A new ff on Siddhima-Kaise Batau (Teaser page 9)

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mabel

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Posted: 15 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: romiosugar

You better write sooner than later as I am eagerly waiting for it....LOL
No rush dear, take your time but do write more as you have the ability to express very beautifully. I really enjoyed reading your post. God bless you!!

thnx a lot 4 de appreciation....it means a lot...it acts as a confidence booster... heheehe....i understand ur impatience...as a ff- reader...even i m very impatient....cant wait one bit 4 de next part 2 b updated...i wanted 2 update 2de...but didnt get the time 2 do so...i m stuck with my books...hav an exam 2mrw...so will most probably update 2mrw

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mabel

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Posted: 15 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: chown001
love love loved it!!!!!!!!!
you have to continue cause it actually brought tears to my eyes.

i can even see him actually saying it

it was beautiful and please continue soon

thnx sweety...i m glad it conveyed de emotions i wanted it 2...

i will continue as soon as possible...most probably on monday😊

Originally posted by: kiran255
very nice dear
love it
plz continue soon !

thnx kiran darlin....i will b updating soon

Originally posted by: SUPRATIMlvJERAN
arre pls pls pls continue yaar...................................kab tak wait karna padega????????????????????????

i understand ur impatience darlin...i m actually busy wid exams...i hav 1 2mrw...so will update after dat...i hope it will b worth the wait

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mabel

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Posted: 15 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: ...Noorya...
OMGGGGG...

that was just sooooo amazing dear😛...

ufffff full of emotions...WONDERFUL...i dont even have words to express my feelings yaar!

u are a fabulous writter..gosh i was crying while reading it

truly beautiful😭👏👍🏼...

gosh im eagerly waitin for the next part...plzzzz update it soon😳

God Bless,

Noorya

thnk u soo much noorya darlin...

i m glad that de emotions i wanted 2 express throu my writin was well recieved by u😳

i will update soon

Wow mabel! Great concept, I loved the "but you know what" line simply because it is such a Sid trait! =D

Otherwise, flawless writing, captured the character's feelings, emotions perfectly...I could imagine every word being said and the way in which it was being said!

Great work, can't wait to read more! Xx

thnx sweety...

u caught me dere....i purposely put dat "but u knw wat"...bcoz its sooo sid like😉

hehehe....thnx a lot 4 de appreciation...it means a lot 2 me....

n i m a big fan of ur writin...so when it comes from u...i m deeply touched😳

woooooooooooooo!!!! awesome!! u r making sid do sumthing that the cvs have failed to do... u r making him open his heart out to ridhima.. cant wait to know what else sid has to say.. hopefuly ridhima will also open her heart!!!

loved ur work!! please continue!

i hope de cvs do dat yaar....its high time!!!...

i hope my next part will stand up 2 ur expectations...

thnk u sooo much 4 ur comments

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Stark_Wolf

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Posted: 15 years ago

#34

😆Really a nice ff on Sidma.....

pls make it Romantic.......

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mabel

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Posted: 15 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: lazzz
😆Really a nice ff on Sidma.....
pls make it Romantic.......

thnx darlin....will try to...

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mabel

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Posted: 15 years ago

#36

Teaser

Kaise batau...

Part 2-He wants me too

Sid: ...mein tumse door nahi hoona chahta tha...vo khayal bhi mere dil ko aur dard de rahi thi...lekin mein tumhari khushiyon ke beech kaise aa sakta tha...

Riddhima: tum ye divorce chahte hi nahi the...