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Posted: 15 years ago
heyy!
awesome update!!
the best was benji-sheena.. where he was almost abt to kiss her
=D
sooo cutee
and i agree wid yu... i am wid dia too
and i loved how sam tried to find out what was wrong.. but anyways..
cute part!
cant wait to read more..
oh.. btw..
just noticed this...
i LOVE the picture yu have of edward-bella
its sooo nice!!!
i luvv themm =P
lol..
well
take care =)
HiNaL
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Posted: 15 years ago
awsomeeeeeeee
mindblowingggggg
cont sooooooon
n thnx 4 the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome Update!!
THEY WE'RE ABOUT TO KISS??!!
OMG im with Nupur im mad at Sumi too
She shoulda jus stayed home!!
GOSH!!
lol ab ghussa band now SaJan!!! =D
aw so cute he winked at her!
so glad that their atleast friends now!!
can't wait to read ur next part
again FANTABULOUS update Zeeru!!!
plllzzzzz continue soon
THANKS for the PM!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
@Lovebarbie- thnx a lot dear :)

@mehek- thnx for the review..glad u liked it:D

@ght_sajan- thnx dear:) really glad u liked it:D

@aarthi- u r ryt ...'sounds good' thnx for the review:)

@jyotika- thnx dear..glad u liked it:D

@sana- thnx a ton dear:D

@sana- thnx jaana!:D

@saduf- thnx dear..i tried to pm u..but ur inbox is full 😕

@hinaL- yesh! Jia has started:D actally i tried to show more indepth into the relationship sammy n sheena shared at college times :)glad u spotted my attempt:D
and yes! Edward and bella!*sigh* i LUV EM!! they are sooo sooo soo, dont have words to describe!!!they rock!😳

@sonal- m glad u liked it!!:D thnx for the review!:)

@marukh- yes:D haha yeah..I dunno if readers noticed, but i tried to show, tht sumi is not perfect, she's friendly but she has her opinions abt the gang, and for her, its not necessary to be frank with benji's frnds is it? 😉 thnx dear! m really glad u liked it!

Guys! am truly overwhelmed by the response my FF's get!
u know guys i always say
My FF's are incomplete when i post them...u guys complete it by ur awesome reviews!!🤗
Thanks a ton! 😊
Lots n lots n lots of luv!
ZeeJay!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Chapter 15
These little confessions we make

Samrat entered to find evry1 seated in the hall.
"Guys..i cant help it...shes in tears now" Samrat explained to others...only after saying so did he notice benji amongst their midst."Hey Benji"
"Hi.."Benji replied.
"ermm...whose crying...sheena?y?" Sumi asked.
"I guess Benji has the answer to tht" Samrat folded his hands.
Benji looked at others all were waiting for an answer from him.."Guys..we will solve it out...we just need time.."
"wat happened benji?" Sumi asked sharply..
Something is wrong between sheena n Benji ..i guess i knw wat it is...she must b in love with benjiSumi thought.
"Nothing sumi...just a friend thing" Benji assured her.
"oke" Maybe i should trust him. Sumi thought again. Her phone rang she picked it up..it was her aunt, she had some urgent work and had called her home immediately.
"Guys..i g2g i hope u all solve this matter soon...bye benji." She gave benji a fleeting kiss on the cheek and left.
"Benji if u want to solve this go to sheena now." CJ suggested.
"I cant" Benji gulped.
"why?" Mayank asked.
"m ashamed..i cant face her." Benji murmured.
"See we want to help you...this is not the way to solve the problem...u cant avoid her...solve it out!" Dia argued.
"Yes Dia is right..u should go n talk to her." RV said.Dia ignored RV.
"Yes but i dont know wat to say!"Benji reasoned out.
"then tell us wat happened..we will help." Nupur pleaded.
Benji kept quite. "oke tell us why sheena broke the mirror."
"we had a fight.."
"A fight..abt wat"
"well sheena was all alone in the hall n the lights were off too.. i asked her if she needs company, i dont knw wat happened but she was all rude...i told her to cut it out n she said sorry on being asked the reason for her rude behaviour...she ..."
"she wat" Uday asked.
"she told me to not to interfere in her life." Benji completed.
"wat! sheena said tht?" Gunjan asked.
"well she must hv been really sad abt sumthin...she wont say sumthin like this...never." Dia said.
"I got it!!" Uday exclaimed suddenly.
"wat!?" Nupur asked.
"sheena's behaviour...Wat is it ..?" Samrat asked.
"yeah, shes depressed i suppose." Uday exclaimed.
"depressed! no shes really happy here infact she told me n gunjan...tht shes very happy among all of us.." Nupur reasoned.
"yeah sheena is happy not depressed." Gunjan agreed.
"No..wat i mean is she is depressed with her life...n it was a phase ...yesterday night..see she was all alone benji says."
Just as Uday was telling others abt wat benji already knew another thought struck him.her words seemed to echo in his ears
"Saw me all alone! yes u did but u knw wat i hv been like this all my life now! This is me! alone!lonely do u get tht?"
See u dont knw anything ..so just dont.dont
"Sorry but i dont want ur pity"

Benji scarcely heard the gang, his mind was racing way ahead than the gang's.It all made sense!
She thinks i pity her...y..bcoz she is alone..alone..? i want a partner who wud b mine she said tht...fame..glory thts tht...ya i think i getit now..
I immediately got up...i atleast had something to talk abt with her..i can say sorry too then."Guys..i guess i knw wat it is...i'll b back"
"where r u going?" Samrat asked
"to sheena" I replied almost at the gate.
"Wait!" I heard CJ screech."Enough! Benji come back!"
"wat!?" I asked perplexed. "come back!" she demanded again.
Looking at Cj i thought it was safer to retreat.
I seated myself again to listen to CJ, who stood up and stood in the middle of all of us.
"See we r a group...though yes some of us r divided in to groups..but we had decided we r one...so now wen we solve sheena's problem we all should knw abt it..."
"oke thts right.."Uday agreed.
"Fine guys..." I stood up knowing tht this will take quite long.
"It was our first meeting when Sheena told me tht she hides her feelings from all of us...she wants someone who can understand her,,u knw someone who loves her...well thts wat she told me...well she told me tht she is alone.. after tht many a times she said tht life is gud with all frnds together and tht shes afraid of this month to get over...she likes it the way it is...she hates her life....she said she struggled all the while for her career but now its like a curse for her...among this yesterday she said the same thing tht shes alone n will always b coz thts how her life is ..." I ended up ignoring the almost happened kiss last night.
"oke so now wat r u going to do..?" CJ asked.
"just wait and watch" with tht i left heading to the beach.
"Cj" Mayank called.
"yup..?" CJ turned to Mayank.
Mayank looked at Nupur to find her sitting at the farside of the couch talking to samrat and uday.
"Help me!" Mayank whispered.
"wat?" CJ asked perplexed."ohh oke lets go to ur room.."
Cj shut the door behind her.."oke abt proposing to nupur...."
Mayank sat down and CJ stood at the windowside. she looked out an idea struck her.
"In the rain!!" she exclaimed.
"what!?" mayank asked."yes looks like its goin to rain ..i'll get evryone out...n then u can propose her.!!!"
"No way she wont like it, its too simple." Maynk argued.
"Trust me she will love it..u knw y?"CJ asked grinning broadly
"why?"mayank asked.
"hmm lets c...u realised ur love for her...wen it was raining....it rained after the play performance wen u told each others feeling n fell in love!..and it rained on ur first date too!and it rained wen u were leaving for bangluru...u guys had ur special night then?"
mayank jerked up "how did u know??" he asked gaping at her.
CJ laughed "nupur told me nyways so when u propose her it should b in the rain too!"
"ya ya ..we should marry in the rainy season too then...it will be veryyyyy romantic!!
it wont work! she wont like it" mayank repelled.
"Trust me dude it will work...n it will b too romantic!" Cj assured.
"oke lets try it then.."
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Posted: 15 years ago
At the beach

Benji approached sheena who was making patterns on the sand with a stick she was barefoot, her shoes kept aside.
"Hey"Benji said.
Sheena looked up to find Benji next to her, without muttering a word she continued making the pattern.
"what r u making..?" benji asked.
Sheena didnt reply as it was a stupid question.
Benji not getting a response sighed and looked at the picture...it was a small girl's face ...a very happy one.
"hmm" Benji murmured and sat down next to her.
"Sheena m sorry about wat happened last night..i dont know wat it was....it just happened..i hope u understand."Benji started.
Sheena still gave no answer but he was now sure tht she was listenin to his each n evry word.
"Sheena ..i hv a fair idea abt ur life..as u told me, i cannot be sure whether i know the whole truth...u may hv not told me evrything n thts understood..but y do u feel tht i pity u..? y do u feel tht ur life is different from tht of us..tht u r alone.?"Benji asked looking at sheena.
she had stopped drawing the patterns...she just looked at the girl..
it was difficult for her to answer benji....
"you trust me dont u?"Benji asked but he dint get a response.sheena had gone back to her past..how her world had turned upside down.
"sheena please say something."Benji pleaded.
Sheena looked up at benji."m sorry sheena..abt wat happened but pls dont feel tht u r alone..we all r there for u ...always.."Benji promised.
"Sheena Malhotra" sheena said in a whisper.
Benji looked at her perplexed but waited in silence for her to continue.
"the famous actress....her past a blurred image..do u knw wat happened after graduation..?" sheena asked benji
"No..infact i was surprised wen i saw u in movies n all.." Benji said and stopped wen sheena gave a sad smile.
"Indeed noone knows abt tht...i have hidden it so well."Sheena said her voice on the verge to break.
She took a deep breathe in."Sheena Malhotra all set to fulfil and achieve her dream..since childhood..just a few months in mumbai she comes to knw tht her mother had left her forever..."
This shocked Benji ..why had he never asked sheena abt her mother..how could he forget tht the only true relative sheena had..he never asked abt her..he was further shocked at the way sheena said it...she was not crying..she was speaking in a tone as tht of telling a story..
"not wanting to return she never saw the last of her mother..she thought her career was more important..a big mistake for sure....1 year passed she was saddened..no job no work..n little money thts how she lived...looking for a brighter future having the spirit to fight she approached many got thwarted too...ofcoz they say there are many hurdles in the field...she was strong she crossed them all...few ppl took advantage of her..n she fell...too deep none ready to help her...too deep none to console her...she was considered a rag..a shameless human who sold herself..."
Benji looked at sheena wide-eyed...wat sheena had said somehow dint register in his brain."wat!?" he exclaimed.
"yes she was blamed..it was all planned just because she fought...and dint give in...those people blamed her...degraded her personality...made her seem like vermin in the society....a parasite..anyways she left the society and swore that one day all of them will have to pay for it..and she ran for her life to another place...where noone knew the sheena malhotra struggling actress ...they knew just sheena..and then came the change in her life which made her wat she is today...a famous actress came for a shoot...and a gal was needed as the make-up artist...this very gal was recommended by others....the actress gave her a chance...she loved her work..n gave her a job, one day sheena told her abt her dream to be a superstar just like tht actress, the actress asked sheena to perform and she liked it too...the actress gave sheena a break in the movies...and since then tht girl has been just goin ahead in her career without looking back...all this while noone asked her noone seeked her...noone knows wat the famous superstar sheena malhotra had to go through to reach this stage..."
Sheena ended her sentence and sighed...benji was too shocked to say anything sheena had just told him her biggest secret.
"m soo sorry sheena...i dint knw n..y didnt u contact us..i mean we could have done sumthing.."Benji said
"I dont think anyone would have helped me at tht time...life was miserable and i ran...just like any other coward.."
"no not coward...infact u r the bravest girl i have ever met" Benji said without thinkin it was all truth..he meant wat he said.
"thnx Benji."Sheena said.
"wat happened yesterday...abt tht sheena..i just want to say tht u shouldnt feel lonely like tht we all r ur frnds...and."
"i know" sheena cut him of.."it happens with me...i dont like to remember old stuff...but it just comes like a wave and smack downs evrything...it was a phase..and lets plan at we r goin to do for today instead of wasting our time here.."
Sheena stood up..benji not able to understand her vibrant emotions..and her bold confidence.
"sure and i promise i wont tell anyone abt this,.." Benji swore.
"i know u wont" Sheena smiled.
Chapter ends!!
So guys, abt the mayur and rain connection, well i just noticed this one then, which is y i added it...i edited this chap u knw, coz i remember mayu also had their special night in rain, so thought of adding it now😳
but how many of u agree with this idea?😕
Dont u guys feel, benji thinks a lot abt sheena?😉lolz
nd the biggest question guys pls do add this one in ur review!!
tell me wat do u think abt sheena's past??her story?

I like to discuss my story😛 lol i knw m wierd! but thts meh! 😉
Coming to next chap...
GALS DAY OUT I
yup u read it ryt!
Precap- difficult to select, i dont want to give out anything😛
so here it is
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I tried to avert my eyes and look at her face...which to my success i did.
"Hi,u look gorgeous" the very first words tht toppled out of my mouth. i looked at her to see her reaction, all she did was smile "thnx"
i looked closely there was a certain shyness in her smile
My heart seemed to be at full flight at the moment.
~~~~~~
guess who are the two?
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey nice chapter
n yes! u shuld add the rain in mayur part its a gr8 idea
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Posted: 15 years ago
OMG....
This chapter was sooo gooooood....
Cont soon..
And let it beeee SaJan.... 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
awsomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
cont sooooooooon
n thnx 4 the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey zeejay!!
loved the part...
once again =P
anyways..
the best part was how benji knew what sheena was talkin abt..
it was very cute!
=)
nd very mature too.. lol
and abt the rain sequence for mayur...
not a good idea...

but..
a BRILLIANT one =P
(hope i didnt scare yu =P)
love CJ's ideas!!

and to answer yur question abt sheena's past
that definitely explained her overall behaviour.;..
why she felt alone...
and im glad ki usne benji ko bata diya
it feels nice for me as a fan of them =) to know that she shared her deep (and dark.. lol) secret with him
loved it to the core!!

and dun wry.. even i like to discuss my ffs =D
gives me lots of inspiration n motivation =P
anyways..
i loved reading this part a lott!!
cant wait to read the nxt one
=)
luv,
HiNaL

oh btw.. i agree with yu.. abt what yu said in yur old reply to my comment... edward n bella definitely rock!!
i love them a lot toooo
they are an awesome couple!!!
=P
anyways...
thats the last of my comment 😆
luv,
HiNaL


(hope yu like the colourful comment =P i got bored.. so ya 😳)
Edited by basket_101 - 15 years ago

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