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Posted: 20 years ago
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hey every1.....seeing as a lot of oda ppl r writin der own fan-fic, i thought i mite aswell get started aswell....

but i hav a lil prob...im a lil brain dead, so if u realli think this is going terribly wrong......let me no...😆

thanks...

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Posted: 20 years ago
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dont worry!!!! go for it!!! i am ur supporter!!!! 👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Originally posted by: guli444

dont worry!!!! go for it!!! i am ur supporter!!!! 👏



me too.....
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Posted: 20 years ago
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im sure ur fanfic is gonna rock....gud luck 😊
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Ok…..the story is gonna have the same characters, and in the serial, but if I'm gonna add more, ill let ya know…..

Disha went to a late nite party, and is walkin home cos her car broke down….
Disha rite now is basically, jus walkin really fast because, there are sum guys behind following her…

Guy number 1: got ya!
disha: choro mujhe
guy : y?......i finally caught ure hand after so much difficulty, y should I let u go???
disha is scared out of her wits….
But being da cleva girl she is, kicks him where it hurts the most 4 boys, and makes a run 4 it… 😆

Guy : get her!!.....and make sure u dnt leave her!! GO!
all the other guys go running after her…

Disha is takin her shoes off (common she jus went 2 a party, and she is wearin high heels…..i doubt she will run far in heels!!) 😆

disha quickly hides behind a bush….

She tries 2 lower her breathing…..while looking to see if they know where she is….

But little does she no, whose premises she is on…




ok, let me no how it is....if u like it, i will continue
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Posted: 20 years ago
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omg thank u so much guyz....i already got comments....u guyz r so sweet

i luv u....kisses 4 all ❤️

luv ya
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Posted: 20 years ago
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awww.. why u stop there... i was all into it.. til you stopped!! please cont soon!!!
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Thanks so much guyz 4 commenting, im really bored rite now, so I'll write part 2

Part 2

there is a little tap on disha's shoulder…she turns around quickly, and is shocked…

watchman: tum kaun ho??
disha: deko…mein….mein….mein bahoot musebhat mein hoo….please mujhe chupieye…..
watchman: kya???
disha: please…..i'll pay u!
watchman's getting angry now….
watchman : come here…..
Watchman is now draggin disha into the house….

Watchman: sir…
jus then….guess who turns around…DK!!!!

DK: kya???

He turns around properly…
I mean Dk being the hottie he is, has had many girls around him in the past, and is familiar with girls…
(yes yes….its da old dk……4rm the old episodes….)!!
he is shocked 2 c disha…such a beautiful girl infront of him….
Dk looks disha up and down…..not in too much of a rude way…

Disha sees this…she gets a little cross..

dk: (in a nice tone) erm……kya problem hai???

watchman :sir, this lady was jus hiding in the bushes
dk: acha….tum jao…
watchman is a little bit confused…..
watchman : (to himself), dk saab ka chakar fir se chelega is nai madam ke sath!
dk…: (to himself) hai….ek nai ladki aye chakar chalane par…..
Disha (to herself) mein kaha pas gayyee????

Edited by blah_blah - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
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😆 😆 😆 Great Part!!! 👏 👏 👏 Continue Soon!!

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Posted: 20 years ago
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that was grt
next part ka intezar hai

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