Dhoka 2 -A Raj-Naina story; Part 28 - Page 35 - Page 21

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Posted: 14 years ago
yeti waiting for the update eagerly...😊
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Howdy everyone..... 😛
Before you go ahead and throw stuff at me, here me out.... *ducks behind a table* 😛

I know I know.... lambi judaai 😆😆 but I went to India for a month (where I had no time to even open up MS Word!) and then work became hectic (gosh.... end of fiscal yr and I never guessed I had to work so much for that!) and then I was unwell for the past month and recuperating from an eye surgery and well, my laptop and TV were confiscated from me so that I can recover well..... IMAGINE my plight with not even a laptop to amuse me!!!!!!!!

Anyway I am now well and back with the next installment of Dhoka.... I am updating Dhoka and MID alternately and if you post your wonderful comments sooner, I will update that much sooner.... and anyway I plan to wrap up Dhoka in the next month/2 months.... so its all in your hands now.... give me long and quick comments and I update quicker..... sounds like a deal? 😉😆😆

If I did not reply to your comment, I might not have had time to..... but let me assure you I read each and every one many times and your comments are my boost..... and bournvita and horlicks..... *throws hands up* I know I know.... bad joke! 😆😆


Warning (yeah back with it baby 😉): 17+ only. Mature content and language.

Part 28

The atmosphere in Rajveer's home was gloomy that evening. The cadets had all gathered there, albeit with long faces as they helplessly watched Neelu sobbing on Yudi's shoulder and Alekh patting her head awkwardly. He knew not how to console her.. Heck, he did not know how to console anybody for that matter, especially someone who was mourning the severance of the filial relationship.

Raj gestured to Naina silently through his eyes to take care of Neelu and sighed, the unfortunate happenings of the afternoon playing in his mind. He did not understand Mr.Sahni at all.. Why would a man be so intent on killing his own daughter's happiness? He had actually come with a huge group of lawyers and policemen to KMA, saying some crap about Neelu being held against her will at KMA and he was there to take her back home. Of course everybody could see that he was the one forcefully taking her anywhere! By the time the staff of KMA heard about it and arrived at the scene, a huge showdown had taken place at the gates of KMA, with Mr.Sahni humiliating both Neelu and Alekh and their relationship in derogatory terms. Raj had had to intervene to avoid matters from slipping away even further but Mr.Sahni had just bluntly declared that his daughter was dead and she should not be showing her face ever again to him. Things might have probably ended there but Mr.Sahni had actually proceeded to curse Neelu that she would soon find herself sold into the flesh trade if she trusted a convict such as Alekh and Rajveer had seen red. He had sternly but firmly asked Mr.Sahni to clear the premises since he was now not related to Neelu and that he himself would take full responsibility for Alekh and Neelu. The unpleasant confrontation did end there, but not before leaving a devastated Alekh and a completely shattered Neelu along with a disgusted Yudi.

As he now saw Naina leading Neelu to the kitchen, he sighed and looked around at the cadets. "Why are you looking so forlorn? Nothing is lost" "But Mr.Sahni--" began Sameera but Raj cut her off, "--was being downright cruel to his own daughter and not willing to see the situation like a father should. I understand he has problems with Alekh but this is not the way a mature man goes about handling things. He only managed to antagonize and alienate Yudi and Neelu from himself"

He looked at Naina speaking softly to Neelu from the corner of his eyes and was relieved to find that Neelu's sobs had finally reduced to sniffs. He fixed his stormy gray eyes on Alekh. "Are you ready to take responsibility of Neelu?", he asked quietly. The cadets were taken aback by their Rajveer Sir asking such a question. The man, who was as emotionless as a rock until a few months ago, who never stepped into any of their lives, was now able to understand Alekh and Neelu's love and was even suggesting they get married! Oh how love changes a man and melts the stone walls he erects around his heart!

"Apun ek fauji banne ke baad hi Neelu se shaadi manana chahta tha. Lekin abhi apun apni zimmedari nibayega. Aap apun aur Neelu ki shaadi karwa deejiyega Sir" Alekh looked into Rajveer's eyes determinedly and replied without any hesitation.

***

Three hours and countless arguments later, BC gave his reluctant nod to the wedding. "Teek hai Cadet Alekh. But I can grant you only 2 weeks permission. Now get out of my sight everyone and let me work. KMA has become a wedding planning venue nowadays" he grumbled the last sentence under his breath and of course everybody simply ignored him although they all heard him.

The cadets rejoiced outside BC's office but Alekh could not hide his bafflement. "Shaadi keliye 2 hafte kyun chahiye? Ek din kaafi hai na?" The cadets immediately burst out into howls of laughter and even Raj could not hide the slight grin on his face and shook his head.

"Kyun saala! Tujhe honeymoon pe nahi jaana hai kya! Poor Neelu!" Huda slapped his back amidst loud guffaws. As Alekh blushed for the very first time in his life and Neelu buried her crimson face on Sameera's shoulder, Rajveer walked out of the celebrating group holding Naina's hands firmly in his.

***

Raj pushed open the door to his quarters and after his usual security checks, shut the door and pinned Naina against it forcefully. He pressed his body against her, burying his fingers in her silky hair to pull her head back and bent down, nuzzling into her fragrant neck. Naina gasped aloud when his warm breaths hit her neck. She shut her eyes tight and fisted her hands against his shoulders, tilting her head back for more of his sweet assault.

"Hmm.. I missed you" he hummed against her skin and she felt goosebumps rise and spread over every inch of her skin. She wondered at Rajveer's mastery over her body; a single touch, a light caress and she was melting in his arms, oblivious to everything in the world except her husband and his touch on her body. She knew he was restraining himself from claiming her, she had seen the barely-there control in his eyes whenever he had tried to keep his desires in check and the realization that her husband wanted her badly sent a shiver through her everytime. She had hardly been able to breathe through her husband's sensual assaults on her over the past week, everytime he came near her. And he did not even go further than gentle kisses and light caresses over her fully-clothed body! She shuddered to think of what would happen to her the day her husband took their foreplay further to make her his; she was not even sure she would survive it if she became breathless with just his touches.

Raj just stayed buried in her neck for a few minutes, sighing blissfully. But the scent of her body drowned his senses and before long he was pressing hot little kisses on her neck. Naina squirmed under his hold, trying to break free but her half-hearted protests were silenced when he tightened his hold on her and pressed her closer to his body, arching her back and bending over her in the process. He ran his lips down the smooth curve to where her neck met her shoulder and sucked the skin there, hard, before biting down gently and Naina moaned aloud before hissing in pleasure that shot through her body at the sharp pain. Raj soothed the tender spot with his tongue and Naina jerked against him, distracting him from heaven. He raised his head a bit to look at her and drew a sharp breath at the sight of his wife. Her hair was hanging in tousled waves around her face and she was hanging from his arms, her own legs too weak to support her anymore. Her eyes were glazed over in passion and her lush mouth was parted, quivering and beckoning him with innocent sensuality. Her cheeks grew hotter under his gaze and his eyes strayed to the love bite he had just given his wife and his eyes grew heated and intense at the sight of the tenderly bruised skin.

He drew her even closer and breathed against her crimson cheeks, his own gray eyes clouded over with desire. "Beautiful" he whispered huskily and brushed his lips across her cheeks to her ear. He lightly traced her ear lobe with his lips, nipping it gently with his teeth and Naina forgot the whole world. She did not have the power to even moan at the sensations that radiated from wherever he touched her. And when his large hand wandered under her kameez to lightly stroke the curve of her waist, she forgot to breathe. Her legs buckled under her when his hands flirted higher and higher to trace the side of her breast and she wrapped her hands around his neck to keep herself from dissolving into a puddle at his feet.

"You are beautiful Naina.. and you are only mine" he rasped in a rough voice against her ear and proceeded to cover her face with urgent, hot kisses everywhere except her lips, while his hand continued to boldly stroke her breast through the lacy bra. His words pierced through her muddled brain and she shuddered violently at the possessiveness in his words, his touch on her body pulling her deeper and deeper into the vortex of his passion. She was drowning in the sensations and was ready to surrender herself to him completely when his thumb brushed against the hard peak and his name escaped her lips in a fierce gasp.

"Raaj... pl.. pleaseee"

"Please what Naina" he growled in a low tone, his voice rough with desire and he kissed the corner of her lips.

She did not remember what she was about to say. She merely looked at him from under her eyelashes and said the first thing she needed the most. "Please.. ki.. kiss me"

Raj stilled immediately and looked into her eyes, his desire-clouded gray pools staring magnetically and fascinatedly at her hazel eyes that had darkened to near-black in passion. Slowly sense started to seep into him and even though his sanity was hanging by a thin thread, he reined himself with his ever-famous control.

"If I kiss you now I will have to make love to you Naina" his voice was still gravelly and lust warred with love in his eyes. "I will have to make love to you right here right now, taking you against this damn wall. I don't want it to be rushed and hurried Naina. No, I will not allow that when all I want is to explore each and every inch of your body with my eyes, my hands and my mouth. I will have you writhing under me, completely addicted to my touch and when all you can think of is me and my lips and my hands, I will take you again and again and again, until the pleasure floods you completely and you willingly surrender your soul to me. I will make you mine and we will be bound for eternity" His voice dropped lower and grew deeper with each word and her eyes widened simulatenously, his words washing over her like a sea of ecstasy until she felt the mini explosions in her body that were caused just by his words and his voice. Her mouth opened in a silent scream as the sensations conjured up by his words spread through her body in waves of glorious rapture.

Naina slumped against him finally and he caught her tightly before swinging her up in his arms and walking over to the couch with unsteady steps. He dropped down on the couch and held her against his chest tightly, waiting for the tremors in her body to die down. He caught sight of the tears in her eyes and hugged her fiercely, silencing her fears with his soothing words. He did not regret moving too fast with her, although he would have preferred to wait. But when Naina looked like a sultry temptress in his arms without even trying, he lost every common sense and blurted out everything he wanted to do to her sweet, sweet body. He was not surprised she was scared by his words, hell, he was scared himself at the depth of his passion and feelings for her! He simply stroked her hair and back, calming her down, while he breathed deeply in and out, aware of her breathing following his like always.

Naina held on to the collar of her husband's shirt with all the strength she could manage from her boneless body as her breathing slowed and her body stopped shaking and shivering. She was crushed against him and her face was smothered in his broad chest but she wanted to be even closer to him. She wanted to be joined with him so irrevocably that nobody would be able to figure out where he ended and she started. She wanted to melt into him completely and accept him with everything in her. She could not fathom the need in her and the utterly new feelings frightened her to the core but Rajveer's thumping heartbeat and deep breaths calmed her fear and proved that she was not the only one affected. She raised heavy-lidded eyes to his face and stared at him with helpless want.

"Please" she whimpered in a low voice, her voice reflecting the earth-shattering explosions she had just had. "Please make me yours"

"I will Naina" he replied in a whisper and kissed the top of her head. "I will make you mine. But it will be after I remove your helplessness on your father's taint. I will make you mine after I uncover the truth behind Captain Navin's death. But for now, sleep well, my love" He gathered her closer and rocked her like a baby, muttering calming words in her ear until she fell asleep cradled in his lap.

***

Naina woke up very early the next morning, on the bed and deeply wrapped in her husband's strong and warm arms. She looked up at Rajveer's chiseled face relaxed in slumber and memories of the previous night assailed her, making her turn a deep and dark crimson. She was mortified at how wantonly she had let go of her inhibitions and how brazenly she had asked her husband to make her his. She remembered how helpless she had felt, like an animal in heat, and buried her face in her hands, trying to make the embarrassing moments go away. She tried to twist away from Rajveer's embrace, too ashamed to remain in his arms and her restless moving shook Raj out of his slumber.

Raj held Naina tighter in his arms before he opened his eyes and looked down at his beautiful wife who suddenly couldn't look him in the eye. One look at Naina's red face and he understood that she was too embarrassed about the previous night. He pulled her closer when she tried to pry his hands away from around her and brought her on top of his body, arresting her movements with his strong grip. He tried to make her look into his eyes but when she adamantly looked anywhere but him, he held her chin and lifted her face to his level.

"There is nothing to be ashamed of Naina" he began directly, "I have every right to see you in all your passion. Mein jaantha hoon tum kisiko apni vulnerability nahi dikhana chahti ho lekin mein tumhara pati hoon. Mujhse kuch mat chupana. Koi parda nahi hona chahiye humare beech. There are no walls between us anymore and I want you to be yourself with me. Be it your weakness, anger, vulnerability or passion, I want to be the only one to see it and you need not be ashamed of yourselves for that. Mera sab kuch tumhareliye open hai and I want the same from you. I want the entire package. Mujhe poora haq hai"

His eyes glittered intensely and Naina couldn't do anything except nod her head in acceptance. She somehow felt the passion they had shared the previous night had brought them more intimate than ever and had bound their souls together in a tight knot, forever. She stared into his eyes deeply and without breaking their gaze, bent down and placed a soft kiss on his lips. Raj tightened his hold around her even more, to control himself from pouncing on his innocently seductive wife and simply held her when she buried her face in his neck.

He caught sight of the brightening sky outside and decided to forego his jog for that day. He had more pressing matters to consider. He slowly stroked his wife's hair and gently turned her around, resting on his elbows while he stared down at her lovely face. He tucked a strand of her hair behind her ear and leaned in to kiss her forehead lingeringly. He rubbed her bottom lip with his thumb but before he got carried away, he knew he had to talk to her about the plan he had devised the previous night when Naina fell asleep in his arms.

"Naina I have a plan to make Navin Sir's killers come forward" he began.

***

Captain Abhimanyu Chauhan hesitated for a few minutes before knocking on the door of Rajveer's quarters and the door was opened almost immediately by Naina. She gave him an uncomfortable smile and nodded, inviting him in before she latched the door and turned towards Raj and Shalini who were already seated in the living room. The air in the room cackled with tension, with the 3 people, who had once been the closest of friends, sitting in strained silence. Naina broke the building tension when she reappeared with a pot of coffee and when they all had a steaming mug of coffee in their hand, Raj cleared his throat.

"Captain Chauhan and Captain Singhal, I had called you both to discuss some very important and sensitive developments about the triggers. And there is no safer place that my home which is probably one of the very few places in KMA that is not bugged at the moment, just because I sweep my house everyday for them. And both of you should be aware by now that I came to KMA more than a year ago to take up the security of the nuclear triggers. I have been protecting them until now and I now have intelligence reports to indicate that there will be an attempt to steal the triggers in the very near future" He stopped for a moment to look at his colleagues. Shalini sat with a concerned look on her face while Abhimanyu sat at the edge of his seat, listening intently. They were not 3 ex-best friends at the moment, they were 3 of the best officers of KMA, focused on protecting the nation's sensitive defense warheads.

Raj took 2 files from the desk in front of him and handed each a copy. "Here is a copy of a very important intel report from one of my most trusted sources and this file does not leave this house. We will destroy the copies once the meeting is over" While Shalini and Abhimanyu read the report, Raj proceeded to fill them on the background of the triggers and his own suspicions on Captain Navin's death and ensuing defame.

"My source has a very good reason to believe that Major Nair or whoever that was here, was not really the link to the Chief here. While the Chief himself is only a civilian with strong defense ties nevertheless, there is another officer in the defense who is the Chief's right hand man and a very important link to him. So if we bring this person out and expose him, we effectively cut out the Chief's main link. Phir uske paas koi raasta nahi hai aur usko bahar aana padega. Straight into our trap"

Abhimanyu nodded his head approving his plan and tapped the report. "Since the scene of action for all the events over the past 8 years has been at KMA, can we assume safely that now again we have a war at hand at KMA?" "Correct Captain Chauhan. Infact my source swears on his life that this right hand man is connected to KMA very deeply and I tend to agree with my source's instincts a lot" Raj said, thinking proudly of the man who was indispensable to his own undercover operations, Lt Bunty Chaubey.

"We have strong proofs to indicate that this man, the link to Chief, is at present at KMA. And he is none other than Major Bhargava" Raj looked from Shalini to Abhimanyu and was somehow not surprised that neither of them looked surprised at the news. They had never got a good vibe from Major Bhargava even when they were just cadets in training.

"So how are we going to lure him out" Abhimanyu asked in a measured tone.

"We are going to turn Bhargava's game against himself. He was the one who influenced the Top Brass to send you here and create discord between us. We are going to make him panic a bit now" Raj paused and continued when he knew he had their undivided attention.

"I am going to disappear"

***

Shalini had planned carefully to make this secret meeting between the 3 of them look like a casual dinner. She had already called Nandini earlier in the day and had requested her to come to Rajveer's place a bit late and with some food to create an impression that she had been delayed with the cooking. Nandini now reached Rajveer's home and the conference between the 3 officers concluded once Naina and Nandini set the table for dinner and Shalini decided to help the ladies rather than sit with the men and stare at the tension that was growing between them when the official work got over.

When the 3 women were out of earshot, Abhimanyu turned to his once best friend and smiled hesitantly. "Kaise ho Raj? Shaadi muba--" "It's Captain Rajveer, Captain Chauhan. Only my friends call me Raj" he interrupted in a quiet and cold voice.

"Are we down to this Raj, I mean, Captain Rajveer? I see that 2 years of friendship did not mean anything to you"

"You are wrong Captain Chauhan. My friendship means everything to me. After all that is the only relationship I had, like a very old friend of mine once pointed out" he replied sarcastically, "And I am honoring the only friendship I ever had. My friendship with Shal"

Abhimanyu did not have any replies to that and he gave up defeatedly. He had lost his only friends due to his cowardly act and he will have to regret it for the rest of his life. The men were distracted by the sound of laughter from the kitchen and turned to see the 3 beautiful women laughing over something. "You know something Chauhan Saab? I can forgive you for everything you said about me and even Captain Navin but I can never forget you for breaking the heart of the girl who loved you more than everything in her life" he said quietly and Abhimanyu felt the dagger pierce even further as he watched the woman he had once loved smile uneasily at the woman who was his life now.

***

~Yeti

Note:
1. If this update seemed smaller.......... you are right! 😆 Actually the next scene became too big and there was not a logical place to break it.... so it gets fitted into the next update.... and that means I already have 3 pages for the next update.... 😉😆😆
2. I need to go back and check my PM list for Dhoka again..... sigh.... I have about 100 buddies now and I am pretty sure Dhoka does not have that many readers.... so until I figure it all out, if you did not receive a PM by accident, or if you DID receive a PM by accident, dont get wild.... 😆
3. I have become a bit patchy with my writing, so apologize if it did not seem like usual Yeti stuff... 😛
4. The LIKE button is right below and POST REPLY button is at the end of the page... whadya waiting for dude? 😆

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Posted: 14 years ago
great part
loved it
plz continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi Yeti

Welcome back..u know I was very eagerly waiting for the next update but u took ages to update this one..
anyways it was brilliant as always and as a writer u r exceptional..👏👏
Neelu's father is indeed a jerk..How can he insult is daughter like that in front of every1..🤢😡
Raj supported Alekh and Neelu throughout..love can indeed change any1 and Raj is no exception😃
Alekh is all set to marry Neelu..KMA is indeed turning into a marriage venue😆😆😆
Raj and Naina's romance is no longer subtle ..both r trying hard to control their passion for each other..u have written the scenes beautifully..It is indeed difficult for them now but Raj wants to make it more perfect for Naina.😊 he wants to proove Naveen innocent before making Naina his completely..
Naina was so embarrassed when she wake up in the morning but Raj is more confident abt his feelings now..😃
Wat is all this disappearance act on Raj's part?? Dont let anything happen to him..
Abhimanyu was so hesitant in Raj and Shalini's company but as officers they r best in their respective fields..
Raj can never forgive Abhi for jilting Shal..Abhimanyu knows this fact and he has to live with this guilt always..
Hope to see u upating more frequently now..😊
Bye
Edited by suhana.dixit - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hello yeti😊😊.............after a very long time u've come and welcome u to for coming back with the update😃😃.......well talking about the update it is very nice👏 but it was small😭😭 but not to worry when u've told that the next update will be longer than this one😃😃 hope to see the next update and see you soon😛😛 till then bye and take care.........
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part. loved it.
loved raj-naina scene . loved the way raj give ans to abhi.
update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
finally......Dhoka updated.........
It was intense...............
was beautiful.....
continue asap......
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Posted: 14 years ago
Sigh.....at least u didnt give us Dhoka and updated this awesum fic.....Btw hope u r f9 now....ur eyes are ok I hope....and as for the part....yeah it was shorter than usual.....but very well written still. Loved all the Raj-Naina scenes.....and am loving the way things are progressing. W8ing for the plan of Raj's disappearance to be executed. Continue soon....and am glad I was not missed regarding the PM. Thanks....for the UD and hope u continue soon.
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superb update yeti..but try and update it faster plz...
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Posted: 14 years ago
have been waiting for a update for so long..............................and it's awesome part.........................

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