' Two Wheels Made Us One' Part XVIII (story ends)

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Deepa

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Posted: 15 years ago

#31

nice part...................very awkward situation......................cont soon............thanks for the pm.................

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 15 years ago

#32

hey dear are u a tamilian?????????? asking coz u wrote chitappa.............even am a tamilian.................

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ssh57

@ssh57

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Posted: 15 years ago

#33

Hey Bhoomi,
Is Akshaya a Tamilian? That makes me happy. It is said 'well begun is half done' anf this story has really begun well. Love shardha

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jyothi

@jyothi_cool

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Posted: 15 years ago

#34

bhoomi awesome part feel bad 4 akshaya's situation cont soon

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

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Posted: 15 years ago

#35

di!

sabse pehle to i read ur reply and i am so touched by it! pata hai why i love non-serial based stories of urs? its because those introduced me to u and u are so close to my heart. di its ohk....i knew that it must be only by mistake that u forgot my name......and feelings can be felt without the need of saying it....and i know that u too love me! so don't feel bad.......coz i didn't...

now coming to the story.....

hmm.......so akshaya is after all meant for mani only!

awww........poor girl.....i am so scared of sitting on a bike and i never sat on one!

and the poetic lines always add sugar to the coffee.....i love them!

i could totally feel what akshaya was feeling......its so awkward na!

oh! so ab yeh journey ke through yeh log ek doosre ko janenge!

55 minutes!!!!!! wow di!

aapke paas itne ache ideas aate kahan se hain?

beautiful update and the feelings were so beautifully explained!

loved it toooooo0 much!

love u,

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seema mittal

@seemamittal

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Posted: 15 years ago

#36

Heyyyy bhoomi
Fab update yaar
She has to go with mani
Next update is gonna be amazing
Do continue soon

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439962

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Posted: 15 years ago

#37

This FF is really interesting
Loved the both parts

but second part was very sweet although an awkward situation 😳
loved each bit of it!!!

continue soon!!

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

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Posted: 15 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: sun_423

bhoomi dear yes i'am a tamilian.. & yes chitappa means uncle, chitappa means father's younger brother... yup it is a nice way to use the language of the characters involved as it adds more feel to it... well bhoomi as you said 55 minutes of the journey... ab yeh kya rang laayegi yeh tho dekhna hii padega... yaa as you said her father is unwell.. but i somewhere feel that may be during this journey of 55 minutes mani & akshaya will start talking, where may be akshaya will be very pareshaan for her dad aur yahaan mani akshaya ko hausla dega.. in these 55 minutes in some or the other way mani will know more about akshaya & mani will directly or indirectly become akshaya's support... this is what i think... & dear you are absolutely right you are my friend... & i will love you & your writing always... & your writing is really very good yaar... you need not be nervous about it.... you express things very damn well... & jahaan thak baat hai about me getting the feeling of the characters right, well because i'am a ff writer myself so when i read ff's i try to read it from the respective ff's writers perspective.. so being a ff writer helps to understand the feeling of the characters involved... ab jaldi se update karna...😊
love
Suri..🤗

HI Surya,

So nice to know baout ur thoughts.. and glad that u r enjoying.. yup ur perspective make me know my thoughts how well they are been expressed or not. and enjoy reading ur thoughts always..

to haan u r right now abotu the way they may well know..hmmm u feel he will become the support.. chalo lets see... waise i have thought to update the next part soon today itself for U.. hope u enjoy the next part.. dont know why i am nervous with this ff.. may be as am writign a non serial based ff after a lonn g time.. hope u enjoy..thansk for calming up that the ff is intersting and u r enjoying.. i wonder with less romance involved how readers enjoy or not with such simple situation s with only thoguths scenes progression..

luvu dear..tc

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

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Posted: 15 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: spvd
nice part...................very awkward situation......................cont soon............thanks for the pm.................

HI,

yup awkward situation..and so happy that u r enjoyign reading..hope u enjoy the next part as well..

Bhoomi

Originally posted by: spvd
hey dear are u a tamilian?????????? asking coz u wrote chitappa.............even am a tamilian.................

Hi ,

dear I am not a TAMilian but i enjoy having stories with diverse culture backgroudn and make it theirs.. Sorry pehley sey hi if any mistake in speelign happen.,ehhe but I do have knowledge of few words in tamil so used to my advantage here.. tc

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

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Posted: 15 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: ssh57
Hey Bhoomi,
Is Akshaya a Tamilian? That makes me happy. It is said 'well begun is half done' anf this story has really begun well. Love shardha

Hi Shardha,

Yes Akshaya is a Tamilian Brahmin.. and from a very religious background ..thats why Mani felt she may not be very braod minded and have modern outlook.. thats why rejection hapened.. chaloo that means u will happpy now.. happy ..me to full khsuh when my readers r smiling.. :D

aww .. dont know still nervous with every part..usually am not.. this nervous..but looks like the story progession is simple and kept that way.. wonderign how readers will take that..hope u all like it .. and not get bored..

love it when u all feel like reading the next part..and felt nice reading this part.. thansk for ur support Shardha..tc

Bhoomi

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool
bhoomi awesome part feel bad 4 akshaya's situation cont soon

HI Jyothi,

Glad dear u r enjoying reading this.. and yup she is in a tricky situation..hope she has good things to look forward.. hope u enjoy the next part..luvu tc

Bhoomi