Making Memories Of Us (MayUr) Last Part (23.6.10) - Page 25

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Posted: 15 years ago
Heyyy sonam
U ordered ur hubby to update
So sweet of u
Update was just fab like always
Waiting for their confession
Get well soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome part..!!
really amazing..
loved it..
cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
no prob get well soon dear
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Posted: 15 years ago
so sweet of get well soon and thanks for pm
lovely confession
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Posted: 15 years ago
heyyy dear,
mind blowing one
thanks for PM.
continue soon


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Posted: 15 years ago
i m sorry for being gayab since 2-3 updates...

they were fab....

p.s.- the mistake is ur's that u update so fast 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Sonam,
How are you??? Take care... Take rest....

Awww... Thats so sweet of you Sonam and Sonam's husband for updating... Thanxx a lot for caring so much for your readers...!!!

Anyways, coming back to the update... Yippeeee...!!!!!! Confession!!!
Loved this part.... Vivaan and Nisha truly love each other....!!!!

Pls don't take much stress in updating... Take care....
Thanx for the pm....!!

- Pooja
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Posted: 15 years ago
Wow excellent update
loved it
thanx a lot dear
and special thanx to our jiju for posting it.

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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Sonam....

A very nice FF indeed....loved every part of it.. I read all of them in one go...amazingly written....you truly are a brilliant writer....please PM me whenever you update...I would not want to miss the updates...
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Posted: 15 years ago
hi guys, this is Abhi, again!! Girls have this power of making a cute innocent face and getting their work done ... when my wifey reads this, she'll be shocked .... but i have my privilege right now .... okay so this part is with a touch of comedy to it .... it's a tiny part but it clears all the doubts and misunderstandings, so was necessary ....

Veracity


Vivaan was walking towards the breakfast hall ... he knew Nisha would meet him there ... suddenly Clare bumped into him ... she wanted to talk to Vivaan about something really important ....
Clare - Hey dude, where you goin?
Vivaan - As if you don't know ...
Clare - I know, but did you clarify everything ... I mean did you tell her everything?
Vivaan - Yes ...
Clare - About you and Sara as well ...
Vivaan - What about us?
Clare - Ronald heard Nisha telling Grace ....

And Clare told everything to Vivaan ... he was shocked but decided to clarify all of Nisha's doubts before anything else ...
Vivaan - Thanks Clare, you guys always help me ...
Clare - Anytime dude ...
Vivaan first went to see Sara ... she was with Ronald ... they were about to kiss but Vivaan put his hand between ...
Sara (furious) - What the hell Vivaan!!!!
Ronald - Dude!! What's your problem??
Vivaan (to Ronald) - Shut up!! (to Sara) you need to come with me ...
Sara (angrily) - Why and where?
Vivaan - To meet Nisha ....
Sara - I've already met her ..
Vivaan - Fool!!! To clear her doubt about US!!
Ronald - Oh yes!! Sara you definitely need to meet her ... i'll meet you later, bye ....
Ronald went away .....
Sara - Fine, but Vivaan, first say please ... and beg me ...
Vivaan - Why??
Sara - Because you (poiniting his nose and walking towards him, he was walking backwards) disturbed me when MY boyfriend was about to kiss me!!!!!
Vivaan - Okay ....
He fell on his knees .... Sara was hiding her smile ...
Vivaan - Please Sara, come with me ... I need you .. please Sara .... please (mocking crying)
Sara couldn't hold back and burst out laughing .... she gave him hand to come up .. and hugged him tight ...
Sara - Oh Vivaan!! You are so cute!! I love you!!

Vivaan too hugged her smiling .... As they parted, Nisha, Grace and Sam were standing there .... Grace and Sam gave them a disgusted look while Nisha was angry and teary-eyed ...

Nisha - Vivaan!! I hate you!!
Sam - I hate calling you my friend!!
Grace - Disgusting!!
Vivaan (stammering) - No, no no ... no ... Nisha, see ...
Nisha - I have seen everything ...
Vivaan (interrupting) - Wrong!! Please let me explain ....

Grace and Sam started shouting at Vivaan ... Sara was getting furious ....
Sara (screamed) - Shut up!!! All of you!! Including you Vivaan!!
Everyone kept quiet, like children, obeying their angry teacher ....

Sara - Good! Now, Nisha ... listen carefully ... I am sure you know that Vivaan was a criminal and was in a Reform School .. but you don't know that Clare and me were also there with him ...

Nisha, Grace and Sam widened their eyes ... Sara ignored their funny expressions and continued ...

Sara - Me and Clare knew that Vivaan loved you but he was staying away but we tried to convince him ... and if you remember we would never leave you and Adam together (Nisha nodded), it was because we knew how that bas***d is ...and one more thing ... I love Ronald with all my heart and he does too ... me and Vivaan are only friends ...

Nisha looked at Vivaan, Grace and Sam both looked at each other ...
Sara - That's it ...
Clare and Ronald entered the scene .... Ronald put his hand around Sara's waist .. while Clare put hers on Grace and Sam's shoulder ... Nisha moved towards Vivaan, slowly .. he too moved forward ...
Nisha - I am sorry ...
Vivaan - I am sorry ...
Nisha - I didn't trust you, sorry ...
Vivaan - It's okay ... I didn't tell you everything beforehand .. i am sorry ...
Grace, Sam, Sara,Clare and Ronald - Guys!!! Shut up!!!

All of the laugh ......
Edited by sonam961986 - 15 years ago

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