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Posted: 15 years ago
hi
nice update.
loved it so much
and i loved ur idea about mayur.
plz pm me ur next part
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Posted: 15 years ago
LOVE IT THANKS FOR PM
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Posted: 15 years ago
AMAZING UPDATE!!!!
OMG i feel so sorry for Sheena
i can't believe wat she had to go thru! 😭
i hope things are better for her later on in her life wit BENJI!! 😳
Glad that SUMI left!! argh! i dont like the way she thinks about the gang!!!!
love the MaYur Rain idea!!! wow i can't believe u noticed that!!!
that would be so romantic *sigh* lol ok back to reality SAJAN!!! where we're were they?? 😭
hhhmm is it SaJan but it doesnt seem like it ok then Mayur??
can't wait for ur next part!!
plzz continue soon
THANKS for the PM!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update
as for mayur and rain connection it was fantastic sorry i wasnt able to comment on the last part had no time by the jia story is progressing really well
sheenas story makes senese it explains her behaviour on the whole mindblowing
continue soon
with love,
ardhana
Edited by ardhana - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
@jyotika- thnx dear!:)

@saduf- glad u liked it:D but...dum dum oops..read the next chap:D

@sana- thnx dear..glad u liked it...ah jaan dont worry u will get all of em..in this chap...but not much romance..

@sonal- glad u liked it:D:D

@HinaL- Yes! I know! so glad u liked Jia!!:D n yup u got me! abt the mayur idea thingy😛 m glad sheena is being understood on overall terms:):) we are a lot similar:D:D u r ma twin:D
Edwella rocks! love em too!!:D yup very colourful..thnx dear!:D

@fariaa-thnx!! u loved mayur idea..u think it shud happen tht way? ermm read the next chap...but i have great stuff in store for mayur fans:D:D hope u will like tht:D

@lovebarbie- thnx dear:D glad u liked it:)

@marukh- yes dear..i understand..but there's a lot of struggle involved wen one has to come into the industry, i had laid this plot actually, based on which sheena's behaviour has been set from the start:) sumi, well yeah eve
n i dont like her😛 but shes not evil....yeah i ound tht link, its a very cute thing, like for sajan its moon...for mayur its rain in the show.
Nope not sajan not mayur.....hope u will like the next chap...thnx for the review.

@cuteangel- thnx dear:) glad u liked it:D

@ardhana- thnx dear:D its oke dear..not a prob... take ur time to read:) am glad u liked it:D

So guys posting the next now
but its a long read...as in a long chap...i tried to part it into two...but it was losing its essence...so posting together.
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Chapter 16
Gal's Day Out
Samrat's POV

I paced around my room thinking through my plan again and again. this was it today i will tell gunjan everything the complete truth what i want surely hopefully wat we want.
"Dude wats wrong?" Uday asked.
"nothing"i replied.
"then stop pacing" Uday reasoned
"ohh oke" i stopped and sat on the bed, no more i'll go right now.i got up from my bed and left for gunjan's room.Once i reached there i calmed myself and knocked on the door.
"yes?" it was nupur who attended to it.
"gunjan?can i talk to her" I requested nupur.
"ohh shes gone to hv a bath" she replied..
"ohh oke i will c her later then." with tht i left n headed back to my room just when i saw Gunjan coming she wore a deep magenta churidar her wet hair clung to her face, she looked the same sweet angel of mine.
"Gunjan"i approached her
"yeah?" she asked.
"i just u knw wanted to ..just ..wanted to simply" I was messing up evrything by my continous hesitation and rambling.
"hold on" Gunjan said.I stopped.
"Now clearly say wat is it?" she was looking at me straight in the eyes, and tht was when i was at a lost for any word everything just seemed to slip away for a moment i felt the world had stopped around me...no no my world stood infront of me ...my gunjan.
"Samrat!" I came back from my reverie
"ohh actually its nothing just tht r u free today?" I asked hoping a yes in return.
"ohh no actually i ..i mean us gals have planned something so ...but why r u asking?" gunjan asked completely oblivious to my intention.
"ermm nothing simply thts it...simply" I headed towars my bedroom i could feel gunjan's eyes on me all the time. I quickly reached for my door and shut it.
What! in the world was wrong with me? i couldnt even ask her out on a date me the love guru samrat actually rambled and made a fool of himself infront of her!
Uday's POV
The tapping noise continued to my irritation,i looked at mayank once again he was as before staring out of the window into the wide sea,every now and then i could hear him sigh or curse in anger, whatever was bothering him i didnt knw but it caused me utmost irritation.
"Mayank! stop!"i said sternly.
"what?" mayank asked completely oblivious to my irritation.
"stop tapping n sighing and...watever u r doing!" i replied.A look of understanding appeared on his face."ohh sorry"
"hmm..wats the problem?"i asked hoping to get a reply.
"The weather"mayank groaned.
I looked out of the window and then realised tht mayank was looking at the sky all this while.
"why wats wrong with the weather? its nice sunny outside after 3 days of rain"
"exactly thts the prob!" mayank groaned.
"oke theres surely something m missing here" i said.
"ohh u dont knw?" he asked. i shook my head.
mayank looked around then bent towards me and whispered"i was going to propose nupur in the rain but now its all sunny! why is it tht always my plans go down the hill!??"
"hmm actually u r quite right...you have been planning to propose nupur for a while..quite a surprise tht a perfectionist like you ..i mean tht ur ideas hv failed so many times..u knww...."i left my sentence midway coz of the deadly look i got from mayank he seemed to be thinking then sighed"you are quite right...who would expect tht a brainy perfectionist like me wont be able to even propose his girlfriend!!"
"hey dont be so hard on urself" i tried to cheer him up, just then i saw CJ, she was wearing a floaty strapless lilac dress which looked perfect on her, the dress seemed to hug her body, her long black straight hair hung on her shoulders and touched her cheeks gently her dress flowing as she approached us.
"Hi" she greeted at a bright note.
I tried to avert my eyes and look at her face...which to my success i did.
"Hi,u look gorgeous" the very first words tht toppled out of my mouth. i looked at her to see her reaction, all she did was smile "thnx"
i looked closely there was a certain shyness in her smile
My heart seemed to be at full flight at the moment.
CJ turned to mayank"feel sorry abt the weather"
"yeah i guess its just my rotten luck" mayank sighed.
"chill yaar dont be so hard on urself...we hv got loads of time!u can propose her anytime!"
"hmm"
"You are going somewhere?" i asked as CJ never dressed this way at home she behaved like the CJ we all knew the cute punk gal.oke from where did tht 'cute' come from?
"yeah all us gals are going out shopping" CJ said brightly.
"wierd" i said.
"hey wats wierd in tht?" CJ asked clearly offended.
"well first off u r happy tht u r going out shopping with all the gals"i continued before CJ could say anything. "and second tht u all gals r going out shopping,i mean u all must hv clothes if not u can borrow stuff wats the need to go shopping?"
CJ narrowed her eyes not in anger but in a playful mood.
"firstly for ur kind information i hv changed i love gossiping and shopping and second we are going shopping coz we havent got good clothes to wear at disco tonight, and also to just hv a gals day out...without you boys"
"ohh really? so its kinda like leaving us out and enjoying yourselves" to my surprise mayank asked in a typical teasy mood.
"yup, u got tht right!" CJ grinned.
"wat whose gonna enjoy and whose leaving who?"Benji asked.
"All the gals hv planned a day out shopping n some gossips n fun" i replied.
"ohh" Benji said, his expression turned to a disturbed one, he looked at CJ wanting to say something then shook his head, again he seemed to approach her, getting irritated by him now i scolded"wats wrong with u guys!? Benji is there aything u want to say to CJ? just speak up...u people are getting quite wierd.!" I left saying tht, there were a lot of things in my mind tht i have to clear up, and tht would never be possible among them
POV ends
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"wats wrong with him?"mayank asked.
"i dont knw"benji said
"its nothing yaar, hes just irritated abt the gloomy mood u guys are hving here and maybe.."
"maybe wat?" mayank asked.
"nothng lets leave tht, well benji u wanted to say something?"
"ermm ya actually..."benji hesitated."actually did u guys invite sumi?"
"ermm no actually its just tht sheena n sumi dont seem to be going well and we thought its us friends day out...and well u knw sumi is not exactly a part of our group.....its sounding pathetic i knw...... i better go invite her." cj got up feeing quite ashamed.
"No no infact dont invite her, i just asked her out on a date today u see so..i will b going out with her and thts y i asked you"Benji rambled on.
"ohh oke thts great then." CJ said.
"Great?, y i dont think so" Samrat interrupted, his tone was quite sarcastic.
"yeah actually" benji tried to clear out.
"chill i was kidding..its gr8 u r going out on a date with her" Samrat grinned.
"date whos going out with whom?" Nupur joined them.
"Benji with sumi" Mayank replied.
"thts not great at all!" Nupur made a face.
"why?" benji asked.
"well sumi is there with you all ur life but we frnds are together only this month you should spend time with us and not with her." Nupur said.
"ohh comeon nupur as if we r spending time with him goin out shopping only us gals?" CJ questioned nupur.
"well its us frnds going out together, we will b discussing stuff abt our lives ahem i mean hving a lil fun there ...it will b sort of catching up with each other."nupur reasoned.
"Nupur agreed with wat u just said but benji too can go out with sumi i mean its just one day and anyways meeting old frnds doesnt mean leaving the present out.just think sumi came here to meet all of us, and well she must be getting bored with her old aunt to live with." Mayank said with a bit of humour to his tone.
"anyways. CJ lets go we will get late or else" Nupur said.
"But wat abt us?" Samrat asked.
"exactly" mayank agreed.
"You can live without us for one day or else ....find a date for urselfs."Nupur said grinning.
Nupur and CJ left."we will visit the famous Roma's boutique and the rose beauty parolur its really gud too" Nupur chatted on along with CJ.
"Girls will be girls"Samrat sighed.
Sheena, Dia and gunjan joined nupur and CJ.They all seemed to be discussing something.
Dia turned to the 3 of us."hey guys where are others?"
"Uday just left, dunno abt RV guess he's in his room."Samrat replied.
"ohh oke well we all are going out shopping and its a long plan together out so we were wondering if u guys meet us at the disco...will tht be fine?"
"At the disco? u gotta be kidding its 2:00 ryt now!" Benji exclaimed.
"Well we said its gonna take long" CJ said.
"ya sure u guys go we will see you at the disco" mayank said.
At 3:00pm
RV's pov

All us guys were sitiing at the living room watching the football match, truly speaking it was heck loads boring, i looked at my fellow friends to find them looking at the screen with no interest.
oke this was it, we could not let this day go a waste.
I switched off the TV, a lot of 'heys' and 'wat the hell was tht' came on me.
I stood up."well guys just coz all the gals hv gone out we cant spend the day like this,lets do something fun"
"u r right" samrat said standing up too.
"Benji wat time is ur date with sumi?" Mayank asked Benji.
"I dont hv a date with her."Benji mumbled.
"wat! but u said.." samrat asked.
"well ya i had to lie else CJ would hv invited sumi and well it was just friends day out, they might not like sumi's presence among them.....
RV's POV ends
Benji's POV

Guys i wanted to ask you all something"i said
"sure go ahead."rv replied.he and samrat got seated
"well guys its just tht wat do u think abt sumi? is she the right one for me?"
"we are not the ones to decide tht its you, how do u feel abt her?" RV asked.
"well i dont knw..at first i used to hate her she was a tomboy then, and well she changed became girly and then i realised tht i actually like her and i started going out with her." Benji replied.
"physical attraction?" Mayank asked.
"No! i like her in nature too i mean shes a nice gal" Benji mumbled.
"one sec u mean wen she turned from a tomboy to tht like gal she changed in nature too?"
"not exactly but well i ...i ...agh i dont knw it just happened." Benji ended.
"oke oke lets c u hated her at first" Samrat started.
"ya only coz she understood me too well...sort of the one who spoke my heart out in words." Benji cleared.
"hmm so u were irritated with tht but when she changed u got attracted to her..just a normal thing for guys...now tell us wat makes u feel tht shes the one?"samrat asked.
"well just tht shes got evrything in her..looks..talent we hv got same tastes,we agree on almost evrything and tht we r happy together...shes a nice gal" Benji said.
"oke then at makes u think tht shes not the one?"Samrat asked.
Benji throwed a 'pathetic'" kind of look at samrat, but then thought about it
"hmm its just tht something has always been missing u knw how theres a spark in every relationship? i dont feel anything as such eventhough we hv crossed a certain stage of our relationship, i dint feel anything special...not the way"i stopped midway realising wat foolish thing i was just gonna say...not the way i felt with sheena did i reall mean it? just slipped out but thts the truth surely...woah stop u need to stop thinking this way sheena and u are over long back chapter's closed.
"not the way?" mayank asked.
"nothing"i said
"listen its better if u ask such questions to gals anyways they r very emotional and sensitive to family n relations stuff" RV said.
"Really?" Uday asked
"yeah even dia is getting very..."RV stopped midway"anyways guys lets leave the gals out for one day! and hv some fun?" RV switched the surroundings to a lighter mood.
"yes u r right we need to prove tht we can live without them" Samrat said.
"Yeah well its not tht hard look at me" Uday said.
Everyone broke into laughter.
Roma's boutique
3:00pm

Gunjan and Nupur were waiting for Dia and Sheena to step out of the trial room who had tried on many dresses but none had satisfied their tastes. CJ meanwhile was checking out for more dresses at the rack.
Dia stepped out from the cabin.
"Guys how do i look?" Dia asked she was wearing a one-shouldered dress its was black striped at the corners and was a blend of Red, pink and white patterned design, it looked great on her, it fitted around her waist, the dress showed a bit of her thighs making guys go mad at her beautiful body all in all dia looked extremely hot n upbeat in tht dress.
"amazing!" Nupur exclaimed.
Just then sheena stepped out too."wow Dia u look gr8 in tht dress"
"thnx" Dia replied "n same to u"
seeing tht sheena looked like a cute little angel in her black denim skirt and green top.
"wow u two look really amazing in these" CJ complimented them.
"thnx, oke lets go afterall theres lot more to do"Sheena suggested.
"yup lets go" I turned with tht to the exit of the shop.
"CJ wait for us we hv to pay first" Dia called.
"am not going anywhere, just taking some fresh air and the beautiful sunshine" I stepped out as the sunrays touched my skin warmed me..."i love this feeling"
"me too" I turned to find Nupur standing next to me.
"The weather's gr8 isnt it?" she asked.
"yeah it is" I replied
"CJ can i ask you something?" Nupur asked.
"erm sure" I hesitated.
"What is it tht at the moment u want the most in ur life, something tht u can give ur whole career ur whole life for?" Nupur asked i looked at her all the while she asked me this question her eyes held a spark, a shine.
"I...I dont knw i hv got evrything"I replied.
"No CJ remember tht day we all prayed for something something tht makes our life incomplete?"Nupur asked as tht of reassuring a kid abt his promise.
"Yeah" I said
"so wat is it?"Nupur asked again.
love "Parents i guess"I answered though it was a complete lie...i dint want my parents to be with me...when they hadnt all my childhood, i dint need them now too.
"ohh parents yes parents but we hv to leave them sometime someday to become a seperate self to learn to exist individually in this world.truly oneness is bliss" Nupur said
I for one was completely shocked at this i felt someone else speak as Nupur, such meaningful talks such psychological thinking and nupur ...it was quite a surprise.
"you are right...now tell me wat did u ask for tht day?" I asked hoping to get a true answer unlike mine.
"I thought it was obvious..."Nupur said surprised there was no fooling in her expression.
"No" I replied.
"Mayank" Nupur closed her eyes and smiled.
"Mayank?u to r together right?" I asked confused.
"CJ mayank is the best thing tht has ever happened to me, after my dad's death he was the one who supported me all the way emotionally mentally or any other way u can think of, he has made my life beautiful, and today i can proudly say tht he is the world to me, without him my life would be incomplete without him the world would hv no meaning, without him i wouldnot exist." I looked at Nupur all this while her eyes were closed, her smile her face glowing, i had heard abt love thought abt love today i saw it i felt it and it touched my heart so deep tht my doubt had been turned to utmost reality love truly is the most amazing thing tht can happen to a person.
"I asked god to let us be this way, I fear CJ for the day when mayank is not with me, I fear each moment ,when i look in his eyes i fear sometimes i see the same fear in his eyes too, we keep promising each other tht watever happens we will b together, but who has seen the future?"Nupur said and this time when she looked at me i could feel the fear she was talking abt see it in her eyes.
"you and mayank are meant to be together nothing i say nothing can break this beautiful bond,i'll pray for both of you" I assured her.
She sighed and then smiled."thnx CJ, u knw i dint tell this to anyone u r the first...not even gunjan,it feels good to let out ur fears, to share them."
"thts wat i always tell u to do, dont i?and well if u listen to me...let ur fears aside coz then life will b difficult to live...fearing the future will only make ur present tense"
"u r right"
"Comeon lets go guys!" Dia called
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"oke guys..so wat do we do?" RV asked.
"How abt chillin by the pool today? its sunny outside" Uday sugested.
"Nice idea"Benji agreed.
"No guys we should do something tht we wont be able to do with gals around u knw something fun?" Samrat suggested.
"Agreed sam" RV said.
"lets go to the beach" Uday suggested.
"beach??" Benji said dubiously.
"well thts a gr8 idea,coz the gals dont wanna go to the beach we can do tht now"RV agreed.
"so beach it is" Samrat agreed jovially.
All of them left to their rooms to get clothes and food for their beach picnic.
Meanwhile the gals were having fun checking out dresses and surprisingly guys too. The gals were all set to hv fun.
"Look Dia tht guy is looking at you" CJ whispered.
Dia took a peep to the direction CJ was pointing at, clearly a guy with a confident quite cute smirk was looking at her, she met his chocolate brown eyes boldly, he was dressed in his jeans and a green shirt with a leather jacket on....wierd leather jacket in this weather?
"Excuse me friends" Dia whispered to others.
"Haye" Nupur sighed dramatically.
Dia turned"what happened babes?"
"I feel sorry for Rev" Nupur said with nonrealistic feelings.
"Rev?" Gunjan asked.
"RV...i gave him a new nick, thts it" Nupur said with a simple expression.
" chil, m just going to hv some fun, nothing serious" Dia winked and left.
Dia walked boldly towards tht guy, he too stepped closer.
"Hi gorgeous" he greeted her.
Dia gave him a fleeting smile and checked him out, her gaze shifting from down to slowly at his face.
"m Arry name's Arun, and wats the name of the beautiful sunshine" Arun looked at Dia with his head tilted a bit towards Dia with his same cocky grin.
"m Dia" Dia smiled.
"Nice name" Arun complemented her.
"I saw u staring back there" Dia went on
"Well i cant help it u see, if god brings such a beautiful creation infront of me, i cannot avert my eyes but stare longinly until its mine"
"aww" dia pouted and pulled his cheeks mockingly " m already taken" Dia smirked.
"oooh ma bad luck" Arun lifted his hand to is heart as if it pained him.
"Better luck next time" Dia smirked and left to join the gals.
Chapter 16 ends
so guys start of DJ..actually DJ started long back, only now its getting highlighted, as the frustration bubbles inside😉
MAYUR again plan flopped...DONT WORRY GUYS! It will happen later..😊
Do comment....state if any doubts...wil clear them:)
Next chap- SECRET PLANS I
PRECAP-
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"Something makes me feel tht they r upto no good" Gunjan whispered to Nupur.
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I loaded the things back in the car finally understanding my problem so far, attraction tht was all, i was getting attracted towards CJ.I tried to be with Rhea,and have some fun but it didn't work

reasons were simple
1. After..........
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not giving out more on the second precap involving uday.😛
Ermm i dunno how to say this....but all u guys knw very well tht all the characters are grown-up adults, and are responsible for their decisions and actions, so its kind of like not bad...if they do something which doesnt sound gud....ah! i better express the whole thing in the next chap.

for now ur precious comments?
do review they mean a lot to me:)
lots n lots of luv
ZeeJay!:)
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hey i commented before ur pm..
woowwww dear..
lovelyyyyyy upd.
lovd it to the core..
mindblastinggggg...
do cont.soon..!!
-Mehek-
Edited by kasufan4ever - 15 years ago
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awesome ud
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continue soon thanx 4 the pm

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