Dhoka 2 -A Raj-Naina story; Part 28 - Page 35

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 14 years ago

#171

Again a very well written update dear....am always engrossed tooo much in ur parts....however....the way u pulled off the Raj Naina scene....it was brilliant...and highly thoughtful and perfect as well....very very nicely done...and it was extremely beautiful as well...hehe. I loved it a loootttt....

And now Abhimanyu n Shalini n Nandini....hmm....the characterizations hav been done nicely....I am specially wooed by Nandini...hehe.

But here Raj is angry coz of Abhimanyu's arrival for the same work as his....but soon....like a very intelligent officer....he finds out the depth of the situation....also vows to end this game of deception...once and for all....that was really very nice...and a very engaging scene btwn Raj n BC....I simply loved that portion....as it was done magnificently....

And abt the register marriage....well lets see wat the handsome husband does abt that....hehe.

W8ing for the next part now....

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fanatic 21

@fanatic 21

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Posted: 14 years ago

#172

tooooooooo goooooood..........

loved d way it started wid romance betwn rn and
den shalini and abhi part was nice...loved yudi der...

also njoyed BC and RAJ's convo..... tooo good....👏

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#173

You tell me what should now i say about it? 😕 😕 😕
I mean ur updates to the fic is very low, once in a month.
It breaks the rhythm yaar.
I just love this story n ur way of writing so much and u update very less it doesn't please me.
Now don't say that i too update very less ( i am not a g8 writer like u dear 😉 😉 😉 )
Ok now coming to the update fantastic. 👏 👏 👏
This was exactly the update for which i was waiting from a long time.
I mean Kuch na Kaho se Chahe tum kuch na kaho, maine sun liya..........
k saathi pyaar ka, mujhe chun liya............
Thank god all the confusions left Naina's mind and now she is overwhelmed that he loves her the most.
He controlled his emotions and didn't impose himself over her so fastly so that Naina can get enough time to take another step in their relationship.
But the thing i like the most in this update when Naina provoked him Raj said no otherwise he was unable to control his desires too.
The best part was the confrontation of Shalu n Abhi. As Abhi thought she looked really better than that and the way she behaved very formally with him was really nice.
Shukr hai Abhi did one right thing by telling Nandini about his n Shalu's past relationship. Nandini has a believe now over her husband and it must be.
But whatever Yudi did i was not in fevour of that just like Shalu. He could use another thing to call her back yaar, this was so childish n what was the need to hurt himself?
Raj was angry when he heard about Abhi here back in KMA n this thinking was right but these all r special affair of Army n they never take risk.
BC could understand Raj's condition so well. He didn't want to see him hurt too, i think he likes Rajveer.
Neelu n her drama, i always think like that about her. She wants Alekh but it's not that much easy after seeing Alekh's background for Yudi's family.
I think Raj n Naina will do something in this matter. 😛 😛 😛
Pls yaar try to update this soon.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 14 years ago

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lallulal2010

@lallulal2010

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#174

plz add me 2 the pm list for this fic, yeti....................................................it was just lovely................went through all the parts in 8 hours...........without blinking an eye......................out of the world..............just ethereal......................👏

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Suhana

@suhana.dixit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#175

Pls try to update this soon..its one month since u last updated it...

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himalayanyeti

@himalayanyeti

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#176

Hey all you ppl,
Sorry about the disappearing act but lotsa things in my life..... and I couldnt concentrate on my stories at all..... 😕

I will try my bestest to give an update next week for the holidays......... but the fact is I havent started the update yet but I promise it will be a lambaaaaa update..... 😉

Stay tuned and thanks for not giving up on me... 😆
Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays! 😃

Yeti

Edited by himalayanyeti - 14 years ago