~~~Feeling~~~ (SK+LRL ff) prt73 pg128 last prt - Page 89

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Posted: 15 years ago
how sweet sujal is calling kashish everyday
woww yaar too good
cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
neelu dear ye kya no romance at all???????????? but the part was nice...............both have resumed their duties..................and sujal is too much missing his deary wife......................chirag is under sujal's command...................wonder how their relation is now...................cont soon dear...................
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Posted: 15 years ago
sujal is so sweet he ia mad ab kashish
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice update neelu. sujal is so sweet
thnx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow neelu awesome part loved it cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
ohh yeh kya aik tou tumne hawa k ghore pe shaadi kara dali unki now they are so far from each other and that chirag is also thee wid sujal i hope pyaar k ache pal saath bitane se pehel koi prb na khadi ho jaye bass
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Posted: 15 years ago

part 72

Sujal disconnects kashish's phone & looks towards chirag

s-haan..tell me.

Ch-kashish..huh ! [he comments sarcastically]

s-haan teri kashish bhabhi ka phone tha

ch-teri wajah se usne mujse sagai todi naa..why did you do this to me?

s-main bhi ye keh sakta hoon..why did you do this to me..when you knew we loved each other

ch-I liked her,,,u were not ready to accept her..but you..dhoke se une.

s-koi dhoka nahi kiya hai maine..she loved me..she was just an attractive girl for you..but she was my love..ok..get over it..she wouldn't have benn happy with you

sujal pats chirag's back & sujal leaves.

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Days were passing for her.

Sujal has told her the other day that he would be busy for couple of days so he would not call.

Kashish had just taken her class & was collecting her things to walk out of her empty lecture room with her back facing the door.

A familiar touch touches her & the strong arms are wrapped around her waist.

She turns to see her husbands face in front of her & his intense eyes gazing her.

She is more than surprised & overwhelmed to see him.

k-tum?

He starts singing.

s-happy birthday to you..happy birthday to you..happy birthday to my beautiful kashish..happy birthday to you.

She has a big ear to ear grin on her face..she had herself forgotten about her birthday.

k-ohhhhhh'.tum itni durr se aaye

He opens his fist to produce a beautiful gold chain for her.

s-this is for you

he hooks it gently around her neck.

k-its beautiful.

He looks into her eyes.

She puts her arams around his neck affectionately, while he gently moves his arms on her waist.

They gently put their lips on each other's lips & it turns into a kiss as their lips touch.

She cannot hide her happiness seeing her husband in front of her.

She cannot even help herself from blushing like a bride whenever she looks at him.

She looks down & starts playing with the button of his shirt.

k-kya zarurath thi mere lie itne durr se aane ki?

s-kya karta'aana hi tha..tumhara birthday jo tha naa

k-aaye ho to..abhi ho naa yahan

s-nahi'nahi ruk sakta..aaj raat ko jaana hai

kashish's eyes fill with sadness.

s-hey'[he caresses his cheeks lovingly]'you know I have to..kaam hai naa..duty hai naa

k-hmm..

s-tumhari class hai abhi?

k-hmm..Naina ke batch ki

s-ok..you take your class tab tak main bhi freshen up ho jaata hoon.

k-ok..ye lo room ki chaabi..aur apne kapde washing machine mein daal dena..aur apna towel'

s-towel? Towel kaun laaya hai? I am using your towel !

k-what? Usko sukha dena..

s-ok ok

he goes.

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He is on the way to the staff quaters.

When he hears a female voice.

'jijjjjjjjjjsssssssssssssssss !!!!!!!!!!!!'

He turns to see Naina grinning in front of him.

n-hi jijjssssssss !

s-emm..hello'[he is feeling a bit awkward hearing 'jiju' from someone]..how are you?

n-i am good. Aap yahan kaise???? Kaise ho aap?????? I am so excited to see you..i am you are now my jiju naa.

s-hmm..thanks'tumhari class thi naa abhi..she was telling me'

n-class? Wo to bunk hai..ab aap aa gaye naa kahe ki class? She should spend some time with you..islie humne puri class ne saath mein buk kar lia..mass bunk hai

s-oh..[he raises an eyebrow, thinking ab uske jaane ke baas kma mein mass bunk bhi hone lage]

n-waise hum sabne aaj dinner ka plan banaya hai..app logon ki shaadi hui kuch party hi nahi hui yahan'

naina looks at something & hides

n-arre baap re didi humein dhundti hue idhar hi aa rahi hai, main bhaagti hoon, bye

she goes

kashish comes to sujal.

k-sujal tumne students ko dekha kya? Meri class hai aur koi aaya hi nahi

s-haan everybody is on mass bunk I heard.

k-what?

s-look there

he points at the direction where naina went

kashish goes to search there & sujal enters kashish's room to freshen up.

Edited by storywriter - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely update neelu. loved sk scenes very much
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Posted: 15 years ago
ohh how cute the part was he came from so far just to clebrate her birthday wow pati ho tou aisa kya baat hai and i liked teh way he surprized her and there sweet talk and i wish they'll surely have soem personal time 2gether as he will leave at night na do cont with a mosttttttttt romantic part 😉was waiting for the part btw how are u??ok na?
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hehe...nice update yaar....Sujal ne achha sunaya Chirag ko....hope he has got wat he said....and it was so sweet to see Sujal there in KMA for Kashish's bday....very nice! Sujal-Naina's convo was interesting....'jiju'...hehe.....and yeah....mass bunk....sounds alluring.....hehe.
Pls continue soon dear....and thanks for updating....I was kinda w8ing for this part!!

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