Dhoka 2 -A Raj-Naina story; Part 28 - Page 35 - Page 17

wow lovely update

that was good
plz continue soon

awesome ff.......seriously i read whole ff in 2 days and fell in love with the ff...........plzzzzzz update soon cant wait to read more and want some intense romance between raj and naina.

finally updated

Hi Dear

Originally posted by: sweta2005

awesomeeeeeee too good very nice part waitingggggggg for next asap.

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thanks for the comments... 😃

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

finally................after so many requests u have updated.............awesome update

thank you.... 😃

Originally posted by: prerna1

that was good
plz continue soon

thanks a lot... will continue soon...

Originally posted by: vinithaa

awesome ff.......seriously i read whole ff in 2 days and fell in love with the ff...........plzzzzzz update soon cant wait to read more and want some intense romance between raj and naina.

thank you..... 😃 you read all the updates in 2 days? whew!!!!!!!! I appreciate your perseverance... 😆😆 RN romance will always be there now... but story ahs to move forward too, right? 😉

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

Good girl Yeti..you kept your words..so 1 egg less...😆

Lovely part...it felt so nice to go with the flow of the story after so long...so 1 egg less again...😆

Apart from everything else...I love the way you describe Raj keeping himself in check.....😳

Wow...what Yudi did was sooo...😕 idk..what abt it i liked...😳 Poor things...both Yudi n Shalini...!!!

Now you better hurry up with the next part...plan in action ...would love it...or my dhamki still is on....😆😆😆

aapki meherbaani keliye shukriya ji.... 😆😆

thanks for the comments..... finally I managed to complete the part after a long writer's block.... 😆 you were uncomfortable with what Yudi did? I thught it was sweet..... 🤣 (now I hope you can see how an idea like Mera Ishq Deewangi came into my head...... I am a sucker for psychos.... 🤣 🤣)

I am updating MID next.... so if you guys give enough comment on Dhoka (to prove that you still read it.... 😈 😆) I will update Dhoka too soon..... 😉

awesome part. loved it.
loved raj-naina moments.
update soon.

Its good to finally have an uodate from you. Had been waiting for it since a long time

Raj loves Naina very much and is having a hard time in controlling his emotions for her. But he wants to give naina all the time she needs to be comfortable. Both of them make a very cute couple and is good to see them romance.

Shalini tries to keep the talks with Abhimanyu as formal as possible. She tries her best to hide her feelings from him but abhi knows that she is very hurt. He wants to explain that circumstances had forced him to behave the way he did. Nandini is a simple girl and she loves Abhi very much. Both Nandini and Shalini do not know how to react in front of each other.

Yudi understands shalini's condition and he hurts himself to pull shalini out of the awkward situation. Shalini is touched by Yudi's gesture but warns him not to hurt himself in the future. Both of them share a unique bond.

Raj gets very angry on BC when he comes to know the truth behind Abhi's appointment. But the realization that some one in the defence ministry may be forming a plot the steal the triggers shocks both Raj and BC to the core. They realize that in order to fail the conspiracy being made, they have to work as a team trusting each other completely.

Waiting eagerly for the action in the next part. Continue sson.