Pyaar Impossible or It's Possible?AR ff p-10 pg 31 - Page 7

loved the update

Lovely FF !
It's really intriguing - and very well written😊
i love the concept and the way Armaan behaves and talks - is exactly like DMG !
oye hoye - the good old days of DMG 😉

I had two requests though: 😳
When you're writing the characters thoughts, could you write it on a seperate line and a diff colour ? it makes it easier to understand and read!

Ex;
Riddhima realized she has no other place to sit nd made a bad face and went and sat next to him.

"gr8 going ridz…..aajka din hi kharab hai……subah se sirf ek hi insaan se paala pad raha hai aur who bhi itna irritating hai……bhagwanji aapne iska naam armaan hi kyun rakha …….ek who armaan hai jiske bina mein nahi reh sakti aur ek yeh armaan hai jiske saath nahi reh paaungi" she murmured which was audible to armaan.

"kuch kaha tumne?"

Please don't be offended - just a suggestion! 😳

& second request: Please do add me to your PM List! Love your FF - so cute! 😆

Originally posted by: cutee987

hey aditi i really like ur ff , do continue soon, and ya plz pm me ,it was nice.

hey dear
thnx a lot for commenting 😊
the next update might be on 11th
n yea i will def. pm u
thnx again
loads of love
take care
aditi

Originally posted by: KaSh_Deewaanie

thanx for d double treat it was fantastic!

hey
thnx for commenting dear 😊
hpe to see ya around often

loads of love
take care
aditi

Originally posted by: dhruvikaluvsKSG

heyy dear : hiiiii 😊

awesome parts :thnx a ton

jaldi dono ko milvaoo :sure sure 😃

mujhe aur padhna hai : awww......mujhe bhi aur likhna hai 😆

plzzzzzz cont soon :sure honey, next update on 11th

n thx for pm : my pleasure 😊

luv dhruvika

loads of love
take care
aditi

Originally posted by: sadiqsai

Hi aditi : heyya 😊
awesome update as alwayz : thnx a lot dear m glad u liked it 😃
I love armaan : i love him too yaar... 😛
I can't wait until the 4 days r over and he tells her that he is her armaan :dnt wry for u all m ready to finish off these four days in juzz 2 days 😆 next update on 11th😊
can't wait 2 c what is vivek up 2 : aaahhhh hw did u knw its vivek??? 😭
con soon : sure sure 😊
thanks 4 the pm : my pleasure

loads of love
take care
aditi

Originally posted by: kashndsel4eva

loved the update : thnx 😊

wonder who said that riddhima will never forget tha day : the answer is pretty obvious honey n i think u must have guessed it tooo😛

hope nothing happrns tp ridz : i hpe so too

cant wait to see what armaan has planned for ridz : even i cant wait yaar 😆

con soon : sure next update on 11th 😃

loads of love
take care
aditi

Originally posted by: Phatty16

Lovely FF !
It's really intriguing - and very well written😊 : thnx dear 😊
i love the concept and the way Armaan behaves and talks - is exactly like DMG !
oye hoye - the good old days of DMG 😉

m glad u think tat armaan is exactly like he was in DMG.......actually i had started writing this ff when armaan wasnt der.......so wanted him to be exactly like he is in DMG.....nad 'oye hoye' yaar is dialogue pe toh meri jaan bhi haazir hai...........love this dialogue of armaan😃

I had two requests though: 😳
When you're writing the characters thoughts, could you write it on a seperate line and a diff colour ? it makes it easier to understand and read!

Ex;
Riddhima realized she has no other place to sit nd made a bad face and went and sat next to him.

"gr8 going ridz'..aajka din hi kharab hai''subah se sirf ek hi insaan se paala pad raha hai aur who bhi itna irritating hai''bhagwanji aapne iska naam armaan hi kyun rakha ''.ek who armaan hai jiske bina mein nahi reh sakti aur ek yeh armaan hai jiske saath nahi reh paaungi" she murmured which was audible to armaan.

"kuch kaha tumne?"

Please don't be offended - just a suggestion! 😳


thnx a ton for ur suggestion......will def. keep tat in mind while updating the next part😊.......n no i dnt mind....even in future if u think nething can be dne to improve the ff u are most welcome to say that 😃

& second request: Please do add me to your PM List! Love your FF - so cute! 😆

awwww........will deffo add u to my pm list and thnx once again and yea my ff is cute!!! thnx for saying that yaar coz tats hw i wanted it to be jyaada rona dhona mujhe nahi pasand 😳😳

loads of love
take care
aditi

hii iloved it

awesome parts. wow, ridz is really strong and confident, it takes a lot of courage to slap a guy in front of whole college.