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Posted: 15 years ago
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Sara, that was touching dear... Luv it!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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the drops of rain 4

Santo sit on the bed in the darkness of the room darkness of the storm….darkness of the rain as it is her tears…… lost in her self ……time move so slowly and the shawl on her shoulder….santo suddenly remembering the shawl and raised up to her nose want to catch the smell of her half …… . Her DM

The tears fall on the shawl on DM as it a request …DM hold me tightly in your arms hold me away from the pain from the sadness …..Hold me in u arms ….hold me …

Suddenly a strange shadow of someone walk appear on the wall of her room as it reflected from lightened while the rain keep falling strongly …..santo not notice that as she lost in her world …..

Then a strong sound of something fall down makes her take aback….what is this? Santo say it in load …..Who is there? Santo shout and she stand up start walking to found up what had happen now ……..then as the lightened happen she shout strongly……haaaaaaaaaaaaaa …… fright from the sound of thunder and from the man who start to run as he want to catch her ……….

Santo shouting again…….malikkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk and faint down ……

All what is there is the dark and a sound from so far call her ……santo wake up please ….no life without u ….wake up

But for whom….. santo say it to her self in her dark world …..There is no one want me even my malik my DM ……but the sound keep calling her …calling her with beg for not let him alone …….he beg her to be a life again ……

It is the sound of DM who come running to her a long with the members of the family……but Hiten reaching there before him and catching the man who is a thief…….catching him while he try to kill santo as she recognizing him……and when DM saw that he felt like the breath is stop in a second as someone trying to take his soul away from him ….

He take off the champal from his feet and start to hit up that man so hardly so hardly as he want to bring all his pain all his anger all his lonely of this years on that thief …….in a second this man want to take her away from him in a second …..

Then DM turns to santo who lie on the floor …..Hold her …check if she alright if she is alive ………he carry her to there room and try to wake her up and as he hold her face with his hand …….DM surprised to found her hot

A high fever controlling santo …..As the doctor say and if the fever not reducing in the 48 hours it may turn to kill her…….

DM eyes full with shock …….and he just could not believe what his ears catch from news …………..

DM sits beside her bed ….taking care of her and calling her to fight up the sickness

TBC
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Posted: 15 years ago
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aww.....so cute sara................i knoe DM will never let his bandini die..............he'll take care of her very well.....waitin 4 ur nxt post sara......... 🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
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OMG Saraaaaaaaaaaa 😭😭😭😭
sowie for the late reply but i just read all the FF.. omg my dear very good job well done👏 plz dont let our santu die... our dm needs his santuri...awww soo sad I am loving it plz keep it up and reply asap Muahzzz
🤗 this is for u... 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow..........so touching and emotional................continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Sara, that was sooo gud...pls post the next soon😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#27
Sara so emotional and touching, continue pls.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Sara,Both parts r cho chweet...Rainyyyyyyyy........Touchhhhhh........Amazinggg.....Keep going....Sorrry 4 late reply..........
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Posted: 15 years ago
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so sweet...........lovely sara....sorry for replying soo late
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi Sara,WONDERFUL. I enjoyed it(the drops of rain..1). Going to read the next one.
@ the drops of rain 2 is also gr8. It brought tears in my eyes 4 SanRaj.
@the drops of rain 3 is awesome. My heart is bleeding 4 them.
@ the drops of rain 4 is brilliant. DM will realize her importance when he is about to loose her. Actually he loves her deeply but his ego stops him to acknowledge dt. When he will be really worried for her then dt feeling will automatically come out 4m him. Fantastic FFs. Eagerly waiting 4 ur next one. Post ASAP. 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
Edited by cuckoo_chand - 15 years ago

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