after long time pg 98 - Page 2

Originally posted by: Jes75

Oh Sara so romantic ....its simply awesome.....waiting for more.....thanks for sharing it with us....

awwwwww so lovely from u ..........😳😳😳😳😳

Originally posted by: DmLovesSantu

sara Muahz..... loooooooove it

awwww the kisss still on my cheek ..............muahz too u alsoooooooooo

the drops of the rain 2

Santo now in the car and sit so close to him yet so far in the same time ……..DM act as he is not care about her being wet ……………….but he keep look at her from the edge of his eyes catch every movement of her …..As her hand try to remove the hair mess from her face try to fix her wet sari ……

hummm a silent one inside DM ….the wet sari bring the old memories to DM ……bring the moments when santo was with him ……ha with him

Flash back…….

Santo dancing under the rain as the sari stick on her so beautifully and the happiness was shining so widely so deeply so lovely ……as his eyes follow her from his window….there window

Flash back end…………….

The tears found there way to his eyes as he is mixing the past with the present …….many things change in this years as he change with the time from the hardhearted person which live in the memory of his subadrah to DM who love santo love her too much and couldn't do justice to her as she also doesn't do the justice in the same time to him…….she change him so deeply to a strange person the one who he could not recognize with the years …..And that bring the shock to him how the thoughts take him so far so far ……..

As he lost in her and in his thoughts …..

santo also lost in her self ……saying to her self ……I used to love the rain love the drops of the rain to wash my soul to give me the gladness of the life ……. so why? ……why it become as nails hurt me? Hurt me in every part of my body of my soul as it is not me anymore as it is a strange santo the one who could not shout if anything pains her who can't cry if anyone blame her or hurt her……..why my body my soul are so painful as u so near yet so far to me in same time …..the cold is now attack me but from where the warm will come as inside u there is nothing for me ………

and the car reach the Mahiavanshi house in that moment …….and santo turn to open the door but……..

Wow...so touching dear...luvd it...both dafford's luv was jus awesum...cho chweet...waiting 4 ur next part...

awwww

OMG awesome...so tuching....loved it....next part seems 2 look interesting

Originally posted by: priyankapatwa

OMG awesome...so tuching....loved it....next part seems 2 look interesting

it is priya .......................😉😉😉😉

drops of rain 3

DM stop santo from leaving the car by hold her arm with his hand …….it is the reaction of the moment ……..

the reaction of his deep love as his eyes say it but he just turn his face as he searching for something …….that all as the drop of the rain keep hit the car window in a soft music…..as it hit the pain on her so hardly…….

His touch …santo thought……his touch in once bring me a life in everything and every part in me is dancing …….santo bring her hand from her hiding place…from her lap to hold his hand the one which hold her arm ….DM rising his head as his eyes wondering or surprising from her action…..they both look at each other as in same moment santo take his hand to her lips ….missing kiss take the way to his hand as santo bring her lips for this sweet kiss on his skin…….her heart beat as his heart in wild and wishing ……

There faces become closer and closer as the rain continues the music of silence and hit drops………

Suddenly santo eyes catch that DM still searching and her arm still hold by his hand and nothing is there at all……….disappointing there on her eyes as DM found the shawl ….and seem it is the thing that he searching in all this short sweet time ……he pull santo more to him and cover her with the shawl …..As he saying…..

DM: ai chokri……. u are wet and u can get cold take this and cover u self until u reach u room……..and nothing else been add to this words

DM turn and get out the car to enter the house as santo eyes follow him …..Follow every steps of him as the rain keep falling on his head …..fall on his shoulder like the drops try to wash the mountains of sadness from his shoulder to take them away from him and the tears finally fall down from DM eyes as he walk away from his life and as well from santo eyes as she found him in real that he is so far and so near in the same time ………then DM disappear from her area of looking to found her self looking at the Mahiavanchi house with pain …..With refused to be one from or part from them as she as mother always there for them but as children no one for her ….no one at all as they toke there father away from her so far so far but…….

Santo just get out and enter the house as she say to her self

Nothing remain the same …nothing remain as it is in a moment everything is change

….and keeps repeating to her self as her steps take her to the room there room……

TBC

Aww its so touching ....both of them so near yet far ......their yearning for each other brings tears to my eyes.....very nicely written ....