MayUr FF: Rishtey Part 13 @ Page 143

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Shivani

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Posted: 15 years ago

#161

wow

new concept and nice updates

deckte hai aage kya hoga

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seema mittal

@seemamittal

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Posted: 15 years ago

#162

Heyyyy daksha
Amazing part yaar
Nupur is so innocent yaar
Do continue soon
N thanx for pm

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Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#163

Amaziinnngggg part dear...
You are too good...
Poor Nupsi....
Cont soon..
Thnnxxx for PM...
And I'm really liking Samrat in this FF...😳

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wind453

@wind453

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Posted: 15 years ago

#164

fantastic update

so nupur's hard days have started

i want mayank to learn to respect nupur

it was fabulous update

thanx for the pm

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kirti123

@kirti123

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#165

nice update enjoyed reading it as always
thanks for the pm
😊

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PRACHI GOYAL

@prachi06

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#166

That was really awesome
Thanx for pm
Do continue soon

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anju011

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Posted: 15 years ago

#167

awesome update daksha.
how weirdly is he behaving with nupur
how sweet & innocent is nupur. can't imagine nupur's situation when she comes to know abt the truth.
continue soon.

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

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Posted: 15 years ago

#168

yeh mayank aur samrat gaye kahan the?

yup i know the fact.......for a girl her husband is everything!

so mayank was drunk!

i hate men who drink......u know that na?

yaar i am damn blushing!

kitna romantic tha!

but it wasn't love but lust!

mayank is so rough like!

nupur is so sweet yaar!

woh abhi uske liya khana banayegi!

aur woh sirf alcohol peeta hai kya?

wow! so woh samrat ko bhi bula leta hai.........nupur is a servant aur what?

nupur ki uski life mein koi value nahi hai kya? dumb!

kitna sach hai yaar yeh!

ek oatni apne pati ke two words of praises sun kar bhi khush ho jaati hai.....even when she gets more compliment from others.........but those two words are more important to her!

beautiful update!

mayank kahan gaya?

but u made me blush deep!

and i need to write more romantic than this......u know abt the bet and all!

loved the update yaar

love nupur and dislike mayank!

jaldi continue karo!

love,
Mahak

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 15 years ago

#169

nice, lovely part.
continue soon.
thanks for the pm dear.

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shweta

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Posted: 15 years ago

#170

Daksha🤗....u don't worry ....u write superb dear....n i loved this part too.😳...o god...poor nupur, usne mayank k saath hardly kuch baat ki hain.😔.... i pity her.... n i find samrat more rational than mayank in this ff...mayank is a typical rowdy gunda.....😆😆.....ab bas nupur ko mayank ka asli roop jald se jald pata chal jaye.

& do i need to mention i liked the divider u used this time too..... it seems like a combined divider of the first 2 parts.....super duper daksha.👍🏼....update soon!!!!

(Hey i am busy with my exams this week dear,...so i am not able to comment on your vms....although i took time to watch it...will comment soon after 1 more week)

Love,

Shweta😛