Dhoka 2 -A Raj-Naina story; Part 28 - Page 35 - Page 19

Originally posted by: shining_moon

wow lovely update

comprised of everything from romance to emotion to drama to thrill............

hats off to u gal wat an update👏

raj is so genuinly nice to give ample time to naina to build up their relationship😳😳😳

poor neelu n alekh hope raj give them asuper duper idea to solve their problem...dil ke mamle me ab to kafi experience ho chuka hai usko😉😉

but wat about huda n sherry??...plz add them in the next update with some sizzling romance bet raj n naina ofcourse😳

plzz update soon n plzz pm me

waiting for the next😊

Originally posted by: nisha1984

Awesome update👏👏👏

Raj-Naina romance was cute and beautiful😉😉😉

Abhi-Shalini meeting was as expected. Shalini stood up for herself👏👏👏 and gave Abhi😡😡😡 what he deserved....

Abhi is such a coward🤢🤢🤢

Nandini knows Abhi's past and still supports him and loves him😊

Yudi was sweetest and he saved Shalini from awakard situation 😃😃😃

Finally Raj & BC had conversation about Abhi and now they found out through their intelligence what a huge conspiracy is going on against the country👏👏👏

update soon and waiting for the plan

Originally posted by: ammuakhi

finally updated

loved it for sure

superb

excellent

cont soooonnnnnnnnnnn

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Dear

Ohh!!! finally u updated this........I was so waiting for this ...😃 Dhara ki dhamki kaam aayi😆😆😆

thnx for the comments..... but this is not fair haan.... all this blackmail.... Yeti is writing with her life in her hands.... 😆😆

Update was really gud..👏👏👏
thnx yaar....

Raj is having hard time in controlling his feelings infront of Naina.He is giving her ample of time to b comfortable in this relationship.They both r really cute as a couple.Their romance was really sweet..Both of them r madly in love and Naina being so innocent doesn't know that her touch alone is disturbing enough for her husband..😉😆😆
ahem ahem.... there is a lot for Naina to learn, no? 😉

Shalini tried hard to contol her feelings infront of Abhimanyu..she loved him once or mayb she is still in love with him but she didn't show any feelings in her words.
She did love him deeply once upon a time.... but has she moved on in the following years? We ll have to wait and watch...

Abhimanyu was so sad to see her like this..He really is not that bad but circumstances were against him..Nandini is really timid but she loves Abhi and Shalini was well aware of this..😭😭
Abhi had to give in to his family's demands and maybe he didnt try too hard for his love.... or maybe he did... But the end is that he could not stand against his family for his love....

Yudi was really concerned for Shalini and he hurt himself inorder to save her from more heartbreak..Their relationship is special no words were needed between them..
But slightly on the extreme side... what do you say?

I hope Raj is able to convince Neelu's parents abt her marriage to Alekh..but it seems a tough nut to crack.
It really is a very tough job.... but Neelu and Alekh and determined to take matters in their own hands too if needed!

Raj was really angry on Brigadior Chandralok when he comes to know abt the truth behind Abhi's appointment in KMA.

Something is truely wrong somewhere..Its definetely time for some action.

U r ending this fiction??????
Ahem.... ending? well... it has to end someday na.... I have a rough idea of what needs to happen in the next few updates and if all goes well, we might see the end in about 7-8 parts.... so lets see....
Work has me tied up really tight nowadays and thats why my updates are becoming irregular... so instead of you guys getting frustrated and leaving the story or me getting frustrating and discontinuing, dont you think it makes sense to give it a logical end? 😉

Waiting eagerly for the next part..
*yeti ducks chappals* 😆

Bye

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

awesome part. loved it.
loved raj-naina moments.
update soon.

Originally posted by: fanatic 21

tooooooooo goooooood..........

loved d way it started wid romance betwn rn and
den shalini and abhi part was nice...loved yudi der...

also njoyed BC and RAJ's convo..... tooo good....👏

Originally posted by: lallulal2010

plz add me 2 the pm list for this fic, yeti....................................................it was just lovely................went through all the parts in 8 hours...........without blinking an eye......................out of the world..............just ethereal......................👏

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Its good to finally have an uodate from you. Had been waiting for it since a long time

Hey... thnx for the comments..... and sorry about the delay in posting as well as replying to comments....

Raj loves Naina very much and is having a hard time in controlling his emotions for her. But he wants to give naina all the time she needs to be comfortable. Both of them make a very cute couple and is good to see them romance.

Naina has some tough things to handle in some time, no? How long do you think our hero can hold in his desires and give her time? 😉 😳

Shalini tries to keep the talks with Abhimanyu as formal as possible. She tries her best to hide her feelings from him but abhi knows that she is very hurt. He wants to explain that circumstances had forced him to behave the way he did. Nandini is a simple girl and she loves Abhi very much. Both Nandini and Shalini do not know how to react in front of each other.

It always gets very awkward in such a situation and even worse is when Abhi and Shal did not break it off smoothly and with mutual consent..... There had been so much pain surrounding their separation all those years ago and then this was just the next time they were meeting!

Yudi understands shalini's condition and he hurts himself to pull shalini out of the awkward situation. Shalini is touched by Yudi's gesture but warns him not to hurt himself in the future. Both of them share a unique bond.

Unique and understanding..... but kind of bordering on psychotic too dont ya think? Maybe my character of Maan from Mera Ishq Deewangi rubbed off on me while writing this scene..... 😆😆

Raj gets very angry on BC when he comes to know the truth behind Abhi's appointment. But the realization that some one in the defence ministry may be forming a plot the steal the triggers shocks both Raj and BC to the core. They realize that in order to fail the conspiracy being made, they have to work as a team trusting each other completely.

Waiting eagerly for the action in the next part. Continue sson.

I am trying my best to give an update as soon as I can..... I started writing it but I am in a dilemma as to whether I should move forward faster or still hang around and bore you guys to death... 😆