Dhoka 2 -A Raj-Naina story; Part 28 - Page 35 - Page 20

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Again a very well written update dear....am always engrossed tooo much in ur parts....however....the way u pulled off the Raj Naina scene....it was brilliant...and highly thoughtful and perfect as well....very very nicely done...and it was extremely beautiful as well...hehe. I loved it a loootttt....
thnx for your comments..... I am glad you liked that scene..... took me really really long to write it.... I had to imagine it (which wasnt too tough 😉) and then write it in words (which is very tough 😆).......

And now Abhimanyu n Shalini n Nandini....hmm....the characterizations hav been done nicely....I am specially wooed by Nandini...hehe.
Ahh... but unfortunately we wont we going further into Abhi-Nandini any more.... 😕 There are already too many people in Dhoka and if I start another track, it's gonna end up like a damn serial..... 😆

But here Raj is angry coz of Abhimanyu's arrival for the same work as his....but soon....like a very intelligent officer....he finds out the depth of the situation....also vows to end this game of deception...once and for all....that was really very nice...and a very engaging scene btwn Raj n BC....I simply loved that portion....as it was done magnificently....
thnx again!

And abt the register marriage....well lets see wat the handsome husband does abt that....hehe. Ahem... 😉

W8ing for the next part now....

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

You tell me what should now i say about it? 😕 😕 😕
I mean ur updates to the fic is very low, once in a month.
It breaks the rhythm yaar.
I just love this story n ur way of writing so much and u update very less it doesn't please me.
I know.... 😕 I know how difficult it is when the rhythm gets broken..... more so when you are the person writing it.... 😆 Imagine I need to read through the previous 2-3 updates just to get a feel of the story and then there is no time to write!! 😡 😆
Jokes apart, my life has become so much more hectic nowadays.... I am also writing another story and I never seem to get enough time from my work to continue with the updates.....
I know it has been a couple of months since I last updated Dhoka but I promise I will put up one part soon..... and I am also planning to move it faster towards the end..... better than losing you readers I say.....

Now don't say that i too update very less ( i am not a g8 writer like u dear 😉 😉 😉 )
Ok now coming to the update fantastic. 👏 👏 👏
This was exactly the update for which i was waiting from a long time.
I mean Kuch na Kaho se Chahe tum kuch na kaho, maine sun liya..........
k saathi pyaar ka, mujhe chun liya............
hehhehe.... one of my all time fav songs! 😃

Thank god all the confusions left Naina's mind and now she is overwhelmed that he loves her the most.
He controlled his emotions and didn't impose himself over her so fastly so that Naina can get enough time to take another step in their relationship.
But the thing i like the most in this update when Naina provoked him Raj said no otherwise he was unable to control his desires too.
He is ready to give her time to adjust..... but he is a man after all.... 😉


The best part was the confrontation of Shalu n Abhi. As Abhi thought she looked really better than that and the way she behaved very formally with him was really nice.
Shukr hai Abhi did one right thing by telling Nandini about his n Shalu's past relationship. Nandini has a believe now over her husband and it must be.
Both Abhi and Nandini were bound in a relationship they were not ready for... Abhi since he was in love with Shal and Nandini since she was too young and not ready to be someone's wife.... but they kind of grew up together and understood each other along the way.... Nandini trusts Abhi mainly because he did not hide his past.. Neither did he become disloyal to her... although it was a compromise, they are content and maybe even happy with each other.....

Some relationships begin on the basis of compromise... it is then upto the folks involved to make it not seem a burden.....

But whatever Yudi did i was not in fevour of that just like Shalu. He could use another thing to call her back yaar, this was so childish n what was the need to hurt himself?
Now Yudi and Shal are a very unconventional couple..... Yudi might be younger to Shal in age but he hides a very intense and lonely young man behind his jovial nature.... the pressures of being a Sahni heir and the taunts he had to listen because he could not become the protege his father expected makes him bottle up everything inside him.... He was never a simple guy...

Agreed he could have used any other excuse but this just shows how complicated he is..... oh and also impulsive.... his impulsiveness will play a big role in the future....

Raj was angry when he heard about Abhi here back in KMA n this thinking was right but these all r special affair of Army n they never take risk.
BC could understand Raj's condition so well. He didn't want to see him hurt too, i think he likes Rajveer.
Either I forgot to explain it or you forgot (I understand its been so many months and updates 😆) but BC and Chitraji always had a soft spot for Navin and then Raj... Raj was the son they never had but of course BC is not that demonstrative with his emotions and when Raj joined KMA he was an emotional wreck too.... It was Navin who pulled him out of his despair and gave him a meaning to live... and when Navin died Raj too shut himself off....

BC had always been soft towards Raj but their antagonism comes from disagreement over Navin....

Neelu n her drama, i always think like that about her. She wants Alekh but it's not that much easy after seeing Alekh's background for Yudi's family.
How can there be drama without Neelu? And vice versa... 😆😆 Personally I think the Alekh-Neelu story began very nicely in the show in Season1 but it was a half-baked course of story, just like many other tracks in LTL....

I think Raj n Naina will do something in this matter. 😛 😛 😛
Pls yaar try to update this soon.

Originally posted by: saomom

Two things:

1. Fab FF - just read the whole thing and I'm totally hooked.

2. What does Dhoka mean?

2.5 I'm not familiar with the characters of Raj & Naina - Help!

Okay, three things:

3. What's with no updates in forever? I just invested hours only to find that you haven't updated in 2 months? Ack!😆

Apparently four things:

4. Please add me to your pm list for this one!

And a fifth:

5. Thanks!

Originally posted by: bono_jostna

just escaped my whole nights study to read it....i was a mad fan of capt. Rajveer singh shekhawat and of course the cute cadet naina! I just got back to the tym where i used to wait for the nxt part of LRL with wild imagination! Plz do not discontinue....i m ready to wait but plz update!
And add me to ur pm list..

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

Shilpaaa tu badi dhokebaaz hai re ! I guess we have no option then to wait for your update, despite the looong gap !

Originally posted by: tina_1234

i guess u not continuin

Originally posted by: Natasha006

Please update soon....I have read all the parts since morning....and I badly want to read the next part....

Originally posted by: shreyamathur_18

your fic is superb .........pls continue it . Though i read first thread till now and it is awesum............👏👏