' Two Wheels Made Us One' Part XVIII (story ends)

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: sun_423
bhoomi dear that was a awesome start.. very interesting... akshaya & manidhar are people you have the same kind of mind set.. they both are ambitious both want to word harder & achieve better... i some how kii ghoom phirkar the baat will come to un dono ke rishthe kii baat... may be now they will meet & fall in love.. may be akshaya & manidhar will meet for work & get attached to each other... but i still feel that ,manidhar ke gharwaalon ne jaldbaazi mein akshaya ke rishthe ko mana kar diya.. it is just that they had prejudice about the girl & the family.. i think they should have atleast given it some thought & atleast met akshaya & her parents once to know better about them.. well anyway i'am sure manidhar & akshaya will surely meet & sparks will fly.... nice start.. i like the concept... i anyway like your writing always bhoomi.. you know that right.. enjoyed reading the part... keep it up....👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 please bhoomi jaldi se continue karna...waiting for the next part eagerly... 😊

Hi Surya,

Oh i am so happy to see ur comments.. feels so much special to have a talented writer to read my story. awesome is for u to read and comment on my work that too so quick.. am feeling so happy with it dear. Yup u have understood both of them so nicely and aptly.. now u will have to wait and read in the next part how they meet.. yup they will meet in what situation and whats goign to happen is to be read.

U know u r so right abotu the prejudice but who knows it was his family or he himself feelgin liek that and so he must have told hsi parents he cant see a life partner in her.

Surya i am so happy that u liked the concept of the story and found it interesting. Hope u feel the next part ot be more better and nice to read and enjoy it. Much of the story is ready in hand..so will post the next part tomorrow and give u all some time to perceive how the next part can be ..how the story may unfold.

thanks a lot for ur coments, ur reply made me smile and so happy to get in touch with u dear. luv u tc

Bhoomi

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seema mittal

@seemamittal

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

Heyyyyyy bhoomi
Awsome start
Loved akshayas character n her name too
Manidhar rejected her on their assumption she is a non ambitious gal
Well waiting for ur next part
Continue soon

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#13

di aapke first post mein mera naam nahi hai 😭

but i loved the first part!

so beautiful!

i loved the way u described akshaya's interests!

thank God us[par rejection ka koi asar nahi hua varna this society!

awesome update!

do update soon....i always love non- serial based stories!

love,
Mahak

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: sakura_mayur
Heyyyyyy bhoomi
Awsome start
Loved akshayas character n her name too
Manidhar rejected her on their assumption she is a non ambitious gal
Well waiting for ur next part
Continue soon

Hi Seema,

Glad dear u r reading and liked the start hope u enjoy the next part more and happy u like the anmes i have given to the charcters.. yup u r right he rejected her thinking she is not as ambitious as he belive he is and can relate to such a partner.. yup next part will be coming soon hope u enjoy that..

Bhoomi

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jyothi

@jyothi_cool

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Posted: 15 years ago

#15

wow lovely fic bhoomi really interesting

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur
di aapke first post mein mera naam nahi hai 😭

but i loved the first part!

so beautiful!

i loved the way u described akshaya's interests!

thank God us[par rejection ka koi asar nahi hua varna this society!

awesome update!

do update soon....i always love non- serial based stories!

love,
Mahak

Hi Mahak,

SORYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY yaar, belive me and u will u know i love u .. maine type twice kiya and felt i have already .. aisa laga ur name is there and end mey dekho i had to forget ur name jisko maine bhool hi nahi sakti at all..u have given me a new energy to write ff how can I ..neverrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr.. yeh to destiny ka khel hai to make us know how much we love each other.. I get an opportunity to let u know i really am so touched by u everytime that u have a special palce in my heart and in my life ofcourse .. luvu and u r special in ur very special way for me.. rona matt woh assu meri wajah sey .. iska dard to mujhey horahahai.. but i will do somethign to make u smile.. yup soon.. abhi ke liye yeh 5 star choclate khaoo and have the aamras..aampapad..and the aamjuice by this aam ladki jisko tumney apney pyaar sey kitna khaas banaye rakha..luvu ..

now coming to story ..glad u read waitign for ur comments for sure..and it came.. ya i wanted to brign out Akshaya nature here which is needed to understnad her way at looking things ahead in the story.. thats why rejection ka asar nahi huaa as she has so much in her to prove and she knows she doesnt think this is for the reason that she is not somethign but she is a lot but not what hhe was lookign for.. she is mature neough in that respct..

yup willl update dear soon.. luvu hugs ur way..and This story is urs.. u told me and i am continuign this story which was kept pending even before i had written any of the MayUr ff.. feels good to hjave ur take on these ..

luvu dear.. and sorry if i hurt u in any whcih way.. u r my friend and know i love u :D keep smiling..u rock already ..

luvu always..MAHAK>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool
wow lovely fic bhoomi really interesting

HI Jyothi dear,

so good to get ur comments.. u have been reading my ff from teh time i had started writing such ff non serial based.. so good to see urencoruaging reply to me conitnuing..thanks for all that..and glad u liked this sotry and felt its interestign to read furthur..

luv u

Bhoomi

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ShwePoo

@ShwePoo

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#18

Hiii....

Awesome concept... Perfect and Unique as always.... !!
Loved the title 'Two Wheels Made Us One'!!
I started reading non - serial based stories only because of your amazing writing...!!
Pls continue soon....
Will be waiting to read further...

- Pooja