Surya and Nandini Script - PRC

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Posted: 15 years ago
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PART 1

Surya had just arrived from Ajmer to the Koteshwar Mandir Yatra. All he wanted was some time to plan out how to catch Bhimdev's spies. So Surya decided he would go off to the lake nearby and plan how to catch his spies. But as he arrived at the lake, he saw a thin figure sitting at the edge of the water. He himself thought that he wouldn't sit too close to the water and was soon engaged in talk with the beautiful girl who disapproved him.

Surya: No! I don't think it's very right for you to sit here on the edge of the lake.
Nandini: Oh! So now you are going to tell me what I can do and cannot!
Surya: Listen, you are taking it all wrong! I was only concerned about your safety.
Nandini: I can take care of myself! I don't need a guard to warn me about the consequences!
Surya: What kind of girl are you? You argue for no reason and then you insult my concerns!
Nandini: Oh! If I am so bothering you, why are you still here?

But later, there conversation is disturbed as Nandini's best friend Chamki arrives and questions her accidently by her real name.

Chamki: Rajkumari San....Nandini...What are you doing?
Nandini: Nothing! Tell his troublesome boy to leave me alone.
Surya: Did you call her a Rajkumari? You are a Rajkumari?
Nandini: No, it's my pet name.

Surya however is not convinced. He turns to Chamki and tells her about Nandini's arguments.

Surya: Is she your friend? How can you survive with her, she drove me bonkers!
Chamki: Oh she is just like that. Don't take anything at heart from her, she is very good at heart.
Nandini: Chamki, shut up!
Surya: No, why are you telling her to shut up? I bet she is the only one who ever praised you in your life otherwise people would've ran away.

Chamki giggles. Nandini fumes up and stands face to face with Surya.

Nandini: Listen you...whoever do you think you are! I don't even know why I am here!

Nandini walks off leaving Chamki speechless along with Surya.

Chamki: Sorry about her, she is just far away from home, it's her first Yatra ever.
Surya: She's a little...tensed about something..
Chamki: Oh you think so too...In our tent I asked her but she just claimed it was my illusion. Can you believe her? I know when she is tensed. Anyway what happened?
Surya: I told her she was sitting at the edge of the lake, she didn't like me getting concerned and got into an argument. She is a Janglee Billi.
Chamki: Haha...she is very short tempered. You stay away from her and she won't bother you.
Surya: Of course. Maybe you should go now.

Chamki nods and walks away passing with Sanjam as they both collide.

Sanjam: Sorry...
Chamki: No it's okay..

Chamki blushes and runs off. Sanjam arrives at Surya.

Sanjam: What are you doing here, Prithvi?
Surya: Not Prithvi. Surya is my name until this Yatra finishes...you remember that don't you?
Sanjam: Of course. Let's go to sleep...

They both walk away to their tents. However the next morning Surya and his friends are awakened by a big cry outside their tent. They go outside and find Chamki crying and many people giving her courage.

Surya: Chamki, what's wrong?
Chamki: Nandini, she is gone! She has gone somewhere from Midnight. She went straight somewhere after dinner and I fell asleep but when I woke up this morning her bed was untouched and I know Nandini never makes her bed before she goes anywhere.
Surya: Have you went around and checked here and there?
Chamki: Yes! I can't find her. What am I going to say to Maharaj Jaichand...

Chamki stops. Surya and his friends are looking at her with a sharp eye.

Pundir: Maharaj Jaichand?
Arjun: Are Nandini and Maharaj Jaichand related?
Chamki: Nandini told me not to tell her real identity to anyone. She is a Rajkumari and Daughter of Kannauj's King Maharaj Jaichand.
Sanjam: So her name's Sanyogita..?
Chamki: Yes.
Surya: No wonder...first time I met her, she was acting like a spoilt Rajkumari. Anyway we have to go and search for her. Pundir go and ask everyone in the Yatra. Arjun you go to the market nearby and ask those people and shop keepers. Sanjam you stay with Rajkumari Chamki, she needs pacification. I will go and look near the lake.

They all set off except for Sanjam who kept on telling Chamki that Surya was going to find Nandini.
Few hours past, Pundir and Arjun both returned with a negative news which burdened her more but her last hope was Surya. Surya however had got tired of searching and had leaned across a Mango tree until a Mango landed on his skull.

Surya: Who done this?

He looked up to see Nandini on the highest branch reaching for a ripe Mango.

Surya: Nandini!
Nandini: Now what do you want, stop following me wherever I go.
Surya: Nandini, you should be ashamed. You are here getting Mangoes and there your friend Chamki is shedding tears for your disappearance.
Nandini: I wouldn't have gone! But I just don't like her questioning me about... Forget it, mind your own business. Go and tell Chamki I am fine and tell her not to come looking for me.
Surya: Do you really think I am stupid to leave you here? Get down now.
Nandini: You can't command me, you don't know who I am..I am Rajkum...

She stopped and continued reaching for the Mango who was far away.

Surya: If you get down, I'll get all the Mangoes for you.
Nandini: No! I don't need your help.
Surya: Also, if you think I don't know who you are, you are mistaken.
Nandini: Just go away!

Surya however started climbing the tree from the other end and reached the Mango in no time. He glanced at Nandini's beautiful angry eyes and thought he had never seen such radiant beauty. Nandini however disapproved of him and started climbing down the tree with no Mangoes.

Nandini: How dare you steal my Mango!
Surya: How dare you leave your friend and come here? Where were you all night, Nandini?
Nandini: .....
Surya: Tell me Nandini, where were you exactly! You won't be going anywhere unless you tell me now.
Nandini: No!

Surya got down from the tree before Nandini could escape. He stood in front of her.
She tried crossing aside from Prithvi but he was too quick for her. She tried doing that to the other side and then looked at him with a glare.

Nandini: Whoever you are, leave my way.
Surya: My name's Surya...
Nandini: I really don't care. Leave my way or I'll scream.
Surya: Go ahead, but first you must answer.
Nandini: Go mind your business! I don't talk to strangers.
Surya: Well, for the first time I am beginning to like strangers of this Yatra.

Nandini however did not understand and glared back. She however noticed Chamki arrive behind Surya.

Chamki: Rajkumari Sanyogita! Where were you?
Nandini: ...Chamki...I told you...
Surya: Don't worry, everyone knows.
Nandini: How could you Chamki? You told the whole world? I told you to --
Surya: You must answer me first Rajkumari Sanyogita. Then you can start questioning people.
Sanyogita: Pitajjee..?

Maharaj Jaichand was standing with a sword in his hand. He looked as if he was going to murder his daughter for being alone all night. His eyes were bulging with questions and anger.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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PART 2

Maharaj Jaichand proceeds towards Nandini and grabs her hand. He looks to Nandini, then to Surya and then to poor trembling Chamki.

Maharaj Jaichand: Rajkumari Sanyogita, how dare you lie and come in this Yatra, I told you not to but you secretly told Maa and sneaked here with Chamki!
Sanyogita: Pitaji...I wanted to go to the Yatra...
Maharaj Jaichand: Enough! We are going straight back to Kannauj. Your palki will be arranged in a few minutes. Chamki, get Rajkumari Sanyogita to come to the field. I will be waiting.
Chamki: Yes Maharaj.

Maharaj Jaichand walks off but stops as he turns to look at Surya.

Maharaj Jaichand: Who are you? And why are you standing in front of my daughter?
Surya: She has some answers and explanations to give to me. She won't be going anywhere unless she answers.
Maharaj Jaichand: Boy, do you realise who we are? We are royal blood and I will slither you throat if you don't get lost. My daughter won't give any answers. Sanyogita, let's go!

He walks off and as Sanyogita follows, Surya grabs her wrist.

Surya: Chamki, she will be coming in a few minutes.
Chamki: Okay, but hurry up.

Chamki disappears out of sight. Sanyogita stubbornly releases her wrist from Surya. She tries walking away but he grabs onto her wrist again.

Sanyogita: Let go off me!
Surya: No, answer my questions.
Sanyogita: No!
Surya: Listen, if you don't answer me now, I will come to Kannauj for my answers.
Sanyogita: Do whatever you wish. Pitaji will kill you if you touch me again!

She walks off but he pulls her back.

Surya: Sanyogita, I...since...I met you...last night...I haven't..slept..I don't know..why..
Sanyogita: You've lost your head! Leave me and go away.
Surya: Sanyogita...I..have some weird..feeling..I never..felt that..way about any other girl..
Chamki: Sanyogita, Maharaj Jaichand is calling you.
Sanyogita: Yes, let's go.

She rescues her wrist from him and walks away with Chamki with a very puzzled mind. Surya's friends arrive at him, they are very concerned about him.

Sanjam: What's wrong..?
Surya: I..think..No! I can't let..her go..!
Pundir: Who..?
Surya: Nandini..I can't...I don't know why..

Surya runs off just to find Sanyogita sitting in the Palki. He see's Jaichand's commands to proceed. He follows behind them hiding. Soon the bandits appear in front of them and starts killing the soldiers. One bandit hits Jaichand in the head and he faints. He does the same with Chamki but as he approaches Sanyogita he is stopped by a hand.

Surya: Don't even think about touching her!

The bandit not understanding, speaks in Hindi.

Bandit: Yeh dekho! Yeh larka bataye ga ke mein kya karoon.

He pushes Surya aside and grabs hold of Nandini. Surya faints as his head hits with a rock. Nandini is abducted and taken away.
PART 2
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Posted: 15 years ago
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PART 3

Surya woke up after a few minutes to find the entire place around him deserted. He saw Chamki and many soldiers and Jaichand fainted. He looked into the abandoned Palki and could not find who he was looking for. Meanwhile the Bandits had taken Sanyogita to a ruin. They were speaking to each other about how much gold she had worn. Sanyogita however had a small dagger hidden in her small pocket. She pulled it out but was stopped by one of the bandits.

Sanyogita: Let go off me!
Bandit: Usko chor tho. Tumhe bachane koi nahi anhe wala. Hahaha!

He chuckled an evil laugh which made Sanyogita to squirm backwards and be as far away from him.
She came to a point where she couldn't go back any more and was trapped by the 5 Bandits. One grabbed her hair and wrenched it so she could stand up.

Sanyogita: Let go off me! Ow!
Bandit: Abhi sey hee dargee. Jab tujhe hum marange to kya tu behosh hojaye gee. Hahaa!

The other Bandit suggested that they should find a bag to take the jewellery otherwise people will be concerned. They went out to look for a bag while one kneeled down to Sanyogita. She squirmed away.

Sanyogita: Don't come an inch further. I am warning you, Pitaji won't spare you.
Bandit: Kya kaha tumne!?

He grabbed her hair again and this time pull out her sword and brought it to her fair neck. She trembled in fright. Surya who had just arrived spotted him giving her a hard time. He grabbed a sword and marched slowly from the behind. He reached him and struck the sword in his back. Sanyogita who had never seen such sight gave a cry.

Surya: It's okay, I know...you must've never seen that.
Sanyogita: Go away from here. Where is Chamki?
Surya: They are all unconscious. We should go, it's a long way back.
Sanyogita: No, I am going back to Yatra.
Surya: What? Your father and Chamki are there lying fainted and you want to go to Yatra!?
Sanyogita: But if I go to him, he will order me to go back to Kannauj. I won't go.
Surya: Why? He cares for you, you must obey him no matter what.
Sanyogita: Don't tell me what to do.
Surya: Why do you always never listen to someone wise and sensible? Junglee Billi.
Sanyogita: Kya?

For the first time she had spoken to Prithvi in Hindi. She was used to speaking in English.

Surya: You look way better when you speak in Hindi. Let's go now.
Sanyogita: No, I am going to Yatra. Pitaji will be fine. Let him think I am abducted. I will catch up on Chamki.

She turned to leave but was stopped by Prithvi clutching her wrist.

Surya: This is not a wise thing to do. Heed me, let's go back to your father.
Sanyogita: I said NO.
Surya: Sanyogita, you never listen to anyone, Junglee Billi.
Sanyogita: Junglee Billi? You are the one who acts as if he is the boss over me just because he is rich and brags about it by wearing necklaces, sparkly clothes...Bigre Raees!
Surya: Bigre Raees! Tumhari itni himat. Tumne Prithvi--
Sanyogita: Prithvi? Kon Prithvi...Acha...Prithviraj Chauhan. Ajmer ka rajkumar...woh tumse khaee zada behter hai. Tum..uske aage kuch bee nahi ho.
Surya: Acha...?
Sanyogita: Aur nito kya. Tumhe kya laga, hum itne bewaa koof hai ke hume Prithvi ke bare mein pata nahi ho ga...
Surya: Haa. Yehi toh mai sochta hoon.
Sanyogita: Bas! Bohut hogaya. Tum jao yahan se. Hum hood chale jainge.
Bandits: Arey woh deko! Usne usko maar diya!

Sanyogita and Surya both looked up to see the Bandits. Surya grabbed hold of Sanyogita and ran with her to the exit. Sanyogita spotted the beautiful sunflower she had wanted and stopped to pick it. Surya tried to console her to keep running but she was too stubborn for him. One bandit caught hold of Sanyogita's arm suddenly.

Surya: See? See now, I told you to run, but...

He thought of a plan.

Surya: Bhai saab..aap ne inke saat jo bee karna hai kije..Main chala...
Sanyogita: Kya! Tum Hame akela chor kar jaoge.
Surya: Toh tum itni bee bewaa koof nahi ho. Haa.
Sanyogita: Let go off me.

The bandits laughed as Surya walked away and disappeared from their sight. Sanyogita who was very hurt by his act had started to cry. Suddenly Surya came and did the same with the other Bandits he had done with the one before. Sanyogita who was speechless by his act.

Surya: I am sorry I didn't mean to...but..
Sanyogita: Shut up! Go away from here or I'll get you hanged and imprisoned by Pitaji.
Surya: Sanyogita, listen, please..

Sanyogita was already walking away only to find a snake approaching her way. She beckoned slowly and collided with Surya.

Surya: Sirf ek saamp hee toh hai.

Surya reached over and picked it up. As he was playing with it, he did not notice Sanyogita leaving in dismay.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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PART 4

As he followed Sanyogita, he suddenly burst out of the corner and stood behind Sanyogita who was speechless from seeing Jaichand and the soldiers.

Maharaj Jaichand: Sanyogita! Where were you? And what is this boy doing here?
Sanyogita: Pitaji...I was..
Maharaj Jaichand: Enough, now we're going straight to Kannauj, from now onwards, you will not step a foot out of the palace unless my permission is granted. Do you understand Sanyogita? And you, boy, explain your relationship with my daughter, why are you following her?
Surya: I was protecting her from Bandits, she was abducted by Bandits...

Maharaj Jaichand steps forward and pats him on shoulder.

Maharaj Jaichand: Hum apke shukar ghuzar hain. Boliye aap kya mangte hain humse...
Surya: Aap ke mahel mein ek raat..kya hum kaat sakte hain?
Maharaj Jaichand: Bilkul. Chaliye.

Sanyogita amazed at this decided that she was going to make him pay out for coming to Palace. When it was dinner time, she added a whole pot of spices in his food. Unfortunately it was placed in Jaichand's place.

Maharaj Jaichand: Aiye beta...ab hum khana kaige. Sanyogita, behto, aap bee behtiye.

Sanyogita who could not wait for him to floor tears watched as he ate peacefully but then the peace disappeared.

Maharaj Jaichand: KISKI HIMMAT HUI HAMARE KHANE ME MIRCHI DALNE KI!?

Sanyogita who was amazed by this couldn't bear anyone else getting told off so she owned up.

Sanyogita: Pitaji...woh..hum te...
Jaichand: KYA!? Sanyogita, aap..?
Sanyogita: Hume sirf isse badla lena tha! Lekin yeh..
Jaichand: Sanyogita, aap ki aadaton se hum tang achuke hain. Aap ne inse badla lena ta to aap ne itni sari mirchi daal di!? Aur bhagwan ka shukar hai ke woh hume khani pari warna..Bas...bohut ho gaya..hum aapko wapis Ashram bej rahe hain...aap waha rehngi aur ek Rajkumari bana seeke gi..Ab jaiye tyaari keeje.

Sanyogita who was struck by this shock left the room flooding tears on the way. Surya who could not bear pain protested but Jaichand had enough.

Jaichand: You don't know my daughter, she has to go to the Ashram otherwise she will never learn how to be a Rajput Princess...
Surya: But give her a chance, I think she is too depressed..
Jaichand: I know why she is, she lost her mother, you go and rest now.

Surya who passed next to Sanyogita's room saw she was crying on the bed. He walked in and called out her name.

Surya: Sanyogita..

Sanyogita turned to look at him with blazing eyes. She stood up and turned to slam the gigantic doors on him but he stopped both of them easily.

Surya: Listen to me once,
Sanyogita: No, because of you...I have to go to the Ashram..
Surya: Sanyogita...I didn't..know..your..
Sanyogita: Shut up and leave.
Surya: Okay, but I am sorry..

Next morning Sanyogita was sitting in her Palki as Surya walked beside it. She had full curtains closed and was sitting on the far edge of it. Surya slid the curtains and saw her sitting far away looking out from the other side. He slid his hand on hers but she broke free.

Sanyogita: Don't touch me ever again. And go away, I don't need you to walk with me to the Ashram.
Surya: Yes you do, remember last time..
Sanyogita: At least they were better than you...

Surya who felt bad had enough. He replied an angry reply back.

Surya: Enough is enough. I tried asking for an apology but you seem to take advantage of my apology. Junglee Billi. Nakchari, Bademaag, Jagralu.
Sanyogita: Palki roko!

She stepped outside to face him.

Sanyogita: Bigre Raiss...tumhari itni himmat tumne humai Nakchari, Bademaag aur Jagralu kaha.
Surya: Haa! Aaek Rajkumari ho kar tum dikana kya chahti ho.
Sanyogita: Bas, aage kuch mat bolna. Chale jaogo yaha se! Akela chor do humay!
Surya: Teekhai! Lekin usse pehle hum tumhe baate de ke hum Prithviraj Chauhan hain! Khush?
Sanyogita: Kya?
Prithvi: Haa! Aur hume tumhari waja sey yeh baat batani pari.

He turns to walk away, Sanyogita sits in the Palki and they walk away. On the way she had many questions and her mind was puzzled. Prithvi who didn't like leaving them thought how much he loved Sanyogita and how much he loved her getting angry. He wanted to go back and give a meaning full sorry but instead he sat down and started thinking. Sanyogita arrived at the Ashram, Maya Ma stood there for greeting with a pink scroll in her hand.

Maya Ma: Swagat hai aap ka Sanyogita. Hume apke pitaji ka sandesh mila, aap ne bohut galat kiya.
Sanyogita: Bas! Aap hume baatengi ke hum kya karsac te hain ya nahi?
Prithvi: Aare Sanyogita, woh tumse bari hain.
Sanyogita: TUM!
Prithvi: Woh, hum inke saati hain..hum aek raat ghuzar kar hi jaige.
Maya Ma: Lekin sandesh mein toh..aisa kuch nahi lika..
Prithvi: Woh bool gay te likna..
Sanyogita: Maya Ma...yeh jhoot bol raha hai..Pitaji..

Maya Ma cut her short.

Maya Ma: Sanyogita! Aaap chup rahiye. Jaiye..undar pravesh kije..aur inko inka kamra dikaiye.
Sanyogita: Par..
Maya Ma: Sanyogita..aap chahti hain ke mai aap ke Pitaji ko sandesh behju ke aap yaha bhi tang kari..
Sanyogita: Teek Hai!

She stomps off angrily. Prithvi follows casually.

Prithvi: Keep control on your anger..otherwise..
Sanyogita: Be quiet, this is your room, now don't show me your face for the day.
Prithvi: Maya Ma toh kehri tee ke aap hume apne kamra dikaigeen...
Sanyogita: Toh aur kitna dikoun?

Prithvi chuckles at her anger and walks in saying "Janglee Billi" but she does not reply.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Prithvi who comes walking along the corridor spots Sanyogita fighting with a same aged boy. He seems very cool about but Sanyogita is heating up. Prithvi starts to eavesdrop.

Sanyogita: I told you to go away from here.
Boy: But why, you...are upset about something..tell me..you have to tell me today..

He reaches out and grabs her small and delicate wrist. Prithvi stares.

Sanyogita: Let go off me this instant! Or else..
Boy: Why are you so angry Sanyogita? It's only me...Vikram...I have come from..my palace here to specially meet you..
Sanyogita: I don't remember you now let go!
Vikram: Come on Sanyogita, don't pretend...we used to play together when we were small...don't you remember..?

Indravati comes along and bumps into Vikram releasing the grip of his hand.

Indravati: What's going on?
Sanyogita: Nothing.

She doesn't wait a second more and runs off. Vikram who is angry stares at Indravati.

Indravati: Who are you?
Vikram: Forget it..you are useless..

He follows Sanyogita. Prithvi takes a different route and follows him. Later he is hiding behind a statue and stares at Vikram hitting on her door.

Vikram: Sanyogita mujhe maaf kardo...mera matlab tumhe tang karne ka nahi..tha..main toh sirf..
Maya Ma: Aap..?
Vikram: Jee..dekiye na..Sanyogita darwasa ni kolri..
Maya Ma: Rajkumari Sanyogita..darwaza koliye..

There was no reply. They both got worried. Sanyogita who was planning an escape inside her room tied blankets together and made a rope. She threw the blanket rope out the window but one end was tied to the bed pole. She started climbing. Prithvi who knew she would do that had already been waiting as she turned to see him surprised.

Prithvi: Yeh kya kari ho?
Sanyogita: Tumse matlab..Humara raasta choro!
Prithvi: Nahi...itni raat ko..tumni jaa sakti..
Sanyogita: Dekho..hum tumshe maafi mangte hain..bas..humara raasta choro..
Prithvi: Apne kumre main waapis jao..
Sanyogita: Nahi!
Prithvi: Main zabardasti be karsak ta hoon..
Sanyogita: Tum hume haat to lago..Pitaji tum per yudh kar bete ge..

Prithvi had grabbed hold of her wrist and was now taking her to the entrance through the back field.

Sanyogita: Dekho rukh jao!
Prithvi: Tum yaha se kahi nahi jari..

Sanyogita broke free and raced back to the fence which lead into the thick jungle. She was about to climb the fence when she noticed it was too high. She didn't stop trying. Prithvi who was standing behind with arms crossed waited as she turned to look at him. He held her waist and raised her to the top. She immediately climbed over. Prithvi followed.

Prithvi: Teek hai..agar tum jana chahti ho..to..chalo..
Sanyogita: Tum be aoge?
Prithvi: Haa.

They walked in silence with Prithvi in front and Sanyogita walking slowly behind. They stopped at some ruins and Prithvi suggested they stayed the night there. Sanyogita who disapproved didn't argue. She sat far away from him but he came and sat a little close. She edged far away more.

Prithvi: Dekho...tum..hume us tara ka larka mat samjo.

He started up the fire and leaned next to a fallen pillar. His hand touched the end of something. It was a scroll and it said the whole plan of Bhimdev. He started reading.

Rajkumar Parmar

I want soldiers from Ujjaine and Kannauj, give them the greed of money and so thee shall follow. Send some spies to Prithviraj Chauhan's army and some on the Yatra..I want one girl to be the spy and so she should make Prithvi fall in love with thee..

No one must ever know about this plan and this message should be destroyed immediately or it
could be used against us.


Maharaj Bhimdev

Prithvi could not believe that he had actually found it. Sanyogita who was amazed by him so interested in reading the scroll walked up to him and grabbed it out of his hands.

Prithvi: Dekho..hume humara sandesh waapis dedo..
Sanyogita: Aur agar hum nahi dain toh?
Prithvi: Tum dehti ho yah nahi.

He tried reaching for it but she edged it away. Sanyogita thought this was a good way to pay him out. She tore the scroll and chucked it in the fire. Prithvi who was amazed by this could not say a word. He felt hot fire burning in him.

Sanyogita: Yelo. Ab hume apna badla milgaya!

Prithvi could not believe it. He was so angry he could not control and slapped hard across her cheek. Her power of slap was so strong that she fell to the floor with a scarlet cheek. Prithvi left the ruin and stood outside angrily. Sanyogita was already crying.

Next morning Sanjam and Chamki had arrived in search for them. They found them in the ruins sitting and sleeping far away from eachother. A little bit of blood was bleeding from Sanyogita's side lip corner.

Chamki: Rajkumari Sanyogita? Aap yaha?
Sanyogita: Chamki, chalo..hum jare hain..

She looked at Prithvi and Sanjam who stared back at them.

Chamki: Aap..kaha thee..humne suna keh aap Ashram se baag aie..aap..ko pata hai ke Maharaj Jaichand kitna naraz hain..chaliye..Kannauj chalte..hain..
Sanyogita: Nahi. Hum Ashram jare hain.
Chamki: Par aap toh Yatra main jana chahti tee..
Sanyogita: Pehle chahti tee ab nahi.

With that she looked at Prithvi and left the ruin followed by Chamki.

Sanjam: Prithvi? Kya hua?
Prithvi: Us Sanyogita ne..woh Sandesh Bhimdev kee chaal wala jala diya..joh mujhe itni mushkil se mila..
Sanjam: Lekin..Bhimdev ne kisko likha?
Prithvi: Rajkumar...Parmar!
Sanjam: Par..Prithvi..Rajkumar Parmar..toh ek yudh bhoomi main marge the?
Prithvi: Kya..?
Sanjam: Zaroor unki yeh chaal hogi..Yeh Sanyogita itni naraaz kyun hai?

Then suddenly Prithvi realised that he had made a grave mistake. He had judged Sanyogita wrong when she did something right. He recalled back when he slapped her and felt extremely bad. Meanwhile Sanyogita and Chamki were walking away when Prithvi appeared from behind.

Chamki: Arey..aap?
Sanyogita: Kya hua?
Chamki: Yeh Surya yaha kya kara hai?
Sanyogita: Woh Surya nahi..Ajmer ke Rajkumar Prithviraj Chauhan hai. Lekin ab koi faraq nahi parta!
Prithvi: Faraq parta hai..Chamki..tum..Sanjam..ke saat aao..main..inse..kuch baat karni hai..
Sanyogita: Nahi..hume tumse koi baat nahi karni aur Chamki kahi nahi jaigi.
Chamki: Sanyogita karleejay baat..
Sanyogita: Nahi. Chalo..

But Chamki backed away and slowly started to walk leaving her side. Prithvi stopped Sanyogita by clutching her wrist.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#7
Hi Darling...

Really amazing update...very different from the usual PRC story...
Do write more and let me know when you update...
Waiting for the next part...

Love
Guglu
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Posted: 15 years ago
#8
hey it was very nice!!!😃 I liked it !
But... I couldnt digest the thing that PRC and Sanyo talk English !! Don't mid...but its just impossible....
U can very well write your dialogues in English, if you arent comfortable with Hindi......That will be fine with us...
But that doesnt mean PRC and Sanyo talk english,right?
I hope you dont mind me telling this...
Anyways, continue soon...and plz do inform me when you update....
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PART 6

Sanyogita was amazed by a sudden action of Prithvi. She turned around, still boiling with anger and rescues her wrist.

Sanyogita: Tumhari himmat kaise hui humme chune ki!?
Prithvi: Dekho..main tumse baat karna chahta hoon.
Sanyogita: Ab sune ke liye kuch bakhi nahi rah. Chamki, chalo, humme Ashram jald se jald ponch na hai.
Prithvi: Lekin..tum to Yatra main ja ree thee na.
Sanyogita: Hum kabhi asi Yatra main nahi jaigen jisme tum ho gaay!
Chamki: Rajkumari Sanyogita! Woh dekiye...Rajkumar Vikram ghore par swaar...is taraf aa re hain!

They all turned to look at Vikram who was galloping towards them followed by some orange dressed soldiers. Vikram climbed off the horse and walked towards Sanyogita.

Vikram: Aap kahan chali gai thee?
Sanyogita: Hum..? Hum..Chamki ke saat ghumne phir ne ai te.
Vikram: Par..aap..abhi bee humse naraaz hain?
Sanyogita: Nahi. Humme Ashram jana hai.
Prithvi: Main aap ko chor aata hoon.
Sanyogita: Nahi, Hum Rajkumar Vikram ke saat chale jaige.

And with that Vikram and Nandini both climbed on the horse and galloped away. Chamki followed with the soldiers. Sanjam approaches Prithvi.

Sanjam: Prithvi, yeh tumhe ho kya gaya hai? Jabse woh Sanyogita aie hai tum toh ussi ka peecha kare ho.
Prithvi: Pata nahi Sanjam, main adura mehsus karta hoon jab hi main usse door rahta hoon.
Sanjam: Par..kyun?
Prithvi: Pata nahi. Chalo...Yatra main chalte hain..
Sanjam: Kahi tumhe usse pyaar toh nahi ho gaya?
Prithvi: Shaaid.

Sanjam gasped at this but Prithvi stood watching the soldiers and Chamki distance as they moved forward. At the Ashram Maharaj Jaichand was already waiting for Sanyogita. As soon as she came in, he slapped her hard.

Maharaj Jaichand: Aap ko zara sa bhi hayal nahi hoa! Ke aap ne is Ashram se jane ki himmat ki kaise!
Chamki: Lekin..Maharaj...
Maharaj Jaichand: Aap chup raiye! Yeh sab us larke Surya ki waja se hua hai! Ab se aap is Ashram ke bair kadam bhi nahi rakhe gi samji aap!?

And he walks away leaving Sanyogita crying. Maya Ma shook her head sadly and walked away. Indravati chuckled at this sight.

Indravati: Bechari Rajkumari...tapad pargaya sab ke samne! Haha!
Chamki: Jao yaha se..inko akela chor do.
Indravati: Mujhe bhi yahan rehne ka koi shok nahi hai!

She walks away and Sanyogita rushes in her bedroom followed by Chamki. Meanwhile Sanjam is still surprised at Prithvi. Prithvi finally decides he needs to tell Sanyogita about this. They plan to go to the Ashram under a disguise of Future telling Baba and his friend. When they arrive Maya Ma allows them to stay for the night seeing as it would be an honour. When it is dinner time, they are all sitting on the floor couches. One couch is empty.

Maya Ma: Chamki, Rajkumari Sanyogita kidar hain?
Chamki: Jee..woh khana nahi khana chahti.
Maya Ma: Jaisi unki marzi. Ab itni zid teek nahi. Unko bookhi hi rehne do.
Prithvi (Baba): Dekhiye..aap..unke kamre main bhej di jai khana?
Maya Ma: Nahi. Aap jante nahi ke woh kitni ziddi hai. Chaliye bhajan kije.

But Prithvi could not eat a single morsel seeing as she was alone in her room with hunger. He decided he would give up his food for her. When everyone had left, he walked into her room just to find her writing a sandesh with a feather.

Prithvi (Baba): Yeh aap kya likri hain?
Sanyogita: Nikal jaiye aap yaha se!
Prithvi (Baba): Woh toh main chala hi jao ga..par pehle aap yeh khana ka lije.

Sanyogita looked at the platter of different dishes. She tipped it out of his hands just to find Maya Ma standing in the doorway.

Maya Ma: Rajkumari Sanyogita! Bohut ho gaya! Ab apko saza mile gi. Khane ki behzati kari ti tee aap ab apko char dino tak bhuke rehna pare ga!
Sanyogita: Teek hai! Hum kisi bi cheez se nahi darte.

And with that she stormed out leaving Prithvi and Maya Ma. Maya Ma tells off Prithvi.

Maya Ma: Aap ko kya zaroorat tee inke liya apna khana chor ne ki! Aap ka khana rasoi main hai. Aap inke saat koi humdardi nah dikai!
Prithvi (Baba): Jee...hume bhook nahi..hai..

He walks away leaving Maya Ma very suspicious. Sanyogita who is sitting with Chamki and Vaishali on both of her sides is staring at Indravati serving her favourite Kheer and Ghulab Jaman. She turns away, Prithvi sees this and deliberately tips in some salt in the Kheer and Ghulab Jaman.


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Posted: 15 years ago
#10
Hi darling...

Now this was a very nice update... Sanyogita ko kitna gussa aata hai... Aur Prithvi bhi peeche pad gaya hai...kya baat hai...ab Indravati ke khane me namak...ohh ohh..waiting to read more...

Love
Guglu

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