ArSh OneShots: MESSAGE pg 23!!! URGENT - Page 11

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Posted: 15 years ago
waiting ... waiting ... waiting ... ;)
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome teaser
I actually had tears in my eyes while reading it
can't wait for the part
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hello Guys!

Sorrrrrrrrrrrrry its been so long!!
Here's the rest of Mora Piya:
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They both stepped out of the lift, and began walking towards the doors of the hotel...when suddenly a manly arm came out of no-where. It threw itself onto Armaan's muscular face, he had recieved a punch from an unknown man. He fell to the floor, Riddhima screamed in shock...her designer bag fell to the floor as her grip on Armaan's hand broke as he fell. Armaan, looked up, he had no idea who this guy was standing above him. Then, a tall, brown haired, girl stepped forward. Riddhima looked up to see this girl. After all that had happened, why did this tammasha have to come round the corner. "Teri Itni Himat?" Shouted the unknown guy, as the girl tried to restrain him. Armaan stood up, he had a reputation of being a strong, masculine romantic guy, and had been in many fights before hand. He got up, and gave this guy the wacking he deserved. "Don't you dare touch me again, I don't even know you" The brown haired girl walking towards Armaan, before she could touch him, Armaan stretched out his arm and stopped her. "Don't even think about coming near me, you've caused enough trouble"

Riddhima's face was blank. She had no idea what was going on, she stood there as her husband had just smashed the daylight out of this guys face. This girl…who was she? Riddhima was confused aswell as completely lost. She grabbed Armaan's arm and pulled him back to stop him. This girl just stared at Armaan. He had just anger in his face that it was indescribable. He pulled Riddhima to the side whilst this unknown woman got hold of her "man" who had just been punched in the face. She was consoling him on a nearby bench. Armaan began his story.

Flashback:

"Me & Rahul had just come out of a meeting and were heading towards Nirvana, the large bar in Mumbai, we were having a few drinks when this woman came up to me.."

***

"Hey Baby"

"Excuse me, I'm hooked, booked and cooked *showing his wedding ring* Sorry to disapoint"

"Oh I don't mind baby"

Rahul just stood there astonished that Armaan was able to pick up girls without even trying!! He finally spoke "Uh, sorry, you've got the wrong guys here…we're both taken, so its best if you just move on"

"And I'm not your baby Okay" replied Armaan. Who had already downed a few too many Vodkas. This girl, on the other hand was ready to take full advantage of that.

She walked away and began to dance on the dancefloor and had asked for a particular song to be played. She began to dance whilst all the other men were oozing at her body. Armaan & Rahul got bored and fed up and left. "Kya zamana aagaya hai seriously" said Armaan.

The next day, Rahul & Armaan stepped out for a bit of shopping. They were walking out of the mall when this girl approached them again. "Tum?!" they both screamed.

"Hi Babies"

"Tumne Pi Rakhi Hai Kya?" they both asked.

"No Baby"

"Seriously SHUT UP we're not your babies"

She walked on and then suddenly fell to the floor and had "sprained her ankle".

Me and Rahul had no idea it was all a fake act

Armaan turned and picked her up by her arm. Not romantically at all. Sat her on the bench and just walked on, until she grabbed his arm and pulled him to sit next to her. She started to get closer and closer. Armaan tried his hardest to push her off but it was working. She had her hands everywhere. Then just as she is about to grab Armaan's face to kiss him, Armaan & Rahul see a flash. They turn and theres nothing there.

She then pushes his face away and walks off.

***

"Bas, Aur Kuch Nahi Hua, I promise" Armaan tried to explain to Riddhima.

But Riddhima understood and then remembered those pictures she saw in the newspaper before Armaan returned from his business trip. They were of a woman who was all over Armaan! She then realised what had happened and moved Armaan out the way and walked up to this girl. On approached she gave her a tight slap. "You b**** how dare you. What do you think you are. Why the heck would you want to use my husband? Why did you do it…for money?" Riddhima gave her no chance to speak.

"Your just cheap" Riddhima muttered to herself,

Armaan came from behind and saw this girls face. He was obviously happy. This woman tried to explain but had nothing to say. "I want answers, are you deaf?" cried Riddhima.

"I…..But…No…I" muttered the woman. "Look just spit it out" Riddhima screamed.

"ALRIGHT. I was cheap….I did this all so that I could make him *pointing at the previously punched man* jealous. He had broken up with me. I needed him back…so I"

"Right, so you thought you would use my husband instead? Right. You disgust me"

"Do you have any idea how many problems you have caused between me and my wife?" said Armaan.

"I didn't do it on purpose…I just needed a man…." Before she could finish Riddhima gave her another tight yet hard slap so much so that this woman fell onto the bench.

Armaan took control of Riddhima, but she released herself from his grip, walked over to where this all started, picked up her shopping bags and said to Armaan "Chalo, come on BABY *so loud that this woman could hear* I've got plenty of shopping to do. Chalo Na" with a smile offcourse. Armaan walked up to her and Riddhima winked.

Armaan put his arm around her neck and pulled her closer "Chalo, yeh problem to katham hui…now nothing can get in our way, after all ive got such a strong wife I didn't even realise you could punch so well kya baat hai" kissing her on her head.

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It was a bit different, but what do you guys think??

I love reading your comments so keep them coming!!
Xxx
Norz thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
glad that u update
i almost 4get the story
well was expecting this
do update more and be quick
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Posted: 15 years ago
HeyDear,
Wow mindblowing part!
Loved everything about it,
Im so happy that AR are finally together now,
And Ridz did it good that she slapped that woman hehe,
Now everything is solved hehe,
Awesome part,
Thanku for this & Keep it up.
LoveSurat.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hey There Again!

Sorry Im Late. Ive had wedding after wedding this month. And guess what, we've got a wedding to go to on Saturday!!

So here you go....

This one is a short one so there's no point in having a sneak peek. You guys can have the full version!

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The Perfect Breakfast

As always, the sun rose and shone perfectly over Riddhima as she slept. It caught her eye so she woke. She realised that Armaan wasn't in bed. She called out for him, but no reply. She got up…went to the bathroom, freshened up and then headed downstairs.

In the kitchen she saw her husband, Armaan, cooking away…he had his back to her so when he heard a little voice "Armaan?" He immediately turned around to find his girlfriend clad in just his blue Ralph Lauren shirt!

She walked up to him "I didn't know you did breakfast aswell" "Well I'm a man of many talents" he replied.

She smiled and walked over to the fridge, opened up the door to grab some strawberries and suddenly Armaan grabbed her from behind and began to kiss her. The strawberries dropped producing a pool of pinkish-reddish juice near the fridge. He lifted her up onto the worktop and began his magic…..*I'll leave the rest to your imagination!*

Next minute, Armaan was sitting on the floor of the kitchen, with Riddhima draped over his legs. She spoke….. "Who needs coffee after a wake up like that?" breathing heavily.

Armaan sniggered "I told you I was good in the kitchen".

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Haha! Guys what do you think??

I know, I know, its short. But I thought why not a short & sweet one this time! J xx

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Posted: 15 years ago

Surprise!!!!!!!!!!!!

Because I took soooooooooooooooo long with my other updates. Heres a small surprise from Me to You!

Hope you like it!!

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Jab Hum Mile
Jab We Met.

'Armaan Malik as Aditya Kashyap - Burdened by the thought of having to live up to the formidable reputation of his late father, Aditya, a young industrialist is full of angst and despair. He is so busy fighting his own insecurities that he refuses to enjoy life. Till a hurricane named Geet enters his dreary, grey world and shows him how colorful life can be.

'Riddhima Gupta as Geet Dhillon - A Sikhni from Bhatinda, Geet is the incessant chatterbox who views the world through rose coloured spectacles. Everything looks pink and beautiful in her life. For her, life is fun and a game ' to be enjoyed to the fullest. Nothing can ever go wrong in Geet's world because she just won't let it

'Dr. Shubankar as ... Geet's uncle
'Dr. Shashank as ... Geet's grandfather
'Sister Padma as ... Geet's mother
'Muskaan Chaddha as ... Roop
'Rahul Grewal as ... Anshuman
'Dr. Kirti as ... Aditya's mother
'Atul Joshi as ... Receptionist at Hotel Decent

The story opens on Aditya.

Aditya is a depressed character. He is a young man disillusioned with life after being dumped by his girlfriend. [Ayesha - Anjali (Armaans Girlfriend)]. To make matters worse his large business of mobiles is going nowhere since his father passed away recently leaving the whole business to Adi.

Adi: *to himself* Its always meim always the one to lose the girl.
Adi roaming the streets of Mumbai pulling his tie off, his cufflinks falling to the ground, his hankerchief floats to the ground as he walks off.

[Ends up outside Ayesha's house, wedding celebrations going on]
Ayesha comes out of her room to see Adi standing outside her gate.
Ayesha: ADII WHAT? What are you doing here? She shouts but he doesn't hear her as he is so lost and depressed at the thought of his only love marrying someone else
[Runs outside]
Ayesha: Adi, Adi what ...what are you doing here?? You know its my sangeet today, just go from here-you will create problems, come on just go!
Adi: So that's it..its so easy for you to say just go!
Ayesha: Oh Adi!
Adi: Don't just "oh adi" me, its not easy for me you know, I loved you with all my heart, and now you just push me away and its said just like people change their shirts, boys change their girls but I guess its different here its you this time. When you see a new good looking, rich boy then
[Loud Music Coming From The House Interrupts the Foul Language Used Between The Two]
Ayesha: Oh Whatever Adi, Just Go. Main tumhari shakal tak bhi nahi dheek na chaati.
Adi: Walks Away throwing a letter to Ayesha's face.
Ayesha reading the letter:
"Ayesha, I love you so much, without you my world is incomplete."
Ayesha looks up to see no sight of Adi, one tear drops from her eyes, as she takes one step forward to run after Adi, her mum calls

Adi: Depressed, he walks the streets of Mumbai, with no sign of where he is going he walks into a train station, people shouting at eachother, many people walking past, banging into him he doesn't say a word just keeps walking.
He gets into the train and takes a seat he has no idea where on earth he is heading.

Geet: AREEE FIKUR NAHI KARO. Babaji hai meri saat. Are Piteh Moo yeh tho pukaro. [Handing the man a framed picture of Guru Nanak Ji].
Train Man: But madam, you should come first, don't worry about the luggage.
Geet: Oh Shut Up, I know what im doing, I have never missed a train, so don't worry about me.
Geet: Aaahh Finally..thank you babaji, once again you saved meThank you
[talking to the man] Did I tell you I have NEVER missed a train, did I tell you??
Man: But where are you going?
Geet: Oh don't you worry, I know what your thinking, a lonely girl on a train -but I am a Sikhni from Bhatinda, I can look after my self don't you doubt that. By the way I am going to my home town Bhatinda, in Punjab.....

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So what did you think?

I've got Part 2 & 3 at the ready.

So if you liked this one, then i'll post the last two parts.

I only wrote up 3 parts, it's just a bit of fun, and to say sorry because I took so long with my regular ones! So there will only be three for this Jab We Met!

Edited by Sneak. - 15 years ago
mrs-sr thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
HeyDear,
Wow amazing OS.
Totally loved it,
And Armaan cooks also hehe,
Cant wait for more.
Plz continue with this!
Would love to read more.
LoveSurat.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: LOVEDMG-AR

HeyDear,
Wow amazing OS.
Totally loved it,
And Armaan cooks also hehe,
Cant wait for more.
Plz continue with this!
Would love to read more.
LoveSurat.

Hey Surat!
Thanks for the lovely comments!! I've added one more Surprise after this!!
Enjoy.
Love xx
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Posted: 15 years ago

By The Way Guys!!

The Surprise is my "Jab Hum Mile"
Hope You Enjoy It!!
xxx
Edited by Sneak. - 15 years ago

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