Making Memories Of Us (MayUr) Last Part (23.6.10) - Page 23

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Posted: 15 years ago
the chapter splintering barriers
it was just awesome
i really loved it so much

pooja
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey Sonam
its totally ok
plz do take proper rest
we can wait
but plz take care of urself

love
pooja
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Posted: 15 years ago
heyyy dear,
awsome part
thanks for PM.



love
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Posted: 15 years ago
great part dear...but pls take care of ur health dear........
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi guys, this is your friend's husband (Abhi) here ... she is sitting on the bed and 'ordering' me to post her story here which she has written on paper ... okay so here is the story ..... and yup this is a mixture of Vivaan and Nisha ...

Confession


Vivaan tore a pale off-white sheet and with a blue ink pen started writing everything he faced; he did all his life and his feelings for her and why he stayed away and how he feelings for her and why he stayed away and how he regrets doing that on it ... he neatly put it in an envelope and wrote on it .....

Nisha
I don't know how to apologize for what all I did to you ... but please before deciding to hate me ... just read this once ... after that whatever be your decision ... I would never question it or disobey it ....
Vivaan

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Nisha heard something slipped in her room ...
Nisha - Adam!!! Main use chodungi nahi ...

She picked the envelope to rip it but felt Vivaan's fragrance over it and when she read the note on top ... she knew that it was Vivaan .... She slowly opened it and saw his beautiful handwriting and was convinced that it was not Adam ...

As she started reading it, tears came down her eyes .... she couldn't imagine Vivaan like that .... never .... but slowly tears of pain turned in tears of joy when she read how madly he loved her and how he yearned for her .... after reading it all ... she knew what decision she had to take ... to love him unconditionally and help him extinguish the fire ....

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Vivaan had his sketches open in front of him, the cool breeze caressed his face and he remembered his angel .... He remembered her walking inside the party hall ... Whenever I see your face, the world disappears .... How she blushed when she saw him ....All in a single glance so revealing ... He remembered how she laughed when she saw him in the boxer shorts and t-shirt .... You smile and I feel as though, How she cried on his shoulder ....I've known you for years .... He felt that maybe she would accept him ... How do I know to trust what I'm feeling ... He slowly shut his eyes and saw her smiling at him ... I Believe My Heart ... A tear came down his eyes, he slowly wiped it away ... What else can I do ... He thought how she had conquered his mind and heart and how difficult life will be be without her ... When every part of every thought, leads me straight to you ... He remembered how during the dance he felt that they were two bodies but one soul ... I Believe My Heart ... How he would try a hundred times yet would end up falling in love with her each day .... There's no other choice ... How his heart would somersault and how he was head over heels in love with her .... From now whenever my heart speaks, I can only hear, your voice ....

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Nisha convinced and overjoyed with the feeling of being loved by the one whom she loved with all her heart had conquered her .... She forgot all the pain she had before coming to this place ... The lifetime before we met, has faded away .... She couldn't hold herself away from him ... How did I live a moment, without you ... She kissed his letter and a tear of joy came down her eyes .... You don't have to speak at all ... I know what you would say ... She couldn't believe that his life's biggest truth, he confessed before confessing his love for her ... And I know every secret about you ... She knew he and only he can love her with such passion, devotion and unconditionally .... I Believe My Heart, it believes in you ... She remembered the way he kissed her with passion ... It's telling me that what I see, is completely true ... She shut her eyes and saw him standing with his arms spread to capture her ...I Believe My Heart, how can it be wrong ... She slowly held the white rose he gave and stayed at it intently and how after this she won't be able to love another ... I will feel my whole life long ...

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Both gazed at the sky and saw themselves dancing ... she in a mauve color satin gown, her hair flying ... he in a white suite ....

He lifted her high, she spread her arms and both smiled with all the joy and happiness ... I Believe My Heart .... He slowly brought her down and touched her nose with his .... she held his face with both her hands .... It believes in you .... Both kept looking at the Vivaan and smiled thinking that one day it will be true ... It's telling me that what I see, is completely true ... His hand was on her waist ... her head rested on his shoulder ... and their hands entwined together ... their eyes shut in peace ....And with all my soul, I Believe My Heart ... Both kept staring at the sky looking at their dream and till dawn ...The portrait that it makes of you, is a perfect wrote of art ...

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Next morning, the morning rays slowly touched her eyes and she couldn't believe that she was awake the whole night ....
Nisha - Vivaan, ab main tumse kabhi door nahi jaaungi, I love you ....
Vivaan was staring at the sky ....
Vivaan - Nisha, kya tum mujhe maaf kar paaogi ... par ek baat kabhi nahi badlegi, chaahe jo kuch bhi ho .... aur wo hai mera pyaar, tumhare liye .....
Edited by sonam961986 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Thank god i read it that who updated otherwise i would have definately asked

why you updated sonam 😉😉😉😉
thanks to you for such a nice update [Friends hunbandji] [sorry do not know the name]
Well i hope you don't mind
I am touched with the updated it was awesome
and thanls a lot once again for this update
Edited by arunabehere - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey thanx for caring for ur readers so much
Jus loved it
Atlast all misunderstandings are over
Hop soon they meet n confess face to face
U take care plzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 15 years ago
so its our jiju writing haaaa.....how sweet..hope our sonam di is fine...and about the update..it was one of the best confession i have ever read...awesome...........
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey sonam,
i must say that u care so much for ur readers.
All thanx to ur husband for supporting you to do this.
But plzzz plzzzz do take good care of urself.
This was awesuum update.
Now eagerly waiting for both of them to confess face to face.
Hope this happens in the next chapter.
Thanx for PM
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow

It was again a beautiful piece of writing.....

Thanks for pm. :-)

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