AR FF-'My every breath in ur name' final pt in p41 - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: mayuri.vet

yet another beautiful piece of writing........amazing job!!!!!!!!!!
fantabulous........no words to express!!!!!!!! ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›

when is the next part coming up?
please can u pm me the link?



Thanq soo much. I m glad you liked it.๐Ÿ˜Š
I m working on the next part. I'll pm u wen its done.
Thanx for reading.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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beautifully written.................a treat for ar fans....................thanks for writting this ff......continue soon and plz add me to the pm list.............
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Posted: 15 years ago
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it's really great
keep up the good work๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
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Posted: 15 years ago
#14
Hey beautiful FF.. luved the updates.. do continue soon.... n plzz do pm me when u update..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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ITS GREAT,AWESOME,
I HOPE THE END IS AR REUNION.
CONTINUEE DEAR
AR ROCKXXXXX
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hie frns... thanx for ur sweet comments. I am really happy u liked it. Keep reading.
So here comes the third part. Hope you like this one too..๐Ÿ˜Š

Part 3 - Sid talks to Atul about AR's past

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Armaan's POV

(Armaan in the forest)

I spent the whole night in the forest staring into space thinking where the destiny bought me in my life. When I thought that I would never loose my heart to a vulnerable girl like Riddhima, I fell in love with her. I was crazy about her. When I was about to step into a serious phase of relationship with her, I was forced to leave her alone. When I fought with the fate to be back to her, there is no way to reach my destination. It's believed that we don't get what we desire but rather land up with what we deserve. Is this what I deserve?

The soft rays of the sun extending slowly over the forest brought me out of my thoughts. I stood up and walked towards the orphanage not sure of what to do. I went straight to my room and fell flat on my bed.

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Sid's POV

(Sid with Atul in Atul's cabin)

"Dr.Atul I want to talk to you about Riddhima" said I slowly. Atul softly smiled at me and came towards me. He looked straight into my eyes and said "Whats's the matter Sid? Why are you so lost?" he said.

I hesitated a moment and told him what I want to talk about. "I want to know about Armaan's and Riddhima's relationship." I wondered whether it's me who spoke those words. Atul was surprised to hear those words from me.

"Why do you want to know about Armaan, Sid? Its Riddhima's past. Ridz is struggling hard to forget the life with Armaan. Why do you want to dig the past and makes lives more complicated?" he said

"Dr. Atul, I am not making lives complicated. I am rather trying to resolve the complications in the lives of all three of us. And Armaan is not Riddhima's past." I wondered whether Atul knows about Armaan being back." Armaan is back, Dr. Atul. He is back in Sanjeevani"

I could sense that Atul was shocked to hear that Armaan is back. After a moment he was rather happy that his friend is back safe.

Then he said with weak voice and eyes filled with tears "Is it true, Sid? Is Armaan back? Is he fine? Where is he now? Is he in Sanjeevani?" He was eager to meet his friend and shot innumerable questions at me. I interrupted him and said "Armaan is fine. He is in Lonavala now. He will be back in few days" said I. I was about to say something when Atul asked me one final question that I had no answer with me. "What about Riddhima, Sid? Does she know that Armaan is back? Did she say anything about it to you?" asked he in stern voice.

I told him everything that happened in our lives since Armaan's return. Atul fell back in his seat and closed his eyes for few minutes.

Then I asked him the question that was bothering me from many days."Dr.Atul, do you think Riddhima can ever be happy without Armaan?"

Atul was searching for words to answer me. He finally managed to say "Sid please, please don't'."

I cut him and said "Dr.Atul, please, I want to see Riddhima happy. I need to find out what her real happiness is. For that I need to understand the relationship she shared with Armaan. Please help me."I almost begged him.

He sat silent for few minutes and finally started speaking about Armaan and Riddhima.

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Armaan's POV

(In his room in orphanage)

I can't take this confusion any more. I can't bear her angry glares anymore. I have had enough. I have to talk to Riddhima.

I was determined and went to Riddhima's room. She was not in her room. I thought she might be in wash room and waited for few minutes. Making sure that she's not there, I turned around to step out of the room bumped into a person. Even if I didn't look at the person, I could sense that one person- Riddhima.

She immediately moved away from me and stared at me for a moment. I was searching for the lost love in her eyes. She blinked and looked away. She quickly made her way into the room when I stopped her.

"Why are you here Armaan?" she asked. That one particular question shook me. What did she mean? Was she asking about why I was back in her life? My heart twisted with pain.

"Riddhima, I want to talk to'" She cut me and said "I don't want to talk to you Armaan."

"Riddhima, but'" I still tried to stay calm. She didn't allow me to complete and said"There is nothing between us to talk about. Please leave Armaan" She said rather angrily and tried to walk away.

But I was determined to talk to her. I took hold of her by her arms and pinned her to the wall, frustrated. "Riddhima, but I want to talk to you. How can you say that there is nothing between us? How can you Riddhima?" I just spat the words at her rudely.

She closed her eyes tightly and tears rolled down her cheek. I can never see Riddhima in pain. All my frustration was just washed away at the sight of her. I released her slowly out of my grip and stepped back. She slowly opened her eyes and looked at me.

"Riddhima, please listen to me" I said looking straight into her eyes and was lost.

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So??? liked it?? Do comment and let me know your thoughts....

Thanx for reading.

ps: some gramatical and typing errors might have crept in. Plz ignore them
Edited by perfectsmile - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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its was nicely written...........good part......continue soon.............waiting to read sensible thoughts like these..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Welcome tot he forum dear..
and three words from my end will say it all..
iT WAS AWESOME...

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: sisgeo

its was nicely written...........good part......continue soon.............waiting to read sensible thoughts like these..


thanq so much for reading. glad u liked it.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: IloveARLove

Welcome tot he forum dear..
and three words from my end will say it all..
iT WAS AWESOME...

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thanq so much for the warm wishes.๐Ÿ˜Š
happy that u likd the post.

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