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Posted: 15 years ago
#31

thanks guys

no problem for the late reply ......u know i thought no one read it but no u allll loved
love u my friends
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Posted: 15 years ago
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😉the drops of rain 5

DM sitting there beside santo as the world mean nothing to him …… he is not looking to anyone or listen to anybody….his eyes lost in her face as he waiting for a sign of her coming back to the life….his ears lost on her breath on her lost voice to call him back……..malik……malik…. again and again

Hundred times different people from the family enter the room and leave it out…..Baa …Baboji…Hiten ….toral…everyone……but DM is in his own world …..

Baa come with a plate of fruit to there room as DM since the accident he put nothing in his mouth …..

Baa: bita dhramraj…….as she put her hand on his head……… eat some fruit u need u power to help her bita

DM nods his head in No ………….

DM: no Baa I will not eat or sleep until she gets up ……

as he say that he move from the chair beside the bed and site on the bed near her …near her head as his hand hold her forehead to check the temperate and change the small fabric from her head with cold one from the container

Baa: but Dhramraj bita u need to be strong for her how that will happen if u be sick …..Eat a little so u can be there for her bita

DM look at Baa and look at santo in same time as he move his eyes from Baa to santo

Then he just took the plate and eats some of the fruit ….for his santo

Baa say: that is my boy and she leaves him to take care of his santoriii

After some time champakle bring the soup to him to give it santo ……………he take the container of soup and put it on the small table near the bed

Then he hold santo between his arms to make her site as she lie on his chest …….DM bring the spoon which is full with soup to her lips .to he mouth and he try to make her drink a little………DM in this process remember how her eyes was asking him to hold her while there in the car but no he just let her and walk away ……..why he do that? Why?

She asked nothing and now …….suddenly santo cough

TBC
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Posted: 15 years ago
#33
hoe beautiful sara........dm luvs his santudi soo much...........luvd it plzz keep posting ur ff's..... 😊 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#34
Hi Sara Brilliant. I am dyeing to see such scene in d actual serial.Eagerly waiting to see them hugging each other. At least I am fulfilling my dreams through my frnds' writing. Go head. keep up d good work. Am sure that ur"drops of rain" will wash out all their bitterness as ur WIND broke all their barriers. Post d next "drops of rain" ASAP
Edited by cuckoo_chand - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#35
Nice sara dear...so sweet..dm takes care of his bandini...1 req cud u write april 16th epi(dm's drooling on santu) wit ur luvly writing?im waiting 2 read it...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow very nice................cant wait for the next part..........very well written and love the story.................
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Posted: 15 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: dishum04

Nice sara dear...so sweet..dm takes care of his bandini...1 req cud u write april 16th epi(dm's drooling on santu) wit ur luvly writing?im waiting 2 read it...

ok for u i will
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Posted: 15 years ago
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sheela add for u

Dear ……santoriii

Ha santori always santoriii….. The name that which is always on my tongue in every mint in ever second ………..

I was about to call u by u name when u enter my room with u long wet open hair ……u beauty is shinning like light when it reflect on the mirror ……nothing like u jasmine smell …nothing like every thing about u ….I had lost in u beauty ….in the missing u ….

God………. wish that I could hugged u in that moment ….and start to kiss u on your soft neck……wish that lost it in your dark lovely hair ………..

Wish that I could hide in u………

Santo by the why this rudder talks with u and act as he wants to take u away…..

U are belong to me and only me………no one should come to u closer then me

Called what u want to called but u are my beloved my life my wife

Yours ……..your malik


santo reply
Dear …….my life

I was changing for u to see me always beautiful in your eyes .this colored saris this long hair this smile all for u …………..

And I will always served u in love and care because u are the only one that is important to me ………………the change was for u and the gift was for me as u could not speak it in a moment and lost in other world my lost world ……….

U eyes as it is stare at me say it all and my heart was dancing in crazy way

Nothing when u said I look younger then Birow as u say keep shining santo ….keep blooming in my eyes in that moment just in that moment I was know that I still bandini your Bandini

And malik who care about Rudder or any other guys …..my love is only for u ….as everything in my

Your wife (as I see it in u eyes after so long time)
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Posted: 15 years ago
#39
Drops of Rain part 5 and the letters to and from Sanraj all were so beautiful, Sanraj love coming out, no longer can be hidden inside them wanting to burst out in the 10yrs apart! just loving it Sara, looking forward to some more vms and your brilliants ffs 👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Sara...so sweet...tats y i askd u 2 write tat scene in ur lovely writing...thank u dear 4 fulfilling my wishes...Hugs 2 u...santu is stil maalik's bandini...Keep going...❤️ u and ur ff...Muahzzz...

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