A new ff on Siddhima-Kaise Batau (Teaser page 9)

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Naima K Ahmad

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Posted: 15 years ago

#21

OMG this was awesomelly expressed!! 😊 I totally loved it to the core. Pleaseeeeeeee Continue!! i'm eagerly waiting for the next part! 😳

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mabel

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Posted: 15 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: romiosugar
Aww...awesome post. Beautifully written down and very expressive. I can't wait to have a next one. Hope, you gonna continue!! Keep it up!!

thnk u soo much sweety....yes i will be continuing...though i dont know when...

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mabel

@mabel

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Posted: 15 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: bengiangel2k8
OMG this was awesomelly expressed!! 😊 I totally loved it to the core. Pleaseeeeeeee Continue!! i'm eagerly waiting for the next part! 😳

thnk u sooo much sweetheart...i will surely continue...n will try 2 update as soon as possible

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Sabz

@romiosugar1

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Posted: 15 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: mabel
thnk u soo much sweety....yes i will be continuing...though i dont know when...

You better write sooner than later as I am eagerly waiting for it....LOL
No rush dear, take your time but do write more as you have the ability to express very beautifully. I really enjoyed reading your post. God bless you!!

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noorya

@...Noorya...

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Posted: 15 years ago

#25

OMGGGGG...

that was just sooooo amazing dear😛...

ufffff full of emotions...WONDERFUL...i dont even have words to express my feelings yaar!

u are a fabulous writter..gosh i was crying while reading it

truly beautiful😭👏👍🏼...

gosh im eagerly waitin for the next part...plzzzz update it soon😳

God Bless,

Noorya

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nm21

@nm21

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Posted: 15 years ago

#26

Wow mabel! Great concept, I loved the "but you know what" line simply because it is such a Sid trait! =D

Otherwise, flawless writing, captured the character's feelings, emotions perfectly...I could imagine every word being said and the way in which it was being said!

Great work, can't wait to read more! Xx

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Maha_Sid-dewani

@Maha_Sid-dewani

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Posted: 15 years ago

#27

woooooooooooooo!!!! awesome!! u r making sid do sumthing that the cvs have failed to do... u r making him open his heart out to ridhima.. cant wait to know what else sid has to say.. hopefuly ridhima will also open her heart!!!

loved ur work!! please continue!