Eternal rain drops Last prt SaJan Mayur FF

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Posted: 15 years ago
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This is my 1st Mayur ff.Plz support me..

Readers....plz send me a friend's request.So that i can pm you when i update

Part 1:Pg 1
Part 2:Pg 3
Part 3:Pg 5
Part 4:Pg 7
Part 5 :Pg 9
Part 6: Pg 12
Part 7:Pg 13
Part 8:Pg 15:SaJan story starts
Part 9:Pg 18
Part 10:Pg 21
Part 11:Pg 23
Part 12:Pg 27
Part 13:Pg 29
Part 14:Pg 32
Part 15:Pg 34


Nupur is a bubbly cheerful talkative girl.
First day in College...
Nupur is dressing up in front of the mirror.She wears a yellow Salwar Kameez.She adorns her eyes with eye liner and Kajal.She raises her trimmed eyebrows.
N:The beautician has shaped my eyebrows nicely.
She smirked.

She enters the college.A car passes by.The muddly water falls on her.
N:Cheee...
She is fuming with anger.
She looks at the car and shouts:Hey...can't you see anything?
A handsome smart guy comes out of the car.He has worn sunglasses.
N:Did you not see me here?Because of you my costume got spoiled.
He looks at her salwar kameez.It is dirty now.
He:I'm sorry..i did'nt do it purposefully.
N:You duffer!
He loses his control:Hey behenji...i admit that i did a mistake unknowingly.That does'nt mean that you can call me anything.
N:What did you call me?Behenji?You think that you are modern and stylish?You are a geek.
He:You stupid girl!
N:Ok...Now tell me.How will i enter the class room in this dirty dress?It is the first lecture.But look at my condition.
He:Ok...my friend Reema is in the college hostel.She has dresses there.I will ask her to give her dress for you..only for today.
N:Ok...well...i don't like wearing other's clothes.But since there is no other option i will wear her dress.
He:Well...for your kind information..nobody will be interested to give dress to you.But since there is no other option dress will be given to you.
Nupur is rolling her eyeballs with irritation.
He:What is your name behenji?
N:I'm not anyone's behenji.
He:Ok...what's your good name Madam ji.
N:Nupur.What's your name?
He:Mayank.
Mayank phones up Reema and tells her the matter.
R:Ok...i will reach college in two minutes.I will bring a dress for her.
Reema comes with a dress.Reema is a stylish girl who has worn a mini skirt.
M:Thank God..Reema has come.This is Nupur.
R:Hi Nupur.
Reema gives her the dress:Try this one.
N:Thanks.
She opens and takes the dress out of the bag.It is a short dress.
N:Hello...what dress is this?It is your childhood dress?
R:No.Why?
N:I can't wear tiny skirts.Cheee...
R:Oh i'm sorry.
Mayank murmers to Reema's ears:Reema..she is a typical behenji who is allergic to miniskirts.
Reema in low voice:I thought like any other girl in this college,she is also someone who follows the trends.
Mayank whispers:I never knew that now a days you can see this type of traditional girls in a modern college.
R:What will i do?I don't have any salwar kameez.
N:What?Yiu have just landed up from US?Being an Indian girl you have no salwar kameez with you?Shame.
R:Ok...let us buy a salwar kameez for Nupur.
M:Are you crazy Reema?Why should we waste money on stupid girls?
N:Hey..you spoiled my dress and washing off hands?
Nupur is upset.
R:Look at her condition Mayank.She can't go to the classroom in this dress.

Reema and Mayank go to the shop.
Myank is confused:Which salwar kameez should we buy?All are equally boring.
R:I will get one.
She chooses a light blue salwar kameez.

Reema gives the salwar to Nupur.
N:Thanks.You remind me of my sister Gunjan.
R:That is nice.Where is she?
N:She is in UP.Very far from me.We are so close to each other.
R:Why is she there?Ask her to come here.
N:She wants to.But she can't.
Reema can't understand anything.
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Hey jasmine that is a promising start, keep it up!
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Hi Jasmine, lovely start, plz pm me wen u update. :)

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its a good start dear...thnx for d pm....plzz do add me to ur pm list....
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Awesome start...
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lovely start
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Hey jasmine...

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