Jhanvi Creation//OS [Sid-Riddhima pg4]

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patakhaguddi

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Posted: 15 years ago

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~SOOOO Amazing darling! Keep it up!

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supercool3

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

omg tht was fabulous👏

my heart was definitely beating faster while reading it

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very nice👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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Nikita

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Posted: 15 years ago

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That was fabulous! 👏

I loved the way you portrayed the emotions it was very believable!!

So would love to see such a SR scene!

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noorya

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Oh My Goodness!

another dhamakedar part yaar😍..

i just loveeeeeeeeeee the way you describe Sid's feelings yaar its sooo real...

ufff cant wait now to see them together for 7months...and the turn their relation will take😉...

God Bless,

Noorya

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aishwarya

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Posted: 15 years ago

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hey jhanvi..nicely penned shots..

Riddhima confronts Sid in the basketball court..n when Shashank tells them to give their marriage a chance..he confronts her..

he pushes her to the wall..hot!..but they both don't know what it was that seperated them..

do write more

-aish

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MagicalKash

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Posted: 15 years ago

#17

I simply LOVED your OS on SR!!!

They were beautiful!!

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Jhanvi

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Siddhant Riddhima

Riddhima toys with her stethescope as she nervously waits for Sid in the cafeteria. Why was she doing this she thought, she almost felt like a teenager waiting for her date to arrive. She silently scolded herself to not to act so nervous as it was no one special she was going to meet..no, just Sid. She smiled at the very thought of him...even nowadays she felt giddy if anyone was to mention his name. He was indeed no one special, he was something beyond that..special is a term given to someone who sets apart from the majority..but Sid, not Sid ..he wasn't just a part of a group of special people in her life..he was something more..much more.

Riddhima closed her eyes and let out a cheesy grin

Siddhant silently sits in front of her and is amused by her smitten smile

I hope mein tumhe disturb nahin kar raha hoon...

Riddhima's smile quickly flashes away and her face starts to burn with embarrasment as she wonders if he's caught her thinking about him

na-nahin....i mean nahin...

Siddhant smiled on as he admired how shy she was around him..never has he seen such innonence bestow upon her...he'd always met with the Riddhima who had her gaurd rails up and a 'beware' sign on her..but when she was nervous..he could tell.. she seemed vulnerable to him... so fragile. Such a beautiful creature could ever be his...rather not risk the thought of pinching himself awake...he loved this dream far to much to let it be broken again

it wasn't Siddhant's love confessions that made Riddhima nervous, it was his silence..it spoke more than he ever could...he always seemed to send a feeling of intensity towards her...he managed to make her uncomfortable even without touching her...this feeling drove her mad...he had that certain power above her, she didn't know how ,but there was no way stopping it