur yahaan mani akshaya ko hausla dega.. in these 55 minutes in some or the other way mani will know more about akshaya & mani will directly or indirectly become akshaya's support... this is what i think... & dear you are absolutely right you are my friend... & i will love you & your writing always... & your writing is really very good yaar... you need not be nervous about it.... you express things very damn well... & jahaan thak baat hai about me getting the feeling of the characters right, well because i'am a ff writer myself so when i read ff's i try to read it from the respective ff's writers perspective.. so being a ff writer helps to understand the feeling of the characters involved... ab jaldi se update karna...😊
love
Suri..🤗