Your name across my heart Raj Aamna FF Last Part - Page 10

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Posted: 15 years ago
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are yeh sujal bhuddu kahe naa jab bol raha haai kakoon ke woh usse pyaar karte haai tabhie bas bole jaa raha tumhara lover stupid
waise waiting for more plz cont soon dear and thanks dear for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#92
who is that person?????????plz con't soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#93
Hhahahaha sujal ko dimaag do jara pyar samne khara ahi aur wo awesome part contii soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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ab ye twist kya hai?????????????so lovely scenes of sujal and kakoon...............sujal realised everything..................cont soon.......................
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Posted: 15 years ago
#95
Finally Sujal is convinced that Kakoon has always loved him. He realises his mistake and accepts Kakoon's love.
Par ab yeh kon aa gaya. Is it Kajal's mother.
Please continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Your name across my heart Part 13


It is Tashu.Sujal is very happy:Bhabhi!
Tashu smiles with tears.
S:Where were you?
T:I will tell everything.
When Sujal and Tashu are alone,Tashu opens her mind:I left the place for you.I wanted to die.But i was saved.I wanted come back.But i knew that it will spoil our dreams.
S:Anyways,now you are back.
T:I came back for my daughter.For that I will do anything.
S:Anything?
T:Anything.
Her voice is sharp.
S:You sound so different.
Tashu smiles with determination.
T:I want to see my daughter.I'm waiting for that sweet moment.
S:She has gone to her friend's house.I will bring her back.
Sujal brings Kajal back. Tashu was waiting for her at the verandah. When Kajal comes Tashu runs to her.She hugs Kajal.
K:Dad,who is this?
Tashu stares at Sujal.His mom:This is your mother.
Kajal is surprised:Mumma..are you my mother?
T:Yes,i'm your mom.
K:Where were you all these years?I won't speak to you.
Tashu cries. Kajal hugs her.
K:Mumma,you won't leave me again no?
T:No,I will be always there with you.
Everyone becomes happy.
Tashu and Kajal are in one room.
K:I won't be able to sleep without my dad.
T:But now your mumma is there with you.
K:Yes,though i'm happy about it,i want my dad also with me.
Sujal is sitting alone in his room.He is missing Kajal. Kajal comes there with Tashu. Sujal is happy to see Kajal. He goes and kisses her.
K:Dad,i won't be able to sleep without you.
Sujal is happy.
S:Then you sleep here.
K:But mumma will be alone. Let mumma also be here.I need both of you here.
Sujal feels awkward.Tashu smiles,she feels funny.
S:How is it possible?
K:Why not?My friends sleep along with their parents.
S:But please Kajal.Try to understand.
K:Dad please...
His mom comes there hearing this.
dadi:kajal,atleast for some days you sleep with your mom,after that ....
Sujal and Tashu stare at her.
His mom:Your mom will tell you good stories that can be told only in her room.
K:Like that stories are there?Wonder!
T:Come daughter..
Kajal kisses Sujal:Goodnight dad.
Sujal:Goodnight Kajal..
Tashu takes her to her room.Both Sujal and Kajal are sad about it.
Sujal's mom:If you and Tashu are willing,Kajal's wish will be fulfilled.
S:What do you mean?
She:Kajal has a father and a mother..But they are single.If they unite she will get perfect parents.If u marry Tashu...
Sujal is shocked.

Sujal:What are you telling mumma?How could you think like this?You know why bhabhi had gone out of this house.Right?
Mom:I hope everything will go well.Its for Kajal's happiness.
She goes.Sujal becomes upset:Bhabhi brought both happiness and troubles.

Sujal is going out.Tashu goes near him with a smile:Where are you going?
Sujal hesitates:There is a meeting.
T:Ok,by the way,Kajal calls you dad?
S:Yes,i'm her dad.She is my daughter.I brought up her like that.
Tashu smiles:Its ok.You are her dad an i'm her mom.Nice.
Tashu laughs. Sujal feels strange.
Sujal meets Kakoon.
S:A miracle happened unexpectedly.Kajal's mom came.
K:Tashu bhabhi?
S:Ya.
K:Wow!Sweet news.
S:Yes,its a sweet news.But it brings losses too.i'm scared whether Kajal is moving away from me.Her real mother came and i'm not her real dad.
K:You are her real dad Sujal.No one can get that position.
S:I imagined you as her mom.But..since she is back...
Kakoon's eyes got filled up with tears. Sujal wipes her tears.kakoon gets relieved.
When Sujal goes home,his mom recieves him cheerfully.
She talks to him personally:Your worry was about Tashu who left the house becuse of the proposal.But see my wish is coming true.She is willing to marry you.
Sujal is shocked.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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are ye kya ho rha hai....the earlier two parts were sooo very beautiful....kashish's past finally revealed....sujal is the one she loved sooo much....n she is finally getting her love...and sujal finally gets to know tht he is the one...her only true love...u bought up the emotions really well yr...it was damn good and sweet...and touching....i had guessed in last part itself tht its tashu who is back....but i didnt expect this kind of a twist yr...ye aise kyu wapas ayi hai....she left years back...ok agreed ki with good intentions...bt kya fayda....finally she is doing the same thing na....infact tab to there was no1 in sujal's life...aur ab to hai bhi...how can she do this...what is she upto...y has she come back after so many years....wud b waiting for all these ans n more....
u going really well...continue soonnnn...n dear plzzzzzzzz understand if i dnt comment...i hv my final year vivas n exams going....bt i make a little time to come hear n read a few of my fav stories....bt i hardly hv time to comment....so plz...just remember u write really well...n settle down with the like button...n tc...luv yaa....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Nice part
Sujal is right.....Tashu's return has briught both happiness and troubles.
He tells Kakoon about this...and she feels happy and sad at the same time.
Par yeh kya...how did Tashu agree to marry Sujal
waiting ot know what happens next.please continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#99
why she come back now bec sujal is going to have his lady love i hate this please noooo tension
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Posted: 15 years ago
damn it...........ye kya nayi musibat....she had to come now when everything was getting better between sujal and kakoon.................and what the hell is this?????????/ shes willing to marry him?????????now?????????? sujal u better say everything..................cont soon.............

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