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Posted: 15 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: swetha10

Wow wonderful update.. very very well written... Hope the same happens in the show as well.. luved it yaar...waiting to c AR together..



thanq so much😊
i wish the same too.
keep reading.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: navtinder

awesome part.

I am feeling bad for Sid, all three are hurt for no real fault for anyone of them. But still armaan and ridhima are just meant to be.
please unite them soon, make ridhima stop armaan.
Please update next part soon.



thanq😊
yeah i feel bad for all three of them. Its not their fault but they r made to suffer.
next part would b up soon.
keep reading.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#63

Hey thankd dear for the 7 th part liked it eagerly wiating for 8 th part and AR reunion.

Love you dear👏👏👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
#64

very nice

continue soon😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
#65
armaan-09 n juhi_dmg

thanq somcuh guys...
glad that u liked.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#66
came bak to your post after a looong time...its bravo dear...you shd be in the Creative dept of DMG..they need writters like you right now...I LOVED every word that came out of AMy's heart while talking to Dr Keerthi..you potrayed his emotions brilliantly ...👏👏

And goodness, The Atul PArt sent chills down my spine..specially Amy's CHAMP wen they wud meet for teh 1st time..awww, I sooo want that Atul comes back...Amy so so so so so much needs his champ right now...

Pt7 made a biiig impact on me dear...I really wish SId changes to the way you have put him up. RIght now, he behaves all obsessed, jealous and a hubby who keeps accusing his wife for being "characterless"...he had started sooo well in DMG..he was the only intern I had liked...but now, he is sooo frustrated...

Awww..and the AR seperation pains me sooo much...

Just a suggestion..can you really apply for the post in DMG creative dept...plssss...you are really needed there...please try to..you never know you shall be in there as an AR love story saviour!😳
Edited by IloveARLove - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: IloveARLove

came bak to your post after a looong time...its bravo dear...you shd be in the Creative dept of DMG..they need writters like you right now...I LOVED every word that came out of AMy's heart while talking to Dr Keerthi..you potrayed his emotions brilliantly ...👏👏

And goodness, The Atul PArt sent chills down my spine..specially Amy's CHAMP wen they wud meet for teh 1st time..awww, I sooo want that Atul comes back...Amy so so so so so much needs his champ right now...

Pt7 made a biiig impact on me dear...I really wish SId changes to the way you have put him up. RIght now, he behaves all obsessed, jealous and a hubby who keeps accusing his wife for being "characterless"...he had started sooo well in DMG..he was the only intern I had liked...but now, he is sooo frustrated...

Awww..and the AR seperation pains me sooo much...

Just a suggestion..can you really apply for the post in DMG creative dept...plssss...you are really needed there...please try to..you never know you shall be in there as an AR love story saviour!😳



awwww thanq so much for the appreciation..... 🤗so sweet of u...
I do wish that i could hav been there for the rescue of DMG... (however I m free in my vacation 😉)
i really wonder when v all can come up with some brilliant ideas like these.. y can't the CVs? ( guess they r out of their mind)
God , save us from more heartaches !!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#68
awwww thanq so much for the appreciation..... 🤗so sweet of u...
I do wish that i could hav been there for the rescue of DMG... (however I m free in my vacation 😉)
i really wonder when v all can come up with some brilliant ideas like these.. y can't the CVs? ( guess they r out of their mind)
God , save us from more heartaches !!!


I know...i am feeling so so down with the dmg crap storyline these days...waiting for your next update..i will rather read your story than see current DMG track...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: IloveARLove

awwww thanq so much for the appreciation..... 🤗so sweet of u...
I do wish that i could hav been there for the rescue of DMG... (however I m free in my vacation 😉)
i really wonder when v all can come up with some brilliant ideas like these.. y can't the CVs? ( guess they r out of their mind)
God , save us from more heartaches !!!



I know...i am feeling so so down with the dmg crap storyline these days...waiting for your next update..i will rather read your story than see current DMG track...

thanq so much......😊
next part is on its way... might take sumtime as i m giving my exams now... i'll pm u wen i m done with it..
thanx for reading n do continue...😊
Edited by perfectsmile - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hie guys.... thank you so much for appreciating my work. luv u all.🤗

So here comes the next part

Hope you like this one too.😊

Part 8 : "Shashank:I am sorry Riddhima"

Next day morning.

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Armaan's POV

(Walking through the corridors of Sanjeevani)

This place had been almost my home for the last two years. I laughed here, cried here. I fought here, apologized here. I loved here, was loved here. Yet everything seemed to be new now. Life had changed so much in Sanjeevani. I never expected that I would leave the place and people close to my heart, in such situation. Will I be able to live away from this place forever? I had no answer for that question. Infact there were many unanswered questions in my heart.

As I reached the reception, I saw Dr.Keerthi and other interns waiting for me with flowers to bid me good bye. I slowly walked towards them, happy to know that they love me so much. But one love I had always been wishing was not with me now.

"Good bye, Dr.Armaan. I'll miss you" said Dr.Keerthi. I could sense that those words came from deep in her heart. I was so touched. "Take care of yourself" she concluded handling me the flowers.

"I miss you too Dr.Keerthi" said I weakly and moved forward. I couldn't speak more.

"We miss you too Dr.Armaan. You had been our very good senior" said all the interns.

"Miss you all. Wish I could be back someday" it was all I managed to say. But I knew very well that would never happen. I moved still further towards the exit. I met Atul there. "Bye Champ. I'll miss you the most." I managed to say. "I am coming with you to the airport Armaan" said he in a stern voice. I couldn't say no.

Most of the Sanjeevani staff was there to bid last bye to me. But my eyes had been searching for one person all the time ' Riddhima. I didn't find her. My heart longed to see her for one last time. But she was not there. I didn't even find Sid. 'Bye Sid. Take care of Riddhima' I said to myself. I couldn't say bye to Riddhima as she would always stay with me in my heart.

My heart grew heavy with pain. But that's how life is and I accepted it. I sighed and walked out of Sanjeevani.

I called for a taxi and left for the airport. Atul tried to lighten the air around us but he was hardly successful. All the time throughout our journey to the airport I was surrounded by the wonderful moments I shared with everyone in Sanjeevani, especially Riddhima.

'I'll miss your presence, Riddhima. I love you. You are my life. Be happy.' I said to myself and closed my eyes.

Atul woke me up after sometime. We reached the airport. I went to the enquiry to confirm the flight timing while Atul said that he would take care of my luggage.

I returned back to where Atul sat and said "The flight is late by 4 hours."

He smiled and said "It's good. I get to spend more 4 hours with you". I returned a smile and sat in the chair beside him.

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Sid's POV

(In Shashank's Study)

"Dad" I said as I entered Shashank's study noticing that he was going through a case file.

"Siddhanth!" said he at the sight of me. "Come. It's good to see you here. Riddhima is in her room. I guess she is getting ready to go to Sanjeevani." He said pointing his hand towards the chair asking me to sit.

"Dad, I want to talk to you." I said. "I want to talk to you about Riddhima..... and Armaan." I said rather slowly. He looked at me in sheer shock. I felt embarrassed. I wished that I was never in such a situation. I was also a bit scared to talk to him as I was never good at talking serious matters.

"Siddhanth, what do you want to talk about?" said he shifting in his seat.

I didn't understand where to start from. "Dad, Armaan is leaving Sanjeevani today." said I.

"I know. Dr.Keerthi talked to me about it." He said and again went through the case file.

"Dad, I think you know what I am talking about. I don't want Armaan to leave from Riddhima's life. I want them to live happy." I blurted out.

"Siddhanth, are you out of your mind? Riddhima is your wife. You are in her life." He said shutting the case file.

"Yes dad. I am in her life but not in her heart. You know it very well. Riddhima is not happy dad and nor am I. Riddhima's happiness lies only with Armaan. Armaan is her world." The words came out of me stronger than what I expected.

"I know Sid. But it's too late now. It's not possible now. She is married to you." He said.

"Dad, we are living in the society and not for the society. I know we are bound by the society but it's ones happiness that matters at last. And Riddhima can never be happy staying away from Armaan and you know it very well than me." I said. But he remained silent.

"Dad, Riddhima is Armaan's life and Armaan Riddhima's. They can never wipe away each other from their hearts. Both are just breathing, not living. Let them live, Dad. They have the right to be happy. Let's not separate them." I said wiping a tear that just escaped my eye.

Shashank was in tears by then. He seemed to be convinced of what I said but didn't speak for a few moments.

"And you Sid? Don't you have any feelings towards Riddhima?" he asked me. That was one question I prayed would not come from him. That was one answerless question I was haunted for many days.

"I do love Riddhima, dad, but not at the cost of her happiness. I just wanted her to be happy. And her happiness is Armaan." I heard the words in my voice.

Shashank stood up and came towards me. I too stood up. He came closer and hugged me. "I am very proud of you Sid. You have a very brave heart which I lacked. You understood Riddhima more than I did. If I had a son, I wish he were like you. Thank you so much. Thank you." He said and drew back.

We remained silent for few moments and I turned back to leave. Then I saw her. I saw her standing against the wall near the door, eyes bloodshot. Since when was she standing there?

Shashank moved forward by two steps when Riddhima came running towards her and cradled in his arms. "I am so sorry Riddhima. I put you across all the troubles. I failed to understand you. I am so sorry" he said caressing Riddhima.

Then she looked at me with eyes filled with tears but didn't speak. 'Thank you Sid, for everything' I read her thoughts.

After sometime I and Riddhima started for Sanjeevani. I felt relieved. I looked at Riddhima. There was a hidden spark in her eyes and I noticed it. After many days I saw life in them. And I was happy. I was happy for both of them. But was I really happy? I didn't dare to think about it.

While I drove, my mind was surrounded by the moments I shared with Riddhima. They bought a soft smile on my face. They are very less in number, but as many enough to get me going!

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So howz it guys?? Worth a read?
Do comment and let me know ur thoughts.
Any ideas to make it more beautiful r also welcome.
Thanx for reading and do continue.

coming up : Final destination 😉- AR together

ps: In sid's convo with shashank, the thoughts are purely mine. No offense to anyone's feelings.

ps: some typing and gramatical errors might have crept in. plz ignore them.

Edited by perfectsmile - 15 years ago

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