~~~Feeling~~~ (SK+LRL ff) prt73 pg128 last prt - Page 90

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Posted: 15 years ago
Nice part
ARe yeh Raj bhi na...shaadi ke baad itni jaldi Kashish ko chod kar apne mission par lag gaya.
Kashish is overjoyed to see Sujal there on her birthday...she loves her husband.
Naina is the best 'saali', who janti hai ki uske didi aur jiju kuch karenge nahi iss liye mass bunk karva diya...so that they could be together.
please continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
Dear love u all jo aap logo ne part 71 mein dhaasuu comments die hain, uski jitni tareef karu kaam hai. every reader has given marvelous comments..i cant be biased to only one reader..specially puri ne to kamal kar diya..every body was just muaaaaaaahhhhh !!!!!!!! thanks a lot for showing concern abt my health..i am fine now...thankuuuuuuuuuuu !!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: storywriter

Dear love u all jo aap logo ne part 71 mein dhaasuu comments die hain, uski jitni tareef karu kaam hai. every reader has given marvelous comments..i cant be biased to only one reader..specially puri ne to kamal kar diya..every body was just muaaaaaaahhhhh !!!!!!!! thanks a lot for showing concern abt my health..i am fine now...thankuuuuuuuuuuu !!!!!!

no prbs dear and get well soon and keep updating 😳😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow sk make me happy every time awesome part thx for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow really very lovely dear.................sujal came to be with his wife on her birthday.......................how sweet................and liked the way naina screamed jijssssssssssssss.............maas bunk very good.........sujal ek kaam karo cadets bohut bhigad rahe hai so come back to KMA.....faida hi faida hai tumhare liye.....................cant wait to read more................cont soon....................
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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely part 👏👏👏👏............... so sweet of sujal to come all the way from LEH to wish his lovely wife 😃😃😃.............

😲 😲 😲😲..........mass bunk 😉😉😉😉............... so thoughtful of cadets 😆😆😆😆.....& dinner party too 😃😃😃.....

hoping SK really get time to spend with each other .... 😉😉😉😉....afterall meeting after long time........ so all the best to both of them 😃😃😃

continue soon...... 😃😃😃
Edited by Puri_2711 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely parts..... sk scenes are good......kash ki birthday sujal aagaya....sara class bunk kiya they think they should give some to sk
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Posted: 15 years ago

hi😊

neelu

the up is sweet and nice 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃

toh chiraag is now showing grudges over sujal😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡 he is blaming sujal that for him kashish broke the engagement😡😡😡😡😡 par sujal ne aacha jabab de diya 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
now kashish ke birth day celebrate karne ke liye sujal kma aaya haai how sweet 😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😳😳😳😳😳😳
he is really nice😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
aur yeh cadets bhi ab party arrange kar rahe haai kashish aur sujal ke liye 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
ab dekhte haai kya hota haai
plz cont soon aur haan thora romance dekhane ke liye bohot bohot sukriya neelu jee
ab aage plz sujal aur kashish ke beech mein romance zarur dekhana me waiting for it 😊
plz cont soon and do pm me 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely parts dear. part 71:well u somehow unintentionally showed the life of army people.'the way they hav to left their family for their country' .they gave their everythg for us.same is happening wit s-k.thy have to live apart frm each other for their country's sake.i want to salute u for this as through this fic. i'm realising their situation a little bit.salute to army persons too ..
part:72 well its really nice of s-k to cum for her b'day..waiting for nex part ...pls cont soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago

part 73

Kashish comes back after taking her class.

She knocks at the door of her room.

She knocks again as nobody opens the door.

'whos there?'

He hears her husband's voice ask from the other side.

k-arre main hoon

s-oh tum..darling wait a second I am in the bathroom.

k-jaldi kholo tum

s-just a sec

he opens the door in a towel & water is dripping from his body.

s-jaldi aao.

She shuts the door.

She is looking at him as he is trying to tie his threatening to fall towel & the water dripping from his body & sticking on his tanned body.

His toned body , abs & biceps are fully in display with that alluring water sticking to it.

She is literally ogling at him, he glances at her.

s-what?

She chooses not to answer him , she jumps on him & smooches him as hard as she could , climbing on him.

He is is pleasantly surprised to see this wilder side of his wife.

If he was wet then she was wild

The wet & wild combo was rising the heat.

The reach their destination while kissing each other..that is ..the bed.

Kashish had pulled his towel down long back & pulled a sheet.

He pulls open the rubber on her hair, letting them fall loose on him.

He opens the buttons of her shirt to expose her delicate milky skin, so that he can shower her with kisses.

He takes off her belt & unhooks her skirt, eploring her tiny waist profoundly.

He glides down to pull off her sock & ballies.

He rools over so she is on top of him & her beautiful tresses are covering his face.

She plants a juicy kiss on the hollow of his cheek while caressing his other cheek with her hand.

He knows he has to take care of the fact that she is wearing the chudas, because his one mistake can make the chuda to break & pierce into her skin.

He knows how delicate his beloved wife is, even more delicate than a flower.

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Both had just started to drift ib sleep after a passion filled love making session.

The door knocks.

k-eh..sujal..kholo naa…

s-tum kholo naa…

k-main nahi khol sakti tum kholo

s-why?..open it

k-i am not wearing anything..go wear your pants & open it.

Sujal gets up & wears his pants & opens the door.

Student gang is standing in front of him

s-what?

Naina-sir wo…party..hum sab ready hain..bahar dinner ke lie jaana hai..humne kaha tha mam se class mein

s-emm..nahi..not now…she will take you tomorrow.

He shuts the door abrubtly & jumps onto the bed to her beloved wife's arm.

k-kaun tha?

s-students..tumhe wo students ko aaj dinner ke lie kehne ki kya zarurat thi?

k-maine kuch nahi kaha…wo zidd karne lage

s-thik hai..doesnt matter..we are gonna spend every moment together

he nuzzles to her more.

She kisses his forehead.

s-waise diner se yaad hai…I am hungry..kuch nahi khaya.

k-ohhhhh..i will make you something

s-great…tumne waise bhi isse pehle mere lie kuch nahi banaya naa.

k-ok..i will quickly make you something

she gets up.

s-cool…tab tak main principal se milke aata hoon.

He goes

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He comes back from the principal's office & knocks at the door.

She opens the door glowing in a red satin nightie with her hair let loose.

k-come

she welcomes him with a big smile.

He enters.

The room is decorated nicely with scented red candles.

Table has a red table cloth with a candle lit on it.

s-wow !

k-like it?

s-offcourse..why did you?

k-why couldn't i? huh? Sit.

Sujal sits on the chair & she keeps a plate of delicilous looking pasta for him to eat.

Sujal was actually very hungry, jaldi jaldi sab khaa leta hai.

Kashish is happy to see the contentment on his face.

s-out of the world food

k-thanks dear

she bigs a big sweet smile to him.

k-now…what will you have for desert, dear?

s-wow..you have that too.

Kashish brings some strawberries & cream.

Sujal picks one & starts eating.

k-ahun…aise nahi.

She take some cream & puts on her pinkish skin & puts the strawberry on it.

k-the food is served

s-great…I love your style.

He licks the cream off her skin & kisses her nicely on that area.

They have another round of love making for another hour.

Sujal gets up from the bed after a while.

He starts to pack his bag.

Kashish ki bhi neend khul jaati hai sujal ko saath mein naa dekh kar.

She sees sujal packing his bag.

She gets up quickly & hugs him tightly.

k-oh sujal !

he hugs her back & pats her getnly to reassure her.

s-jaana to padega naa jaan. U know naa

k-hmm…kyun…mujhe chodke mat jao

s-shhh aisa nahi kehta..humne kya decide kiya tha…tum mujhe kabhi apne farz se nahi rokogi

k-hmm…

s-don't worry naa…I am trying naa…bohot jaldi tumhe bhi bula lunga

k-i understand..dont worry about me…

s-hmm..tumhare paas bhi to yahan bohot kaam hai naa

k-haan jab tak ritu pregnant hai.

s-hmm…waise ..we should also think about a bay naa

she hits him lightly on his shoulder.

k-nahi naa ! itni jaldi nahi naa

s-achcha baba, jab tum kaho. Chalo darling I will leave now

he hugs her

k-take care of yourself.

s-bye

k-bye bye…love you

s-love you too

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~~~Epilogue~~~

It's a beautiful valley of jammu surrounded by pine trees.

There is lavish cottage near the river.

A beautiful 9-month old baby is sleeping on the cot.

The mother in a maron satin saree picks the baby up.

'kashiiiiiiiiishhhhhh'

A manly voice calls her.

She carries her baby & walks to him.

k-haan sujal bolo

he turns , fully dressed in his armu uniform

his badge shining with his name.

'Major Sujal Garewal'

s-main chalta hoon ok

he kisses the baby

k-ok bye..shaam ko jaldi aana.

s-bye honey.

He gives a kiss on her lips & walks out of their house & she waves him good bye happily.

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~~~THE END~~~

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