Eternal rain drops Last prt SaJan Mayur FF - Page 23

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Posted: 15 years ago
part 13 was wonderful......gunjan in coma!
hope she's well soon....
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Posted: 15 years ago
part 14....
great part!
so samrat finally proposes....
wpnder what is satya's problem now.....
continue soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice part
update sooon
n pm me wenevr u update
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Posted: 15 years ago

Eternal rain drops Part 15




Satya:Before marriage the bride should not enter the bride groom's house.That is not good.
Samrat and Gunjan are relieved.Satya goes near them.Gunjan touches her feet.Satya blesses her.
S:I liked your selection.She is an Angel.
They smile.

Engagement day of Mayank-Nupur and Samrat-Gunjan...
Nupur wears a grand violet salwar kameez with diamond earrings.Her violet eye shadow makes her bright.Mayank wore red shervani.He goes near her:Can i tell you something?
N:What?
He whispers to her ears:You look very pretty.
She blushes.
Samrat:Where is Gunjan?
Gunjan comes out.She has worn a white Lacha which has golden border.Her gold onaments are shining.
Samrat can't believe his eyes.Gunjan is uncomfortable.
He goes near her:What is this?What have you worn?
G:Nupur made me wear this.I'm not used to wearing such gaudy clothes.
Samrat smiles:You don't have to be too conscious.You look gorgeous.
G:Really?
S:Yes.
She is relieved.
Mayank-Nupur and Samrat-Gunjan exchange rings.
Then they dance to the song 'Maahi ve..'{Kal ho na ho}.

The end
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Posted: 15 years ago
Why did you end it?Please show their marriage and little bit of life after marriage.It will be really nice to read.Please can you write that.Its just a suggestion.Because this FF was going so well
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Posted: 15 years ago
OMG, u ended it soo suddenly ..
anyways, i liked dis FF ...it was really nice...hope u cnt more of dem..

love
vini
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awwww dear y u ended plz show der marriage n suhaagraat n all plz plz
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Posted: 15 years ago
dear it was short but i really liked it
tooo good
cont soon
see yaaa
love uuuu
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesomeee updt
loved it
do try to cont it
Edited by sajanroxx20 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice update.......but why did u end it sooo soon plssss show the marriage and suhagrat plsssssssss......i hope that u start another ff because u r such a good writer😃
Edited by preety88 - 15 years ago

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