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Posted: 15 years ago

hey awesome

precap was amazing hope next is sajan patch up and mayur proposal
with love,
ardhana
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Posted: 15 years ago
heyy!
nice part zeejay =D
and the promo was soo interestingg!!
gunjan blushin to sammy's wink..
veryy cute !! =D
and abt dia-rv....
i wonder why all of a sudden she wants a baby...
hmmm =P
anyways,,
thx for the pm
nd do cont soon
HiNaL
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome ud
loved it
precap was awesome
continue soon
n thanx 4 the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
@jyotika- thx a lot dear..glad u liked it:)

@aarthi- sajan patchup, there's time for tht

@saduf- thnx dear, glad u liked it:)

@ght_sajan- i know dear...but i had to focus on other tracks:)

@krish_jenny- thnx dear:) glad u liked it:D

@pebzy- thnx dear! means a lot to me!:)

@marukh- thnx jaan, glad u liked it so much!!:)

@sweetsonal- thnx jaan, glad u liked it

@LOVEbarbie- thnx sweetz, am glad u liked it:D

@mehek- thnx dear..means a lot!:D:D

@sana- thnx, i know sweet SAJAN, but in the future track, am removing that title, things will take a bad turn...

@ardhana- dont worry mayu is on with his plans...lets see if he succeeds in the next one😉 for SAJAN patch-up not yet.

@HinaL-thanks dear, yeah, i thought of adding a lil SAJAN fluff;) well its not all of a sudden, dia has been thinking abt it....all the gals were surprised wen RV told them at the start tht he didnt propose to dia or nything. further track will reveal more..:)

@cuteangel- thnx dear , am glad u liked it:D


I have 10 characters in my hands, sorry cant show all of them in one chap😕..ryt now focusing on sheena..next chap will involve the entire gang....lots of fun as well😊
i hope u guys like the the final thing ,i.e. the proposal patch-up and many other things:)

posting the next chap now:D
Edited by VampirePrincess - 15 years ago
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Chapter 14
These "feelings" we have

He laid me on my bed and sat by its side.He kept silent for abt a few minutes. me too...not daring to break the silence..
"Sheena " he said finally. I looked up at him..he was disturbed and angry.
"Yeah?" I said.
"why did u do this?" he asked
I closed my eyes ...i had no answer to this. "Just forget abt it"
"You must b hurt?" he asked
"No m f9" I lied
"Show me your hand" he demanded
I showed the one not hurt. "The other one" he said.
I sighed and showed him the wound
"God! Are you insane!?" he scolded at me.
"Yes" I replied.
"What!?" he asked
"Yes i hv gone mad" I said again.
I heard him scurrying around,he held my hand n then pain shot through my arm as i felt the cotton make contact with my skin..he then pricked out the tiny glass pieces....he tied my arm with a bandage.
"Sheena" his voice was tht of approaching a patient."Look at me please"
"I opened my eyes to find him very close to me...I could feel his breath on my face..perhaps he could tooo.
I was aware that i was very close to sheena...close enough tht i should be to sumi not her. But i could see the pain hurt anger n anguish clear in her eyes ...something had disturbed her to no limits and she was mistaken too.
"Sheena i dont pity on u...trust me....i dont knw wat made u say tht" he said.
He was so close to me that i couldnt utter a word...did he knw much dazzled i was?
"I never meant to hurt u ..i can never hurt u! u knw tht ..dont u?"
I looked at my hands...he lifted my chin with his fingers ..he was so close tht i swear i could lose control any second. Benji touched my hands which were resting on the bed and approached me further i could feel his breath on me..I moved back..i was breathing heavily..wat was benji doin? he moved his hands from mine and held my face in a very soft and gentle manner.
"Benji...I.." Hearing his name might have brought him back to his senses as he backed off with a jerk looked at me wide eyed and left banging the door shut. .
I was too shocked and dazzled to say anything..i could still feel his fingers lingering on my cheeks and his scent in the air.
Benji's POV
I jerked off hearing my name wat was i doing? i was gonna kiss her! i banged the door shut.and scurried to my room...no one was supposed to knw abt this ..wat will sumi think if she came to knw? and wat the hell was i doing to sheena? wat must she be thinking...god when she was all sad n depressed ..i did something like this! Shame on me!
POV ENDS
"What just happened?" RV asked others.
"Well it seems situation is bad as Benji shut the door quite loud." Samrat replied
"oke..so wat now?"Uday asked
"I will check on Sheena" Dia suggested "and its late now i'll tell u guys wat actualy happened 2mrw morning..its better if u go to sleep"
"oke then cya...G'Night guys" Samrat wished evry1.
Next Day
"Hey" Everyone greeted Diya and RV at the dining table.
"Hey guys" Diya sighed and took her seat,.
"So what exactly happened last night?" Nupur asked.
"I told them...now its ur part" Samrat answered Diya's unasked question.
"Well guys something is wrong with both of them and specially after Sumi has come."Dia said.
"oke how can u say tht?" Uday asked.
"Its just clear from her behaviour...."Diya said.
"Quite right" Gunjan said."But wat did she say when u approahed her last night?"
"She dint let me enter ...she was crying i could hear tht ...she said she will be fine" Diya replied.
"Let Benji come we will ask him" CJ said.
"Benji wont say a thing he would hv told yesterday nite itself..n if u notice benji and sheena hvnt come down yet." RV said.
"Yeah" Samrat agreed.
"Hey Guys" Sumi entered the dining area greeting evry1.
"Hi sumi come join us for breakfast" Mayank suggested
"thnx but i had some"Sumi replied.
"ermm wheres benji? and sheena?"She asked.
"ah u c they r sleeping" Nupur replied in a rude tone..knwing tht sumi was the cause of benji and sheena's distress she dint like the idea of sumi's presence among them...sure sumi was a sweet gal and benji's girlfriend..but u never know wats in the person's heart...and despite all that anything tht breaks or disrupts the friendship of the 10 of them is not good in nupur's eyes.
"oke" Sumi said"I was just wondering u know Benji is a morning person"
"Pardon me but we know our friend better than you!" Sheena said as she came down the stairs, she was wearing purple vest with white trousers and sport shoes on, her hair held high in a ponytail, while a few hair plucked from corners landed on her shimmering skin.She was also as the gang noticed, was wearing a classy diamond ring with a little make-up applied. "He might be the morning person as he became an RJ else he was always the latecomer"
"oke ...is something wrong?" Sumi asked quite wierded out
"Yes u .."Nupur stood up
"Di! no"Gunjan stopped nupur.
"oke"Nupur sat down.
"Have a seat Sowmya..m sure benji will b here soon" Sheena said with a tone which expressed that she had way important work to do.
"You know my name? I mean Benji must have told u"Sumi said surprised.
"nope"
"Oke" Sumi said now really wierded out.
"Sheena are you ok?"Uday asked.
"Yeah m fine now" Sheena replied sweetly
Strange how can a person be rude and sweet at the same time?ppl like famous sheena and ms. attitude Nupur... benji's friends are quite wierd..a few of them actually gunjan is a sweet hun and sam is also very friendlySumi thought.
"Oke guys m going for a walk ,,will cya later."Sheena said.
"hey sheena wait!"samrat called.."i'll join u too...ma tummy has increased a lot" Samat turned to others evryone was laughin gunjan too, he caught her eye and winked at her..he noticed her goin red which sent a rush of adreline through him..she looked beautiful blushing like tht.
Only a few more days m sure evrything will b fine.Samrat thought and followed sheena out to the wide beach.
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At the beach
"The weather is too good!" Samrat said. "Yeah nice breeze....i think we should all go for the picnic now" She suggested
"Picnic?" Samrat asked.
"Yeah...farmhouse yaar!" sheena reminded
"ohh ya...ya we should.." Samrat agreed."lets race.."
"what?"
"till tht black stone...lets race. The one who reaches first can ask nythin they wish and the other one has to answer no matter wat"
"Oh you are on!" Sheena smirked.
Both of them ran to reach the stone first..at equal pace.Samrat laughed"you wont b able to beat me"
"I will" Sheena replied
"oke then catch up" with tht samrat started runnin at a faster speed. Sheena followed suit and screamed at the top of her voice"Hey gunjan nice of u to join us!"
"Gunjan? where..?" Samrat stopped and looked around.
Sheena bucked up and reached the high stone first.
"Hey thts cheating!" Samrat argued.
"Ha..u lost!" Sheena shouted in victory
"nice to c u happy" Samrat said..this sombred her.
"m always happy" sheena said
"no..now since u cheated..my qs...wat happened yesterday night?" Samrat asked.
"that ..was nothing." sheena answered.
"You gotta b kidding me..look at ur hand."
"wat? i mean it just happened oke!....we dont need to think abt it now...we can enjoy u knw..no need to remember bad things...we r here to enjoy!"
"ofcoz we r here to enjoy...but the main part was to catch up with each other which we all r doin ...but somehow somewhere always u dont"
"i do....i hv told u guys evrything abt me..my profession...my life"
"no u hvnt...if wat u said is so...then u wudnt hv been hurt like tht...or done nythin as such"
"for godsake why cant u just forget abt tht! ?"
"because we all care n we want to help you"
"but i dont need any help... u ..u just... dont care! Ya stop caring"
"thts not possible.."
"n y is tht??"
"because we all are frnds! u r my frnd...and i knw u more than nyone i hv been ur frnd and ur ex-bf too...it must b something really big tht u hurt urself for.."
"Samrat!just leave me alone!"Sheena screeched,
"But" I reasoned
"please samrat! just leave!" sheena said now sobbing in tears
"oke..pls stop crying.."
I headed back home may b gunjan or benji could talk abt this to her....
Chapter ends!!
That's that guys!!:D
So do comment! hope u guys liked it?
Again to sum up evrything
Jia- Well ther world is upside down..as we see in the chap.
Rania- well dia is angry, as RV had promised, but cut her off harshly. Am on dia's side.😛 RV didnt even propose to her! i sympathise with her here..wat abt u guys?
SAJAN- they are stuck on the friends track..but guys are they behaving like one? no, there's still tense moments, gang wants them to get close, but sheena's prob has distracted them.
MAYUR- as mayank said, everything must be fine, but he cant wait this long, as troubles seems to be gang's second best friend.
DJ- They are happy, glad to be as friends, but let me drop the hint, CJ is a lot more girly, and UD(yup UD not uday) is like sam in college times....so spotted anything?

Now about the next chap
"These little confessions we make"
Precap-
"oke so now wat r u going to do..?" CJ asked.
"just wait and watch" with tht benji left heading to the beach.
"Cj" Mayank called.
"yup..?" CJ turned to Mayank.
Mayank looked at Nupur to find her sitting at the farside of the couch talking to samrat and uday.
"Help me!" Mayank whispered.
"wat?" CJ asked perplexed."ohh oke lets go to ur room.."
Cj shut the door behind her.."oke abt proposing to nupur...."
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Posted: 15 years ago
gr8 part dear
Loved it...
awesomeee n mindblasting upd.
do cont.soon
n thnx for the pm..!!
-Mehek-
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Posted: 15 years ago
fantasic update ..ok RAINA now troubled waters....
CJ and Mayu planing for the nupur proposal sounds good..
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesomeeee updt..
luved it..
do cont soon..
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesoem....
Mindblowing....
And what can I saaay....
Just cont soon naaa... 😳

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