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Posted: 15 years ago
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amazing part.. loved it.. kash sach me aisa hota
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Posted: 15 years ago
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finally their 2gether 2 handle dis situation n update soon dear n thnx fr d pm grt part plz pm me on d nxt prt 2
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PART 8

Riddhima's Room:

Riddhima looking at Armaan and crying. Slowly everyone exits from Riddhima's room. Armaan goes to wipe Riddhima's tears.

Armaan-"Basket ab aur nahin. Ab chup ho jao nahin main bhi ro padunga"

Riddhima slowly smiling, looks at Armaan and hugs him tight.Armaan reciprocates her gesture and whispers "Soon to be Basket Armaan Malik"

Riddhima looks at him in disbelief-"Tum abhi bhi taiyaar ho Armaan. Itna sab kuch hone ke baad bhi"

Armaan-"Bas itna hi bharosa mujh par. Tum mujhse alag kab thi. Hum ek hain aur yahin logon ko bhi jaanna hai"

Padma comes in the room a lil hesitant and Armaan Riddhima break from their eyelock.

Padma-"Armaan beta, maine Shashank se baat kar li. Tum yaheen par rahoge, kyonki abhi tumhare rehne ki koi jagah bhi nahin. Aur akele tumhari dekh rekh karne wala bhi nahin"

Atul comes and chimes -"Aunty aapka matlab dekh rekh karne waali"

Padma looking at Atul-"Haan ab jaldi hi muhurat nikaal hoga hum sab ko. Kyun Riddhima theek hai na"

Riddhima hearing this blushes. Armaan decides to tease her more-"Haan Riddhima, theek hai na?"

Riddhima gives him one bad look, and everyone starts laughing. Riddhima has no choice but leave from her room.

Padma goes and caresses Armaan's face-"Beta tum hi Riddhima ke chehre ki raunak ho.Tumse hi uski khushiyaain hain. Mujhe ab Riddhima ki chinta nahin hai. Ab Anjali ke liye bhi koi mil jaata."

Atul looking down turning red and all tongue-tied, Armaan seeing him smirks and says to Padma-"I'm sure koi hai uske liye. Shayad woh aapke saamne hi ho, aur aap nahin dekh pa rahi"

Padma a lil confused and Atul goes-"Arrey Armaan jaa na taiyar hone. Aunty achha chalta hoon main Sanjeevani ke liye. Ok bye"

At Sanjeevani, Abhimanyu's office:

Abhimanyu pacing back and forth. Thinking, "I'm part of the administration, I have to make an impartial decision. Everyone is looking at my decision. And this should be a lesson to anyone who dare to even think now of such a thing."

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Posted: 15 years ago
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heyy thnx fr d pm n omg ammy is sooo cute n atul blushing lolzzzzzzzz nice prt n plzzz keep me informed of ur updates loving dis ff all d way
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thank you for the pm. loved the part. eagerly waiting for abhimanyu's decision and Arman facing Sid and teaching him a lesson for doing such a degrading act
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PART 9

Gupta House, Dining Table:

Padma serving parathas to Shashank
Shashank-"Arrey Padma Yeh Riddhima aur Armaan kahaan reh gaye"
Padma-"Aa rahe hain, woh dekhiye"

Riddhima and Armaan walking together towards the dining area.Riddhima in a short sleeved light blue churidaar salwar kurta with light silver zardozi work, and Armaan wearing a deep blue shirt with jeans.

Padma to Shashank-"In dono ki jodi sach mein kitni achhi lagti hai"

Shashank-"Sahi keh rahi ho tum. Aur Riddhima pehle ki tarah khush lag rahi hai aaj."

Armaan to Shashank-"Good Morning Sir"

Riddhima smiling-"Good Morning Papa"

Shashank addressing them both -"Good Morning. Aur haan Armaan yeh Sir kehna ab badal dijiye aap. Aaj main aapke Papa se baat karoonga. Roka, sagaai ho chuki hai. Ab toh bas shaadi hi bachti hai, kyun?"

Armaan-"Ji Sir, I mean ji uhm..."

Shashank laughing-"Chaliye jaldi kijiye nashta, Sanjeevani bhi jaana hai. Wahan aapke tests hone hain. Jab tak treatment jalegi, aap tab tak apne viva tests ki preparation kijiyega taaki treatment ke baad aap test de sakein, aur Senior doctor hokar join karein. Aur agar aapko maddad ki zaroorat ho, aap mujhe approach kar sakte hain."

Armaan-"ji thank you"

Riddhima looks at Armaan, and Armaan gives her a wink. She lowers her eyes conscious of the fact that her parents are present. Slowly "Asmani rang ho plays in the background"

Atul reaching Sanjeevani, and getting surrounded by Yuvi, Naina, JP and Jiggy.All are asking what he thinks will happen to Sid.

Atul-"Mujhe yeh nahin pata sanjeevani ki administrator kya action legi, par itna pata hai agar Sid galti se bhi Armaan ke saamne aa gaye, toh ussay plastic surgery ke ward mein bharti karna hoga. Armaan jab apne doston ke saath galat nahin hone deta,toh woh kya apni mangetar ke saath yeh bardaast kar lega? Itna toh zaroor hai jab Armaan ko pata chala, woh bokhla gaya tha"

Naina-"Sid ki toh band ab pakka bajeegi."

JP-"Aap sahi keh rahi hain flowerji"

Jiggy-"Par yeh Armaan ab tak tha kahan"

Yuvi-"Haan Jiggy ne baat ko sahi kahi. Armaan tha kahaan ab tak"

Atul-"Arrey bachha party mujhe abhi jaana hoga, Baad mein baatein karte hain, aur agar ho sake toh Sid ko door rakhna Armaan se"

Naina-"Par Armaan dikhta kaisa hai?"

Atul screaming as he leaves-"Ekdum 1st class boxer ki tarah. Kitne competition bhi jeet chuka hai woh"

JP-"Ab toh gaye aap Sid Bhaiya. Ram naam satya hoga aapka.Hum jaa rahe hain flower laane unki zaroorat hogi funeral mein, aap log kahein toh aap sab ke bhi liye le aaon kya?"

Upcoming:
Dr.Shashank's car coming in Sanjeevani.
Edited by averma4583 - 15 years ago
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nice prt tnx fr d pm n update longer prts nxt tym n in d nxt prt plzz show ammy beating d crap out of sid plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz its request lolzzzzzzzzzz
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PART 10

At Sanjeevani:

Dr.Shashank comes. From the front seat both Shanky and Armaan get out. Armaan opens the door for Riddhima to get out. Shashank is two steps ahead of Riddhima and Armaan. The ward boys and nurses present near the nurse station see them. All stare at Riddhima. Riddhima feels awkward. Armaan sensing the stares and glares looks at the ward boys, and protectively hold Riddhima's hands. Riddhima looks at him, and he through his eyes assures her that he is with her. There's an eerie silence in the atmosphere, the silence is such that one can cut it with a knife.

Shashank finally breaks the silence looking at Armaan-"Dr.Armaan aapke liye Dr.Atul special ward 1 mein hain. Unhein aapki saari tests karni hai. Dr.Riddhima bhi unhein assist kareingi aapke case par. Filhaal hum dono ko ek meeting mein jaana, uske baad milte hain phir. Ok?"

Armaan-"Ji, ok"

Riddhima whispering to Armaan-"Apna khayal rakhna"

Armaan whispering back-"Aur tum bhi. Jaldi aana, tumhe miss karoonga. Too bad main Administration ka part nahin hoon abhi, varna tumhare saath hi hota"

Riddhima smiles knowing that Armaan wants her confidence to stay high despite the awful meeting she is going to have. She also knows how much Armaan regrets not being able to stay with her during the meeting.

Special Ward 1:

Atul is busy checking a patient, and JP is assisting him. Armaan comes there. JP sees him, and asks him why he is not in Sanjeevani patient uniform-"Arrey bhaiya, aapki uniform kahaan hai?"

Before Armaan could say, JP tries to shove him out of the ward-"Pata nahin kahan kahan se aa jaate hain" However he feels Armaan's glare and biceps, and gets intimidated. He goes-"Nahin bhaiya hum toh yeh keh rahe thei ki.."

Armaan speaks up-"Dekho haath nahin lagana, varna agar mera ek haath laga toh tumhare chehre ki puri geography badal jaayegi"

Atul hearing Armaan turns around-"Arrey Armaan tu? Bhai, kab se wait kar raha tha tera"

JP connects the dots, realizing that this is probably Riddhima's fiance-"Excuse me, sorry bhaiya ji, kya aap hi Dr.Armaan Mallick hain? Aap hi ki toh pratiksha ho rahi thi subah se!"

Armaan gives JP one look to shut him up, and goes to Atul-"Haan Sir ne kaha tha tere ko kuch tests karne hain"

Atul-"Haan chal na bhai" and turning towards JP "Suno main Dr.Naina ko yahaan page kar raha hoon. Mujhe zaroori kaam hai. Dr.Naina aayein, toh unhein kehna ki special ward 1 ki duty hai unki". Saying this Atul and Armaan leave. JP says to himself 'Sahi mein Dr.Atul keh rahe thei, boxer hai 1st class ka, kya lohe ki tarah body hai.Sid Bhaiya aapne toh sher ko lalkar diya hai. Daad deni hogi par Dr.Riddhima ji ki choice ko! All in one!'

Administration Board room- Dr.Shashank, Dr.Riddhima, Dr.Keerti, Dr.Abhimanyu, and Dr.Nikita are seated. Dr.Sid is standing in front of them.

Abhi-"Dr.Siddhant aapko pata hai aapki is harkat ki severity kya hai?"

Siddhant-"Mujhe ab ehsas ho gaya hai"

Keerti-"Dr.Siddhant, yahaan ya videsh mein jab hum ek female patient ki operation bhi karte hain toh ensure karte hain ki unki privacy par koi infringement na ho kyunki humein ehsas hai unki privacy unki izzat ki kya maanyaata hai. Aur yeh hum tab bhi laagu karte hain jab observatory se koi interns nahin dekh rahein hain. Aur phir aapki yeh harkat?" (BTW this is a true fact guys. I've been in a medical observatory watching an angioplasty of a female patient)

Nikita-"Aapki yeh harkat ek sujhe huye professional ki nahin hai Dr.Siddhant Modi"

Shanky-"Hum jab apne interns ko chunte hain, toh expect karte hain kam se kam unhein etiquettes maloom ho. Humein lagta hai ki jinhe hum ne pick kiya hai, woh mature, sensible insaan ho. Par aap ne toh ek vehshi ki tarah harkat ki"

Siddhant-"I'm very sorry. Dr.Riddhima I'm really sorry"

Riddhima just turns her face away in disgust.

Abhi-"Chunki aapke 6 months kareeb kareeb khatm ho gaye hain, hum aapko Sanjeevani Madras transfer kar rahein hain. Aap apni baanki intership wahin par finish kareinge. Aur aap ko Sanjeevani Mumbai se bar kar diya jaata hai. Because you do not have a criminal background, nor there is in any registered offense against you Dr.Siddhant, aapki medical practice ki license ko hum nahin revoke kareinge.You can leave from here now this very instant. Apna pager aur ID nurse station par return kar dijiyega. Meeting adjourned"

Siddhant leaves from the board room. Shanky with Riddhima goes towards Abhimanyu

Shanky-"Dr.Abhimanyu, aapke liye yeh kaafi muskil hua hoga, but thank you. Aapne impartiality dikhai. Sanjeevani se aapko issi tarah ki justice ki umeed thi."

Riddhima-"Thank you Dr.Modi, aapse yahin umeed thi."

Abhi-"Dr.Riddhima, main khud sharminda hoon. Sid ki wajah main bhi aapse ankhen nahin mila pa raha"

Riddhima-"Nahin Dr.Modi isme aapki koi galti nahin hai. Aap eisa na sochein"

Abhi-"Suna hai Dr.Armaan bhi aa gaye. Kaise hain woh?"

Riddhima-"Haan woh aaj hi aaya. Theek hai woh. Mujhe ussay milna bhi hai abhi. Toh main chalti hoon"

Keerti-"Main bhi chalti hoon aapke saath Riddhima, Dr.Armaan ko dekhe ek arsa ho gaya. Shubhankar baata rahe thei unke baare aaj subah."

Shanky-"Mujhe kuch kaam hai, par Dr.Riddhima please Dr.Armaan ki test reports mujhe aap jald se jald pahooncha dein"

Riddhima as she leaves-"yes Dr.Shashank"
Edited by averma4583 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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loved it.. came here after giving a semniar for 40 min and seeing your part it made me feel good.
please write more.
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PART 11

Sanjeevani, Special Ward 1:

Naina to JP-"Toh tune Dr.Armaan ko dekha JP?"

JP-"Haan flower ji, Dr.Atul ne bilkul sahi kaha tha, kaafi tandurust hain woh Dr.Armaan ji. Humein toh khud hi kaafi darr laga unse"

Naina-"Achha. Chal ab yahaan ki duty khatm ho gayi. Cafe mein jaate hain. Yuvi ko bhi wahin aana hai. Chalo chalte hain"

Abhimanyu's office:

Nikki-"Tumne sahi faisla kiya Abhi. Jaanti hoon tumhe bahot takleef huyi, par kam se kam uski medical license nahin revoke huyi, aur na hi uske khilaaf court mein defamation charges huye. Aur ussay door bhejna hi sahi kyunki Armaan toh ussay maare bina nahin chhorega. Tum jaante ho na Armaan kitna protective hai aur bhi Riddhima ke liye. Ab tum khud ko uski jagah rakho, kya tum shaant reh sakoge!"

Abhi-"Tum theek keh rahi ho Nikki. Yehin sahi hai sab ke liye. I hope Sid eisi koi harkat phir na kare.Yeh Sanjeevani mein kaam karne walon ke iye bhi message ki unprofessional, vengeful attitude nahin tolerate kiya jaayega"

Cafeteria:

Sister Stella seated with some nurses and ward boys, gossiping about Riddhima. Naina, Yuvi, and JP sitting at another table.

Riddhima comes and sits a table with coffee waiting for Armaan. She feels uncomfortable with Sister Stella's sarcastic double meaning comments. Siddhant comes to apologize a last time.

Sid-"Dr.Riddhima, I'm sorry. Main aapse aakhri apologise karne aaya hoon"

Riddhima just kept looking down at her coffee getting angry.

Sister Stella commenting-"Aaj kal ki ladkiyain hamesha ek na ek ladke phansa kar rakhti hain."

Riddhima all hurt, tears starting to flow from her eyes. Sid more perplexed, "I really didn't know Dr.Riddhima baat itni badh jaayegi"

Just then Sid feels a strong hand on his shoulder. He turns around and comes face to face with Armaan. The whole cafe becomes silent. Armaan looks at Riddhima's teary face, and his anger flairs up. His eyes are bloodshot red. He looks towards Sister Stella, and clenches his fist. He picks a glass and squeezes it to control his temper. the glass breaks and Armaan's hand is bleeding.

Upcoming: Armaan faces off with Sid

Edited by averma4583 - 15 years ago

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