Dhoka 2 -A Raj-Naina story; Part 28 - Page 35 - Page 22

well come after a long time

first things first 😛😛.........welcome back 🤗...... .......... 😆😆.....good to c update after long time 😛😛......... long became long literally 😆😆😆........ jokes apart........ hope u are OK now... after ur eye surgery 😊😊.... take proper care of it 😃😃...........

coming to part ☺️............ its awesome 😳😳 👏👏👏............ it seems captain cant keep himself away from his bful wife 😆😆😆 ......... on a serious note u are really testing Captain's patience 😆................ i really wonder for how long he will be able to control himself 😉😉😉.......... but his POV is also agrreable ...... that he wants all tension to get over before he ☺️☺️.... ahem ahem 😳😳.......

liked this responsible alekh ........... hope neelu' s father also gets to see his daughter's hapiness 😊😊😊

as 4 abhi .. i guess he really has a tough way ahead to regain Raj's trust again 😳.......which i really doubt he will regain anytime 😆😆.... somewhere down he really hurted both raj & shal 😒........

eagerly waiting 4 next part ........ 😃😃.. to see Raj's plan of action 😳😳...... not expecting much RN scene in next but chotta sa chalega 😛😛😛............

continue soon this time round 😆😆😆

this was a superb update.....

Pls try n update sooner...

Loved raj n naina.......

yet again a marvellous part....👏👏👏

njoyed every bit of it....👏

loved d romance of RN and d way u expressed raj's feelings was awesome...😳😳😳

too good....👏
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hii Yeti...how r u ?
finally after soo long u updated this fic....n update is really awsome
m waiting for next part...so do update asap.

awesomeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggg for next asap

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Update was very good. I only wish that you would update more frequently.

Alekh is ready to commit to his relationship with Neelu.

Raj and naina are there to support both Alekh and neelu. All the cadets are surprised to see this soft and caring side of Raj, like you have rightly said...love does change a man completely.

Brig. agrees for Alekh and neelu's wedding. It was really funny when alekh did not understand why he had been give leave.

Raj and naina's romance is growing by the day. Both of them cannot control their passion any longer...raj wants to make the moment special for naina. He wants to make their relationship complete only after he has proven Naveen innocent.

Naina is feels very shy in the morning...but Raj refuses for fell embarrassed. He wants to see her in all her passions.

Despite all the awkwardness...Raj shalini and abhi are true soldiers. They put aside all thier feelings when it comes to their duty..they are indeed the best soldiers.

Par Raj ne yeh kya plan banaya hai....he is going to disappear. Hope that nothing happens to him

Raj can never forgive Abhi for hurting Shalini's feelings. Abhi feels bad to receive such a cold reaction from Raj.

please continue soon this time.

Kya kahoon mai tujh ko bata itne jaldi update kar diya tum ne ehsaan tera hoga mujhe par gaane ka man kar raha hai.

Chalo itna to mai kar hi sakti hoon na apne RN k liye ki update par reply kar doon taaki mam jaldi ( i think 4 months me ek baar jaldi hi hai) update kar hi dein. 😆 😆 😆

Lovely part and about RN scene i can't say anything. It was too hot for me to handle but u know how much i love their romance and i am always desperate to see them romancing with each other. I found really lovely Raj playing with his wife's desires. 😳 😳 😳

I really respect his decision not to make his wife completely hers until he proves his father's innocence and this can be done by only Raj no one else can decide this. Now Naina is blushing after showing her bindas attitude and desires previous night to Raj but he is right after all he is her husband so he has all right over her. 😳 😳 😳

I don't know what is the problem Neelu's father has with her but about Alekh i can only say that it's not gonna be easy for her parents to accept Alekh as their son in law after knowing his past. But i don't think there was need to create such a huge drama there. Alekh is ready to take the responsibility good. 😊 😊 😊

So finally the best KMA pass out captains will work for triggers security and on Naveen's case in directly. Abhi has no confident over him i think but Shalu will work for Raj and give her 100% i know. 😉 😉 😉

BC was right, now a days KMA is just making couples and getting them married. 😆 😆 😆

So when should we expect for the next update in July? But how can u end up this fic so early? 😲 😲 😲