Tanhayian(SaJan FF)-DISCONTINUED (Note on Pg. 73)

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Aani

@EkPaheli

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Posted: 15 years ago

#251

Wow !!!

that is the 1st word which came to my mind Ayesha 🤗

amazing man .. seems like u r a perfectionist as Gunjan too 😉

such detailing.. such finesse i mean its awesome .. u know ayesha i am a bookworm 😆😆 and yet a very picky reader... thou i dont mind the genres .. i shd love the content and be excited by it

and i love stories with layers... exactly as urs seems 😃

this is great.. first is the thing abt pinky ... of course i am dying to know that part.. but thx now that u said it'd be out soon , also i wanna see how sam takes it .. u know its a huge deal

also like Diya since ur story has a professional angle it is exciting to look forward to it, and yet know things will have a chilled out feeling cause of the college backdrop

and hey how cute BenIa 😃 Yay !! u got them here ..hmm so they are lovebirds in the making ..choo chweet

aww Benji idolizes Sam.. some things never change.. and Dia already crushing on him 😳

hey hon i wanna know are Uday and Riya a couple or what or just the permanent additions of Excel who would never let the canteen guy worry 😆😆

wow hon am so loving this .. esp those moments of awkward silence u know they seem so intense and yet so amazing

beautiful UD honey !! keep rocking and thx 4 d PM 😃

Edited by aahana86 - 15 years ago

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jyotika

@-Jyotika-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#252

awesomeeeeee updt dear...
mindblowingggg...
loved every single thing a lottttt...
the way u explained everything ws awesomeee 👏 👏
sajan convo ws tooo cuteee 😳 a bit of awkwardness b/w dem 😳
everything ws superbbb n perfect...
pllzzzzzzzz do cont soon.. cant wait to read further..!!

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AnotherAdmirer

@AnotherAdmirer

Rocker

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Posted: 15 years ago

#253

WOW! It was Mindblowing!:D LoveD every bit of it!
You narrate the story really well with tiny minute details, its really fab!i can imagine each and every thing!👏

So dia and Benji havent confessed yet but they have those butterflies:D gr8

I get so into it..tht wen the chap ends m like...oh it ended! leaving me wanting to read more!

Even i was wondering along with gunjan as to wat she left and then u pointed at the pen i was like ohh yeah!

Its like..i cant express.

well Like its expected to happen but u show it in a very unexpected way!

Now i hope u get my point!

cont soon hun!!

waiting eagerly for the next!

lots of luv

ZeeJay!

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280200

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Posted: 15 years ago

#254

"Hi Dia! How r u?" Samrat asked her to which she could just mumble, with her eyes literally staring at him, "thank you Sir", without realizing that there was another answer to what Samrat had asked and not only a thank you.

🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 this para is gonna be my favvvv!!!!! *cheeks pullinggg*

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368758

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Posted: 15 years ago

#255

Wow nice update.Please continue soon.With more SAJAN scenes.

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topsyturvy23

@topsyturvy23

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#256

hey lovely ff
just read all the parts in one go
plz add me to ur pm list

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RapChick101

@RapChick101

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#257

WOW! 👏 such a sweet FF!!!! I love their chars........plz cont soon nd add me to ur pm list .......

P.S wats ur name.....

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-CreativeSoul-

@-CreativeSoul-

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#258

wow awsome part

finally some sajan sceans without anyone else

loved the update

thanx for the pm

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aashi

@aashizin

Inactive

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Posted: 15 years ago

#259

hey aayesha dear awesome update loved it to the core ,loved today you describe silence talk of sajan superbly loved it the way both shared mutual concern for each other, do continue soon and thanks for pm