Teri meri yeh zindagi || sajan ff|| prt 6 pg 59

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: lucario
wait karne ke vajay kar bhi kya sakate hai...lolzzzz

apna ff update lolz... 😉

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jaldi cont kar! 😛 m getting impatient!!!!!!

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Originally posted by: pragya_luvsajan
apna ff update lolz... 😉

unhone toh kardiya ab toh tujhe update karna hai samjhi! 😛

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jaldi cont kar! 😛 m getting impatient!!!!!!

u will get that today.. chill... 😊

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Originally posted by: pragya_luvsajan
apna ff update lolz... 😉

bola naa... aaj mil jayega pukka... 😊

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#88

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PART 1

hey guys i am here with part 1 but before that.. let me tell u that the starting but mIght be confusing but buy the end of this part things will be clear to u.... hope u enjoy...

In a room
nupur and gunjan are having a coversation
N: kya hua gunjan? ais kya baat hai ki aaj ke din woh tere paas nahi... tumhare liye aaj itne special din hai.. aur woh tere jisse tu itna pyaar karti hai tumhare saath nahi.. kya hua gunjan mujhe jawab de? gunjan sighed and sat at her dressing table...looking a bit dull staring at nupur....
gunjan hid her hand from her... and nupur understod that she was hiding it because of some reaoson...
N: gunjan kya bata hai tu mujhe bateyegi,, main aisi kaise samjhoongi.... ek min pehle tu mujhe apna hath dikha...
G: woh.. woh
N: maine kaha apna haath dikha gunjan...
after looking at her hand.. nupur was shocked..
N: yeh kya gunjan... teri......... gunjan teri aangoothi kaha hai?
G: maine hamari sagai tor di?
N: kya?
G: ha.. main aur karti bhi kya?
N: par kyun? aur is baat se usse koi aitraaz nahi hai..
G: maine yeh sagai tor ke.. koi shabahshi ka kaam nahi kiya.. woh... NEIL.. kaam se har waqt bahar hi rehta hai... tum toh jaanti hon.. usee mere liye time hai hi nahi... maine usesee eek leter bheja aur uski angoothi bhi waas kar di... mujh nahi lagta ki hum kabhi ek....
N: par gunjan iska koi toh wajah hoga.. tu toh janti hai uska kaam hi aisa hai ki use bahar jana parta hai..
G: sirf bahar jaane ki baat nahi hai nupur.... main usse pyaar karti thi.. usse shaadi karna chahti thi.. par jab bhi main usse is bare main baat karti woh... kuch na kuch keh ke tal deta...( she was crying crying and crying)
nupur just went and hugged...
N: gunjan tu mat ro.. aj kedin mat roo.. aj tera birthday hai.... aur....please gunjan..
braking the hug
: neil terelioye sahi larj tha hi nahi...maine kitne baar kaha tha... maine mayank ko bhi kitne bara kaha tha.. mujhe woh neil e ktuk nahi suhata tha.... khair yeh ab chodo.. neche chal sab tera wait kar rahe honge..
Gunjan nodding her head.. she wiped her face.... made her face and everyting alright
G: nupur main theek lag rahi hoon
N: bilkul pari ki tarah
gunjan smiled half heartedly..
while walking on the stair...
N: gunjan
G: hmmm..
N: sorry
G: isleye
N: woh abhi tere saath yeh sab hua aur humne oarty rakhi..
G: arrey isme sorry bolni ki koi baat nahi hai.... tumne aur mayank ne ye mere liye hi toh kiya hai... tum dono ki siwa mere aur hai hi kaun...
nupur smiled...
N: hmm yeh bhi hai... as it is hum nahi chahte the ki ti jaa ke din akele rahe... aur tu toh mayank ko janti hai usee sirf party karn ka mauka chahiye..
both smiled..
N: aur ha.. yeh lkoi bahut bari party bhi nahi di hai.. simple and sweet bilkul teri tarah... aur mayank ne apne ek business colleague ko bhi bulaya hai... par paat nahi woh nahi aa paaya... mayank ne bataya ke uska koi accidnet ho gaya tha... aur uskepair main dard hai hai and all..
G: oh.. well woh the kaun
N: umm.... koi SAMRAT SHERGILL...
G( in a low voice) : samrat shergill?
N: ha kyun? tu usse janti hai?
G nahi toh woh bas asehi...magar aisa lagt ahai ki maine yeh naam kahi suna hai.. pata nahi kaha?ho sakta suna main itni ghar jo jaate rehti hoon
N: sahi kahan..tu ek jagah toh rehti hi nahi ek gahr se dusre ghar .. kash tere paas.........
G: khud ka ghar hota...
N: nahi mera matlab
G: koi bata nahi nupur main samjh sakti hoon..
just then mayank came between them
M: hey gunji.. HAPPY BIRTHDAY (hugging her)
G: thanku
M: neecha chalo sab tera wait kar rahe hai...
they go downstairs...
gunjan keeping her mind away from neil... talking to her frnds and all..
after some time...
gunjan was talking o her frend when nupur came...
N: gunji.. tujhe pata hia.. kaun ayya hia... ?
G: kaun?
N: guess toh kar?
G: mujhe kaise pata chalega.. tu hi bata...
N: mera bhai nikhil aaaya hai..
G: kya nilkhil... at last to meet the mystery man good..
N: ha pata hai.. woh koi trip pe jayega.. to woh sicha yahn se hote huye jayega... kitna acha hua na jki woh aaj ke din yahan agaya..
G: hm. yeh toh bahut acha hai..
N: chal usse mila ti hoon
G: chal..
nupur takes her to nikhil..
N: nick yeh hai gunji..
N: gunji yeh hai nick
Ni: hii.. and happy birthday..
G: thnks...
G: well maine tumahre baare main nupur se bahut suna hai
Ni: wow thats great... di tu toh mujhe famous karke hi chodogi..
N: chupkar...
challo kahi beth ke baat karte hai
they go and have a seat
G:o tum zyada tar baahr rehta ho?
Ni: ya.. but agar mujh pata hota ki itne saalon se main kya miss kar raha hionn toh kabhi nahi jata( indicating towards gunjan)
N: nick stop flirting... gunji tu iske baat ka rbura mat mana ye.. aisa hi hai...
everyone smiles
mayank comes
M: so yahan kya chal raha hai.. sees nikhil.. hi nick.. tum yahn kab aye. nyc seeing u after long
Nikhil and mayank hug
Ni: same here jiju...
N:mayank mujhe kam tha mere madad karo.. tabtak nick tu gunji ka khayal rakh and dare u irritate her...
Ni: okay.. ab main apni di ka baat nahi manu aisa nahi ho sakta na..
nickhil and gunjan were sititng and chatting( okay guys note that i could have edit this but its necessary because u guys gotta know abt gunjan so read further to know. her and the next convo is very imp... so here i go.. u might find it a lil lame and weird but u ll come to know reason later...)
Ni: Pisces?
G: huh?
N: ur zodiac sign.. iys ur birthady today. march.. so...
G:oh yaa..
N: well agar mujhe nahi bhi pata hota ki tumharabirthady hai.. main guess kar leta ki ur a pisces...
G: how cum ?
N: u r so meticulous and neat thats y?
G: u believe in astrology?
N: sort off.
G: never thought a person like u would be believing in it...
N: i know.. everyone says so. well mujhe pehle interest nahi tha.. but paat nahi ka b kaise,, i found it interesting and talking abt all this is aa gr8 pass time.. u observe ppl and guess. its good...
G: well i really dont believe i it that much but ya sometime do read those silly little corners in the newspapers...
N: u wont believe but most of the [pl who i have met have the characters of their zodiac sign....
G: really? so wats ur sign?
N: guess..
G: um... i cant
N: try..
after thinking for some time...
G: Gemini?..
N: bingo... versatile impulsive and totally brilliiant... thats me.... !!! (with a grin)
gunajn smiled
N: well u know a lot abt me and my work.. but i dnt so wat u do...
G: well.. main jo kaam karti hoon .. woh thora ajeeb hai... actually i like to do social work so i am like a itinerant housekeeper... atleast thats what i put on forms.
N: but u and housekeeper. doesnt go well
just then mayank comes
M: because she isnt a house keeper. she is a social worker.. i can tell u she is expremely talented.. good at cooking house keeping cooking everything... and ya a good florist too....
gunjan smiled..

guys thats it for now.. i know it was boring.. but this was needed
next part
a bit more on the convo
and sajan first meet...
and soryy it was a lame part but needed.. u will come to know. do comment and click the like button...

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palak

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Posted: 15 years ago

#90

oh yea... mine is d first comment!!!
nice part dear...
gunjan aur neil ki sagaai tut gai.. feel sad 4 gunjan bt yeh na hota toh samrat se kaise milti.. 😉
nikhil n astrology?? sounds great!!
bt very short part dear..
nyways eagerly waitin 4 ur next update..
luv,
palak <3

Edited by pluks - 15 years ago