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Posted: 15 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Shahara3

Drops of Rain part 5 and the letters to and from Sanraj all were so beautiful, Sanraj love coming out, no longer can be hidden inside them wanting to burst out in the 10yrs apart! just loving it Sara, looking forward to some more vms and your brilliants ffs 👏

ha shahra .....there love will cover them soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: dishum04

Sara...so sweet...tats y i askd u 2 write tat scene in ur lovely writing...thank u dear 4 fulfilling my wishes...Hugs 2 u...santu is stil maalik's bandini...Keep going...❤️ u and ur ff...Muahzzz...

sheela u are welcom dear ......me too love u
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Posted: 15 years ago
#43
Hi Sara Beautiful letters. U just wrote their exact feelings. Loved it. DM was really lost in her beauty and 4got to speak 4 sometime. Lovely.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#44

The drops of the rain 6

Suddenly santo cough and DM bring her more in site position and put the spoon quickly in the soup continuer ……he wipe her mouth ….move his hand slowly on her lips to clean it up from the remaining of the soup …
His hand searching for a cup of the water as his worried eyes tries to keep looking at her …..The cup been found and now DM try to make her drink little as he searching for eyes opening or the calling of Malik…….

Finally his silent request been answered and santo opened her eyes so slowly as a respond for his prayer for his calling …….
Tears of happiness knock DM eyes ……his arms press her more to his lap as he want to hide her from the world...Hide her in his heart

In that moment the drops of rain start to fall down as the silent of music start all over again ………

In the same moment DM eyes catch in so soft way santo eyes and he is been the first face her eyes are catching after the long sleeping……….. After the long waiting of him

Santo opened her eyes as slowly as she feels him around her feel him holding her …..Her body knows that…… her soul is dancing and nothing could kill that ….she was thinking while her eyelid start rising up ……..but nothing is similar to her like open her eyes on DM face …….the lovely closer face to her heart as every details in it is engraved in her soul ……..

Then santo gave DM a long with the sound of the rain falling down his gift for waiting her …..For loving her so deeply………she raised her hand to cover his cheek with it and in very hard santo rise her body a little up and give him a sweet waiting kiss near his lips…………..in very low voice she say

Santo: malik …….malik…….

And fall in a deep sleep as she keeps calling him between his arms …………. The tears of joy found there away on his cheek as a big smile appeared on his face remembering the doctor words….

Doctor: if she opens her eyes she will be saved and be fine…………

DM just hug her in that moment of Baa enters to the room ……..baa see the happiness on his face and she know that everything is ok

Baa then asked DM to have some sleep as santo now will be fine he refused but Baa insist on him so he go with a condition that he will take care of her when he get up and Baa agree with smile …………

As DM leave the room Baa come and put her hand on santo head with her eyes on santo face….

Baa: god save u to save him ……..my baby

TBC

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Posted: 15 years ago
#45
Hi Sara it is Awesome. The way u have described their feeling is fantastic. I am visualizing each and every bit of the scene written by you. Waiting for ur next post.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46
awwwwwww sara I am cryin loving, melting everything after reading ur FF's and the letter sanraj wrote to eachother how sweet.. my dear.. I love them allll its sooooooooo sweet.. keep it up my dear awesome job
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Posted: 15 years ago
#47
thanks guys
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww love u all
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Posted: 15 years ago
#48
Sara, that was g8... Do continue soon.. All eager to knw wht happens next..😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
#49
Sara that was so emotional for our DM 😭 His jann opened her eyes and called out for him happiest day for him. Excellent ff sara look forward to reading more.........
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Posted: 15 years ago
#50
gud wrk yaar............... dm alwyz xpres ur luv to ur bandini...........................

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