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Posted: 15 years ago
awsomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee yr
toooooooooo goood
loved it
cont soooooon
n thnx 4 the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
gr88 upd.dear..!
loved it to the core..
do cont.soon
n thnx for the pm
-Mehek-
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey! awesome update n loved the precap too
it ws awesome
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Posted: 15 years ago
Great Update!!
oh no poor Sheena
ye benji aur sheena ki bich me kabab mein hadi hai!!
Is she good or bad??
To me she looks a bit chalak lol =D
OMG the precap is it RV n Dia??
cant wait to read the next part
ppllzz continue soon!!!
THANKS for the PM!!!
=D =D =D =D =D =D
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey loved the update!!!
esp becuz yu update soo regularlyy =P
i wish i cud.. lol
m too lazy
anyways./. abt the part
i wanna read more right away!!
i know yu are gonna put benji-sheena together.. (wait yu are right?? =P)
but m confused now..
so will be waiting for the update =)
HiNaL
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome ud
loved it
contineu soon
n thanx 4 the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
@sonal- thnx a lot dear...glad u liked it!!:D

@mehek- thnx dear:D means a lot!:D

@ght_sajan- thnx dear, glad u liked it:D

@saduf- thnx dear!:D glad u liked it:)

@marukh-i agree poor sheena... abt sumi,eh well u will see... posting the chap now:) thanx a ton dear...glad u liked it:D

@HinaL- ha even m a lazy bum when it comes to updating regularly....have a lot of free time to write these days, and as i told u, i have completed this one long back.:)
dun worry its Jia al they way...but hurdles are there in every relationship ...ryt?;) ;)
tnx for d review..means a lot:D

@cuteangel- thnx a lot dear, glad u liked it:D
Edited by VampirePrincess - 15 years ago
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Intense chap..load of angst :D
Chapter 14
FAMILY!? PITY!? Wat the hell??
RV's POV

Dia seems very happy these days..but m sure there is some prob..or sumthing tht aches her heart. only if i knew wat it is...shall i go to her n ask?is she waiting for tht? i think i should ask her if i dont this thing will eat me ..i got up from my bed to check if dia was asleep as i opened my door dia stood there..she was in her night dress but a bit disturbed
"Hey u here?"
"ya" she replied
,"oke...y were u outside" i asked
"nothing...i couldnt sleep can i sleep here?" she asked
"ya sure"
Diya entered i saw her walk in she trembled a little her face was a bit wet but it dint seem that she was crying it seemed as if she had just washed her face.As she made herself comfortable on my bed i asked her"wat happened?"
"nothing i was feeling a bit lonely thts it.." she replied
"oke can i ask u sumthin?"i got seated on the couch.she looked at me "ya ..go on"
"Is there nything thts bothering u ..nythinn u wanna share?"
Her expression turned from horror to tht of fear she looked at her hands ..i got up to approached her just when i saw tears falling in her hand.
"Hey baby ..what happened?" i enquired. She shook her head.
"Dont cry please just tell me the prob and i'll fix it" I assured her
She looked at me hopefully "you will?"
"Yes"I said hoping wateva it may b i could do it.
"Then marry me please" she said still looking at me hopefully
"What!?" I asked completely taken aback.
"Yes marry me!" she said again.
"But wat abt ur career..?wat abt my career..we hv just stepped in our success after the long run and u want to end this all?" I reasoned.
"Its not tht..i dont want to make my career anymore..and wat difference will it make to urs? u r mine for ever u promised, then married or not wat difference does it make?"
"It does and i dont want to get married now" I shot back.
"Why? u think m not the right one?" she asked with fear and doubt.
"No! No" I said loud, fearing the very thought, I couldn't live without her "its not tht! i want to make a career first i want to b stable with my life" I reasoned
"But i want a family!" she said
"A family!!? u cant think of havin a baby?" i asked in utmost shock
"why cant i?" she enquired almost in tears now.
This was all goin out of control! I couldnt imagine out of all the things..this was bothering her..
"Dia we cant...i cant marry now" I tried to explain.
"oke then dont marry me yet ..lets hv a baby" she said hopefully
"Dia wats wrong with u ?the very reason i dont wanna marry yet is family!" I said
She looked at me with tearfilled eyes"you said u'll give me watever i want"
"But this is not wat u want!having a baby is a huge responsibility!i mean baby ..just think it will end ur career ..."
"I said i dont care abt tht" she replied.
"oke give me time to think..or i wud say u think abt this tooo" I said trying to end this topic i needed time to think.
"i hv thought abt this" she said firmly.
"oke then think again...and in a more practical way" I said a bit harshly.
Dia loked at me supressed a sob and ran out of the room.
"Dia" I called but she dint turn back.
Oh god out of all the things this is wat she wants? a family!
Sheena's POV
Benji entered home.. "Hey ..not sleepy?".I looked up"No" .
"y so?" He asked
"Simply" I replied with a dead end to my tone.
"oke..shall i keep u company?" he asked
"No...m fine on my own" I replied. I was hurt beyond measure...not wanting to say any harsh words i cut out without looking up.
"Cut it out!" He said a bit harsh.
"What!?" I asked standing up.
"Why are you being so rude?" he asked
"Sorry..i dint mean to." I apologized.
"thats ok...now temme wats the prob?"
"Prob .who said nythin abt tht?"I denied
"ur actions did." he replied obviously
."huh??"
"well u r here alone in the dark n just now spoke to me harshly for no reason ...certainly theres a prob"
"there isnt one...and will u please stop interfering in each and evrything i do!" I was breathing heavily from the shouting i calmed myself.. wat was wrong with me? i neva lost control like that...
"Interfering!? for god sake i saw u all alone so i just asked! as a friend!" His expression turned cold now.
"Saw me all alone! yes u did but u knw wat i hv been like this all my life now! This is me! alone! lonely do u get tht?"
I screamed before i knew tears were flowing from my eyes but my face was held high...i wasnt goin to breakdown infront of him.His expression changed from anger to tht of hurt. I felt my heart breakdown further.."See u dont knw anything ..so just dont..dont" I turned around to leave.
"But Sheena i dont want u to b alone" I turned around at his words he was looking down at his feet. I tried to match his eyes to see what he actually meant.
"I am your friend and will remain forever"He looked up and this time i dint see hurt or anger this time i saw pity in his eyes ..pity for me!
"Sorry but i dont want ur pity"I spat the word out in anger
Edited by VampirePrincess - 15 years ago
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I turned away from him, then I started up the stairs. I dashed for the bathroom before Benji followed. I cried maybe for an hour or so..i dint knw...I held my hands to cover my ears. I dint want to remember anything not those beautiful moments spend with him in college times ..n neither his words of pity...not those awful days!
I stopped crying, I couldn't cry anymore I was too angry at everything, but mainly at myself. I slowly removed my hands looking at myself in the mirror. I didn't look that different… who was I kidding I looked sad, lonely and miserable. And I can't blame anyone, but myself.

I suddenly felt a burst of anger I couldn't control and I felt my hand ball into a fist shooting towards my reflection in the mirror. "I hate you!" I screamed as I pounded my fist into the glass not even feeling the pain just yet. It cracked making it harder for me to see myself, I liked it that way.
I dropped my hand, and then started to feel the pain shooting through it. I looked at the mirror it was missing pieces of glass and had blood on it. I slowly brought up my hand looking at it, it was still balled in a fist and had pieces of glass sticking out of it.
I looked at it with horror, what did I just do? I have officially lost it.. I covered my mouth with my other hand as I let out a small frightened shriek. My hand was throbbing my head felt dizzy and now I had a mess I couldn't clean up. And I wasn't talking about the mirror, I was talking about myself and my heart. And how out of everything hurting me right now it was my heart that hurt the most, the one I couldn't fix.

"Dia?is tht u? look baby m sorry i dint mean to be so harsh!" I heard RV's voice come through the door and I immediately backed further into the bathroom. I clamped my hand over my mouth again, well the one that wasn't still all bloody with glass shards sticking in it.
What was he talking abt? dint mean to b harsh?
It was quiet and then I heard him call louder, "Samrat Uday! come here I think Dia or Gunjan were in the bathroom and something happened!" I listened as I heard Samrat's door swing open immediately and then he came to the door, Gunjan?Dia? Who's in there and are you okay?"

I remained silent and I then heard Uday sigh, "I'm going to check their rooms." I heard him then move away from the door and after a while he came back, "It's Sheena I heard Nupur and Gunjan inside theirs, but Sheena's was empty… what do you think…"

he was cut off by another voice, "Guys what the hell is going on out here?" It was Dia.
"thank god u r fine..,m sorry for wat i said" RV was apologising.
"we will talk abt tht later" Dia cut him off giving the cold shoulder.
I heard more voices n fear gripped me
Gosh i just hope Benji doesnt come here.I had to clean this somehow..i quickly got up and took some cotton to wipe the blood on the basin..my hand ached even more but i ignored it ...I looked at the mirror to clean my face but dang it ..i had broken it!
I turned to hear wat was goin on outside.
"We should break the door open...coz she wont" RV was suggesting.
"Wait maybe Benji knws abt this ....I'll call him" I heard Samrat's footsteps retreating,.
Oh no! out of all the people not Benji please!
"We should break the door...what if she has fainted or something?" Uday suggested.
"you are right"RV agreed.
I moved back like any other coward and sat down where i was previously, waiting for them to open the door...just because i dint hv the guts to face them.I hid my hand behind my back.
After a While the door banged open and Benji entered to my surprise...I looked at him to find utter horror in his eyes ..he looked at the broken mirror and the cotton covered in blood ...he looked at me bewildered.
"Are you ok?" I turned my head.
"Are you hurt?"he asked again..i looked at him and fresh tears fell down my cheeks.
Benji approached"shh dont cry...should i carry u to ur room?" I nodded and hid my face in his shirt not wanting to see anyone.
Benji carried me all the way to my room.he muttered to others abt taking care of me and tht he will take care of evrything.
As if i was goin to let him A snide voice in my head spoke.
Chapter 13 Ends

So guys liked it? things didnt turn out as gud as they seemed to be in the prev chap, ryt?
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Next chap- These "feelings" we have
Precap- nthing much just a sweet scene...😳
"Oke guys m going for a walk,will cya later."Sheena said.
"hey sheena wait!"samrat called.."i'll join u too...ma tummy has increased a lot" Samat turned to others evryone was laughin gunjan too, he caught her eye and winked at her..he noticed her goin red which sent a rush of adreline through him..she looked beautiful blushing like tht.

thanks for ur awesome reviews!!:D
lots of luv
ZeeJay!
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesomeeeee updt dear..
luved it..
n d precap... 😳
pllzzzzz do cont soon..

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