ArSh OneShots: MESSAGE pg 23!!! URGENT - Page 12

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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome updates
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hey Guys.

Heres Part 2 of Jab Hum Mile
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Jab Hum Mile
*Part 2*
Geet: *to herself* Where's my seat, aahh meri seat kithe gayab ho gayi hai?

Geet: *to Adi* Uh, Hello? Yeh Meri Seat Hai…*No Response* Aree HELLO?? Tum Bere ho kya? Sunay Nahi Detha? This is my Seat…

Adi: Nods and moves to the opposite seat.

Geet: Yeh sab choro, [loud] Hi!!

Adi: Staring outside the window.

Geet: *to herself* yeh bara ajeeb sa ladka hai…hmm..kuch to hua hai…

Geet: Areee hello mr…*Adi looks* Do you know what, im so excited, I have neverrrrrr missed ONE train in my whole life, I always got onto it..it was so exciting, with all that adrenaline running inside of me, the thrill of running after the train like running after someone you love…

Adi: Turns to look at her in shock of hearing the sentence "running after the one you love"…he remembers moments with Ayesha.

Geet: Ha…well what I was saying was that im going to Bhatinda to see my mummy daddy and offcourse theres Uncle, Auntie, Pappu, Gullu, Sweety, uhh..OH how could I forget theres grandad too, hes quite scary but hes got a heart of a baby…yeh so theres sweetty gullu guppu pappu amarat…uhh who else…hmm…Who else? Oh yeh and Roop..I love her like a sister…did I tell you?...uhh Hello??

Adi: Totally tuned out..not listening to a word shes saying, hes totally quiet
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Geet: * To herself* Looks like hes gone mad…

Geet: Keeps chatting, until they get to sleep, she obviously gets the bed at the top, and he still sits on the chair like before.

Geet: *eyes shut, on the bed, in sleep* When I get there I will have to meet gullu, roop..and have Gulab Jamans…mmm and jalebis…..fades out..and what about you Adi?...Adi??...
Opens eyes to see no Adi…

Geet: Walks around the train to the door compartment to see Adi literally walking out of the train…

Geet: AREEE TUM PAGAL HOGAYE HO KYA??? Whats the matter with you, you don't say a word, you just sit there looking outside the window, is something wrong with you??...

Adi: Can hear nothing, as he is totally zoned out to hear her, he just sees her mouth constantly moving….

Ticket Guy: Ticket Please *to geet*

Geet: Yeh Yeh Wait a second ill give it to you at the seat…

Adi: Stares at the man.

Ticket Guy & Geet: Ticket?? Adii Ticket??
Back at the seats…

Geet to ticket man: Just make his ticket here..uh he doesn't speak much, just gone through a tough time, uhh…he will go where I go.
Thanks.


Geet: Don't you speak?
She goes on and on and on until Adi has had enough and has an outburst…

Adi: Enough! Don't YOU EVER SHUT UP? JUST ONCE?? I DON'T CARE IF YOU HAVE NEVER MISSED A TRAIN, I FRANKLY DON'T CARE IF YOU SIT ONTOP OF THE TRAIN…AND I DON'T CARE WHERE YOU ARE GOING, YOU CAN BE GOING TO YOUR HOUSE OR A BROTHEL IT WONT MAKE A DIFFERENCE TO ME IF YOU'RE A GOOD DAUGHTER OR A CALL GIRL!!! NOW WOULD YOU PLEASE JUST SHUT UP!

Geet: *Very shocked at the brothel part…nearly in tears* …..silence…..

Adi: Uh..Vo..Main…I didn't mean the brot…i..

Geet: Oh don't worry, that part was a bit OTT but don't worry things happen, anyway…

Adi: *Funny* You wont be quiet will you! Oh God! ?

Train stops at a station…
Adi gets off, still a little depressed he walks off into the station with his coat.
Geet comes out of the toilet to see hes not there, she looks out of the train and sees him wondering into nowhere…..

To Be continued..
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Sooooo...What do you thinks??
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome update
loved it
geet is such a chatter box
can't wait 2 read more
con soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
HeyDear,
Nice part.
Love geet hehe,
But is here also AR i dont think right hehe,
But its ok:)
I hope you cont with that Breakfast OS.
Would love to read it,

LoveSurat.

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