MayUr FF: Rishtey Part 13 @ Page 143

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@maloo19

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#181

awesum part

the way u describe nupur feeling was superb

luv Marium

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Alisha2887

@Alisha2887

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Posted: 15 years ago

#182

Brilliant update !!👍🏼

Can't wait to know what happens next.

Please update soon.

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fahi

@fahi91

Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#183

Hey Daksha

Nice part.. but i dnt like how Mayank just used Nupur like that, she thinks she has a husband whilst he has just found someone to sleep with when he wants.

But Nupur is being the perfect wife.. making the breakfast, cleaning the house.. yaar even Samrat seems a lil better than Mayank, he wasn't told or reminded to compliment on Nupur's cooking like Mayank was...

Uh-oh are they going out to beat someone up? Subah subah gun leke gaye the.. pata nahi kya karke aaye hai but kya woh kaafi nahi tha? 😆

Hmm wonder how long it will be till Nupur see Mayank's true face? She is gonna be so hurt at that time coz she would have fallen in love by then.. 😔

Anyways do contiue soon.. 😃

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amrutha,akhila

@ammuakhi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#184

nice part daksha... it was good...

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daniella

@daniella05

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#185

nice part...
but poor nups....hope mayu starts changing his behaviour.....
do continue soon
thanks 4 the pm

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affu123

@affu123

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Posted: 15 years ago

#186

wow daksha..poor nupsi feel bad for her..

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Amrita

@Maahzabeen

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#187

hey tnx 4 da pm...bahut hi jhakaas ff hai..luvd it yaar....wow...mayu as a gunda....m lukin forward 4 more stuff...cont soon cnt wait dear

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Shabnoor

@shabnoorm

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#188

its a wonderful part, awesome

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@Mrina-PMs

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#189

fabulously written daksha...

so mayank just using nups as desires of bed!

nupur ke tough days start ho gaye hain!

continue soon!

eager to read more!

samrat is kind to her, waiting for mayu to be the same!

love

mina

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Senny

@Senny

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Posted: 15 years ago

#190

Hey Daksha,

I am so sorry I just read all the three parts. Wow Adhiraj and suhaani got her married so quickly and N trusted her brother so much and even M now, she is very innocent and I am so scared that she will be so hurt ahead. Though i must admit that it is a very interesting story and I have never read much stories where a gangster falls for a girl and gets married as well, it would be alot of fun to read ahead too.

Keep it up Daksha and i am really sorry for the late response.