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Posted: 15 years ago
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loved the update. but it was shorter than before.. the ff is at a nail bititng suspense...what will arman do to Sid and sister stella.... would love to see sid being taught a very good lesson by arman which sends a message to everyone to never mess with his ridhima even in his abscence.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome .... please continue soon!!!
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PART 12

Sanjeevani Cafe:

Armaan goes to Riddhima and fills her maang with his blood, and looks at everyone present with such a glare signaling them to not to dare even think of hurting Riddhima, his Riddhima. "Om mangalam Bhaghwaan Vishnu"( the shaadi mantra plays in the background).

Armaan looking in Sister Stella's direction-"Agar ab se kisi ne meri patni ko kuch ulta seedha kaha, yah kisi ne ulti seedhi harkat ki, main uski eisi halat karoonga ki woh zindagi bhar yaad rakhega ki Armaan Mallick se takrana ka anjaam kya hota hai."

Riddhima completely shocked in response to Armaan's actions. However, she realizes that Armaan's pure love for her knows no bounds, and is happy that he is there to protect her, shield her from whatever happens.

Riddhima getting up and holding Armaan's arm-"Armaan, tumhara haath. Kitna khoon bhey raha hai. Chalo pehle dressing kar lo."

Atul going to Armaan-"Haan Armaan, Ridzy sahi keh rahi hai."

Armaan looking at Sid-"Main tumhe abhi yehi par sabak sikha sakta hoon. Par mujhe Sanjeevani aur Dr.Shashank ki reputation ka ehsas hai, isliye main Sanjeevani ke bahar BB court mein tumhara intezaar karoonga. Agar tum hizre nahin ho, toh wahaan miloge, aur woh bhi 10 minutes mein."

Saying this Armaan gives Sid a hard punch right in his face to humiliate him even more and to ensure that Sid does come to the BB court. The impact of the punch was such that it had blood comes from the left side of Sid's mouth.

Naina and JP standing up scared and each holding onto to Yuvi, as Armaan walks towards Sister Stella. Riddhima and Atul follow him. Sister Stella gets up, and is intimidated by Armaan's fury.

Armaan-"Sister Stella, main aapse kuch clear kar dena chahta hoon, kyunki mujhe lagta iski kaafi zaroorat hai" Then looking at Riddhima and her maang that he filled with his blood, he holds Riddhima's hand and says to Sister Stella "Agar mujhe dobara aapke muh se koi bhi bakwaas Dr.Riddhima Armaan Mallick ke liye sunayi di, toh main eeit (brick) ka jawab eeit se nahin, patthar se doonga. Defamation aur mental harassement ka case aapke khilaaf bhi lekar jaa sakta hoon main Supreme Court tak. Aur yeh sirf mera pehla kadam hoga."

Sister Stella-"Ji main toh..."

Armaan-"Behtar hoga ki aap yeh idle gossip chhor dein, issi mein aapki bhalayi hai."

Riddhima-"Armaan chalo, dekho tumhara kitna khoon beh gaya. Please chalo meri khatir." She starts to lead Armaan out of the cafe towards a quiet room.

Atul goes towards Sid-"Sid tum chale jao yahaan se. Armaan ke saamne mat jao tum. Woh bokhlaya hua hai tum par. Tumne dekha nahin usne sabko Riddhima ki khatir challenge kar diya. Woh uske liye saari duniya se lad sakta hai khushi khushi"

JP-"Sid Bhaiya jaldi Sanjeevani chhoriye, Dr.Armaan toh gussaye huye sher ki tarah hain abhi"

Sid-"Ab jo hoga so hoga. Armaan ne bulaya hai, toh jaana hoga. Galti ki hai, sazaa toh milegi hi. Chalta hoon main. Bas sab ko bye bolne aaya tha."

Sid leaves for the BB court. JP-"Ab toh hoga inka kaam tamam."

Naina-"Sach mein Dr.Armaan bahut protective Ridddhima Didi ke liye."

Yuvi-"Sid Dr.Armaan ke saamne zyada dair nahin thahair paega"

Atul-"Main koshish karta hoon Armaan ko rokne ke liye"

Riddhima trying to get Armaan to get his dressing done-"Armaan, jab tum mere saath hote ho, toh phir mujhe kisi cheez se koi matlab nahin. Armaan tum hi meri zindagi ho. Tumhari dressing karni hai abhi, tumhari treatment shuru hone wali, aur tumne uss Sid ko BB court mein bula liya? Chhor do, dekho tumhare haath se bahut khoon nikla hai"

Armaan-"Main ussay nahin chhor sakta Riddhima. Uski wajah se aaj tumhare saath yeh sab hua. Bas Riddhima mujhe mat roko aaj please. Main batana chahta hoon har ek ko, ki agar kisi ne tumhari taraf aankh bhi uthai, toh achha nahin hoga. Riddhima please, tumhe mera vaasta, aaj mat roko." Armaan starts to leave.

Riddhima-"Armaan, tum..."

Atul comes, and tries to stop Armaan-"Armaan chhor de yeh ladaai. Siddhant ko waise hi tu punch cafe mein de chuka hai. Aur uska transfer bhi hogaya hai Chennai. Phir yeh sab kyon bhai"

Armaan-"Kyunki uski ghatiya harkat ki wajah se Riddhima par log ungliyaan utha rahe hain." And Armaan heads towards the BB court.

Riddhima looks at Atul-"Atul please chalo mere saath BB court. Armaan nahin maan raha hai"

Both Riddhima and Atul leave for BB court.

At the BB court, all the interns have gathered aong with some nurses and wardboys. Lab technian JP and nurse Jiggy are also present.

Sid comes with a lost look to the BB court. He understands that here no one is rooting for him. Everyone has come see him get another portion of his punishment; the first being the guillt of what he did, the second being transferred out of Sanjeevani Mumbai by none other than his Abhimanyu Bhaiya. And now is the time for the final blow.

Armaan steps in the BB court. Silence prevails.Armaan is glaring at Siddhant. He starts to taunt him.

Armaan-"Kyun aaj kya hua. Kahaan gayi teri khokhli mardangi. Teri himmat bhi kaise huyi yeh sab karne ki, aur woh bhi Riddhima ke saath."

Siddhant-"Dekhiye main maanta hoon mujhse galti huyi"

Armaan-"Kitni aasani se keh diya galti ho gayi. Par aaj log Riddhima par ungliyain utha rehe hain aur woh tumhari wajah se." Saying this Armaan goes towards Siddhant with lightning speed and punches Siddhant first in the stomach, then on the left side of his face. Siddhant caught unexpected, tries to rise up, however Armaan keeps kicking him repeatedly. Blood starts coming from Sid's mouth and nose. His cheekbones also have severe bruises.

Riddhima and Atul reach the BB court, and see Armaan in his avatar of 'Ammy the champion kick-boxer'.
Riddhima calls out to him-"Armaaan"

Armaan hearing her turns around, and she runs upto him. She looks at him with teary eyes, seeing the man who is willing to fight with every breath of his to protect her and her honor. She hugs him tight. Instinctively, Armaan's arms wrap around Riddhima.

Riddhima-"Armaan ab bas karo. Meri khatir. Chhor do ussay maarna ab. Socho Armaan agar yeh sab na hota, toh tum mere paas kaise wapas aate? Tumhare bina, main ek zinda laash jaisi thi. Kam se kam iss hadse ke baad tum wapas mujhe mil gaye. Tum hi mere liye sab kuch ho. Chalo Armaan, ab chalo mere saath. Tumhe meri kasam."

Armaan looks at Sid and points his index finger at him-"Main Riddhima ke wajah se tumhe chhor raha hoon. Ayinda eisi galti karne ki sochna bhi mat"

Riddhima takes Armaan away towards a quiet room of sanjeevani to attend to his bleeding hand. Atul along with Yuvi-Naina go towards Siddhant.

Atul to Yuvi and Naina-"Usko jaldi le chalo mere saath dressing karane. Maine kaha tha na, usko Armaan se mat do takraane". Yuvi helps Atul pick up Siddhant who barely appears conscious at the time. Naina follows Atul and Yuvi.

JP to Jiggy and some ward boys-"Bhaiya humri dimaag mein toh baat set ho gayi. Dr.Riddhima ji ke taraf hum toh aankh bhi nahin uthaigein. Nahin karwani khud ki bhi haalat Sid Bhaiya jaisi. Aap log ke brains mein bhi yeh baat aayi samajh mein?"

Upcoming: Riddhima doing Armaan's dressing. Armaan looking at her 'bhari' maang.
Edited by averma4583 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#24
muhahahahaha ammy beat d crap out of sid n yeeeeeee ammy filled ridz maang wid his blood awwwwwwwww sooooooo romantic n lolzzz sister stella she gt so scared awesome prt yoooo keep updating dese awesome prts
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Posted: 15 years ago
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this is awesome ..... looking forward to the next update!!!

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Posted: 15 years ago
#26
Awesome part.please continue as soon as possible........
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PART 13

Sanjeevani, one of the quiet rooms:

Nikki and Atul treating Siddhant, with Yuvi-Naina looking on.

Nikki-"Kaafi chot lagi hai Sid ko"

Atul-"Tum toh jaanti hi ho Armaan ko. Jab uska gussa bekaabu ho jaata hai, toh shayad Riddhima ke alawa woh kisi aur ki sun bhi nahin paata hai"

Nikki-"Haan jaanti hoon. Par shayad aaj uski jagah koi aur bhi hota to shayad hi khud par kaabu rakh pata. Cafe mein jo hua, mujhe pata chala. Sister Stella kaafi sehmi huyi thi. Kam se kam ab shayad woh apne kaam par zyada dhyaan deingi."

Atul-"Isko ab sirf bed rest ki zaroorat. Discharge kara detein hain aaj, aur yeh ghar par hi aaram kar sakta hai. Pata nahin Dr.Abhimanyu Modi kaise react kareinge Sid ko eisi haalat mein dekh kar"

Nikki-"Obviously khush toh nahin hoga Abhi, par woh bhi jaanta hai ki Sid iske liye zimmedaar hai. Badi mushkil se Abhi ne Sid ka transfer karaya, woh Sid ke career ko barbaad nahin karna chahta tha. Aur transfer hi ek option bacha tha."

Atul-"Nikki tum issay iske ghar chhor do. Agar ho sake toh iski dekh rekh thodi kar dena iske ghar par. Waqt ke saath iske zakh bhar jaayenge.I hope ki Dr.Shashank Armaan par gussa na ho jaayein."

Atul addressing Yuvi-Naina-"Thanks guys Sid yahaan laane ke liye. Aap please next 2-3 days Sid iske ghar thoda visit kar lein, aur thodi medical attention de dein. Kaafi fayda hoga uski haalat ko"

And as he leaves, asks Nikki-"Nikki tu kya aaj ja rahi Armaan se milne?"

Nikki-"Aaj shayad mere liye theek nahin hoga. Abhi kaafi upset hai. Par main Armaan ko phone kar loongi, Sid ko uske ghar drop karne ke baad. Sochti hoon Sid ke jaane ke baad mil loon.Shayad tabhi hi theek hoga."

Atul-"Achha theek hai, toh main chalta hoon, Padma Aunty ne mujhe waise thoda jaldi bulaaya hai, aur maine socha ki Ridzy aur Armaan ke saath nikal padoon. Bye Nikki, and bye bachha party, take care"


Dr.Shashank's Office:

Dr.Shashank gets briefed by Dr.Keerti and Dr.Shubhankar on the cafe incident.

Keerti-"Sir, Sister Stella Riddhima ko target kar indecent comments keh rahi thi, aur Riddhima ko sabhi dekh rahe thei Cafe mein. Uske liye bada hi awkward, hostile situation ho gaya tha kyunki Dr.Siddhant bhi wahaan aa gaye thei"

Shubhankar-"Aur Sir, tabhi hi Dr.Armaan aaye, unhone sab kuch dekha suna. Ab agar koi kisi ki mangetar ke baare kuch eisa kahe, woh bhi itne logon ke saamne uski bezayaati kare, toh koi kaise seh sakta hai. I mean hum agar khud ko Dr.Armaan ki jagah rakhein, toh hum bhi shayad chup nahin reh paate"

Shanky-"Achha doctors. Thank you for briefing me. Ab mujhe kuch zaroori kaam khatm karna hai."

Keerti & Shubhankar-"Ok Sir." And then they leave.

Shanky starts to make a call-"Hello, main Shashank Gupta bol raha hoon"

Upcoming: Ridzy doing Armaan's dressing.
Edited by averma4583 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thanks for the next part.. looking forward to more and please have more AR scenes in them... thnak u .. u are doing a fab job
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Posted: 15 years ago
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PART 14

Sanjeevani, Quiet Room:

Riddhima doing Armaan's dressing. Her face though covered with tears has an unusual glow due to her bhari maang. Armaan looking at her maang wondering if Riddhima is upset with his actions.

Armaan a lil scared-"Riddhima, tum mujhse naraaz toh nahin ho na? Mujhse tumhare aansoon bardaast nahin hote. Aur tumhari koi bezaayti kare, mujhse woh sehan nahin hota. I'm sorry"

Riddhima-"Armaan, main jaanti hoon. Par kabhi kabhi khud par kaabu rakhna hota hai. Mujhse ab waada karo chahe jo bhi ho, tum hamesha mere saath rahoge.Tumne dekha na tumhare na hone se kya hua. Mujhe akela mat chhoro. Agar agli baar eisa phir kya, toh main mar hi jaaongi."

Armaan hearing this, cups Riddhima's face, and wipes her tears-"Now no more tears. Sorry Basket, ab kabhi tumhe nahin chhorunga akele. Promise"

Riddhima-"Pakka?"

Armaan-"Pakka"

Riddhima concerned seeing his blood loss-"Tumhe koi weakness toh feel nahin ho rahi hai na? Kaafi khoon nikla hai"

Armaan happy that Riddhima was not offended by his actions in the cafe, decides to look all serious-"Weakness feel toh ho rahi hai"

Riddhima all worried-"Ruko, main kuch vitamins ki tablets deti hoon"

Armaan with a mischievious grin-"Mujhe yeh Ribloflavin ya Vitamin C nahin chahiye. Mujhe doosri tarah ki vitamins chahiye"

Riddhima, a lil confused-"Huh, kis tarah ki"

Armaan pulling Riddhima towards him-"Hmm, ab Dr.Riddhima Armaan Mallick aap doctor hain. Aapko pata hona chahiye kaun si vitamins deni chahiye jab dil mein weakness sirf ek khoobsurat chehre ko dekh kar feel hoti hai"

Riddhima smiling, and trying to be serious- "Itni chot lagne par bhi tum sudharate nahin. No shaitaani Armaan."

Armaan holding Riddhima-"Yup, main toh kabhi nahin sudhar sakta. Waise ab mujhe bahut jaldi hai shaadi ki"

Riddhima being playful-"Tumhe daeiri hi kab thi!"

Armaan playing with Riddhima's hands and getting romantic-"Nahin yaar main serious hoon. Tumhari bhari huyi maang mujhe bahut achhi lagti hai. Sindoor sach mein tum par bahut hi achha lagega". Saying this he starts to look intensely at Riddhima, eye-locking her once again.

Riddhima's cell phone rings.Padma on the other end asking Riddhima when she will be coming with Armaan, and if his tests were done.

Riddhima starting to blush, lowering her eyes as Armaan keeps looking at her-"Haan maa, tests ho gaye. Hum abhi Sanjeevani se nikalne hi waale hain. Achha rakhti hoon Maa. Bye".

Riddhima with her eyes still low, addressing Armaan-"Ab humein ghar jaana chahiye Armaan"

Armaan grinning wanting to get her out of her shyness-"Chalo Basket, meri Saasu maa wait kar rahi hain" Riddhima trying to give him a mean look, but unable to as she starts laughing herself at Armaan's words!

Just then Atul comes in the room, he feels a little relieved seeing Riddhima and Armaan smiling.

Atul-"Arrey oops, sorry Armaan Ridzy maine tum dono ko disturb toh nahin kiya."

Armaan murmurs-"Kabab mein haddi"

Riddhima giving Armaan a mean look replies to Atul-"Arrey nahin Atul. Abhi Armaan ki dressing finish huyi, toh hum ghar ke liye hi nikal rahe thei. Tum batao?"

Armaan absentmindedly answers-"Haan kabab mein haddi ..." realizing what he just said and trying to rectify it "I mean Champ tu yahaan, kaise"

Atul-"Arrey mein kabab mein haddi? Kya Armaan, Dost dost na raha, Bhai bhai na raha"

Armaan-"Arrey chal chal Champ, itni nautanki mat dikha!"

Atul-"Waah, tere ko Panchgani lene jaon main, ab mujhe hi bhaav dikha raha hai! Jaa tere se main ab baat nahin karta"

Armaan towards Atul and manofy him-"Arrey Champ tu toh jaanta hi hai, main mazaak kar raha tha. Chal bataa tere ko koi khaas kaam?"

Atul-"Arrey haan, Padma Aunty ka phone aaya tha. Unhone mujhe bhi ghar par bulaya. Keh rahi thi kaafi samay se unke yahaan nahin aaya, so aaj aa jaaon."

Armaan murmuring once again-"Pyaar ke dusman"

Atul-"Arrey Armaan tune kuch kaha kya?"

Armaan-"Haan I mean nahin, chal chal Champ." Looking at Riddhima, he playfully smiles "Teri bhabhi ko bhi company mil jaayegi"

Chicago:

Rahul looking at Muskaan's picture-"Muskaan teri yaadein ke hi bharose main cancer se lad saka. I hope Muskaan ki ab humare beech sab kuch theek ho jaaye. Tujhe dekhne ko bada dil karta. Main aa rahu Muskaan"


Upcoming: Shashank sees Riddhima's maang

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Posted: 15 years ago
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loved it... amazing part with AR scene. I hope dr shahsnk is happy seeing ridhima's mang and also that ridhiam secretly starts applyign sindhoor every day and that AR get married.. i want to read ar marriage here... thx a lot😊😊😊😊😊

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