Eternal rain drops Last prt SaJan Mayur FF - Page 21

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Posted: 15 years ago
Oh gosh I hope G gets fine soon. So sorry for the late reply. Great job Jasmine!
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Posted: 15 years ago
hi jasmin...finally all truth come out
n omg gunji in come...
hope she recovers soon
n start a new life with samrat
awesome updt
cont sooon
see yaaaa
love uu
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Posted: 15 years ago
sorry commentin so late...Jas..
just read d update (part 11)...
awesum update dear...
wts d mystery of Gunjan...
cant wait 4 d next part...
rush 2 read it...
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Posted: 15 years ago
part 12 ws awesum...
luvd it..
-supriya
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Posted: 15 years ago
aww.. part 13 ws so touchy..
felt bad 4 Gunjan...
thnx 4 d pm...
pls update soon...
luv u lots...🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
plz update soon and pm me
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Posted: 15 years ago

Eternal rain drops Part 14


Two weeks pass.Still Gunjan is in coma.
Samrat talks to the Doctor:Doctor..please let me see Gunjan.
Dr:But..
S:Please..she will feel my presense.I'm sure she will be cured.
Dr:Its not practical.But you can see her.

Samrat goes near her.
S:Chashmish..you thought i will forget you easily if i know your past?You have not understood me properly.I love you.Your past is not a barrier for me.Still i can't think of anyone else as my life partner.Please wake up Chashmish.Come back to life.
'His tears fall on her hand.He leaves the room with tears.His heart cries and sings:
dard Mein Bhi Yeh Lab Muskura Jaate Hai
Beete Lamhein Hamein Jab Bhi Yaad Aate Hai
Beete Lamhein..........'{The Train}.
Te moments which he spent with Gunjan come to his mind.

The Doctor comes out with excitement:Great news.Gunjan is responding well to the medicines.
All are happy.
Samrat:I told you Doctor..when she feels my presense she will become nornal.

Gunjan becomes normal.When she opens her eyes she finds the vision blurred.Nupur makes her wear her spectacles.Slowly the vision becomes clear.She sees her parents,Nupur and Mayank.Everyone hugs her.Then she sees Samrat standing close to the door.She does'nt know how she feels now.
He comes near her.Gunjan can't face him.
S:Look at my face chashmish.I want to see your eyes.I want to see your glasses.Gunjan looks at him slowly.He smiles.
S:You look lovely Chashmish.Will you marry me?
She is surprised:Samrat!After knowing my past also...?
S:Don't say anything more about it.Reply to my question.Will you marry me?
She looks at her parents.They smile.
She nodded with a smile.Her eyes are wet.Samrat smiles.

'Mom..'Samrat calls his mom.Satya comes to the verandah.She sees Gunjan along with Samrat.They both are smiling.
S:I found my girl mom.Your daughter in law.Gunjan.
Samrat looks at Gunjan:Come to my house.Let us enter the house together.
Sa:No...Gunjan should not enter this house.
They are shocked.
S:Why mom?Why are you behaving like this?Why can't Gunjan enter our house?You only told me to find a girl.
Satya is serious:I told you..she can't enter this house.
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesomee updt
loved it
do cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
sad prt but way bettter than MJHT!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Nice part Jasmine.. but u have been missing out on Mayur....

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