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Posted: 15 years ago
@mehek- thnx dear, glad u liked it😃

@vital- lolzz well i figured, lets make it a surprise for u guys as well!:D

@marukh- hmm yup, lets hope....BB Match well they didnt continue....coz gunji was hurt...the truth is tht i couldnt decide sammy or benji😛no precap...coz thought of giving u guys a surprise:D

@cuteangel- thnx dear😊 glad u liked it :D

@HinaL- doesnt matter...u can always take ur time to read...:) and i agree..boys are very aggressive...as to ur guess..m posting the chap now..:D:D

@ardhana- firstly yay! i got a new reader:D:D thanks a lot dear...glad u liked the ff :D:D

n yup guys updating now:D
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Posted: 15 years ago
Chapter 13(i mixed up the numbering sumwhere..but well this is chap 13)
A not- so pleasant surprise

Benji goes to check up on the door.
B- Hey! u here?
"thought of giving u a SURPRISE!" she yelled in glee.
Samrat- surprise? whose it?
Uday bends to check whose at the door
"its some girl"
Samrat -who?"
Uday-i dont know, hey hes hugging her ...and.....wierd
CJ-wat?
Uday- "they r bumping shoulders i mean in a guy way u knw....
Gunjan-ohh it must b sumi!!
Nupur-sumi
Gunjan- ya my frnd n benji's ....
Sheena- ohh erm ya.
Samrat- come lets greet her
Sheena- y she can join us here
Mayank- ya….
Benji n sumi join them.
Benji-hey guys this is sumi...ermm i told u all
Samrat-ya
Sumi had long hair, she wore cute pink top with blue denim skirt n a small handbag. Her face was plain n pretty.
she had two dimples on her cheeks.Happiness seem to radiate from her,she smiled broadly at all of them though amidst all this her nervousness was clear
Sumi- Hello guys..hi gunjan
Gunjan-hii how r u
Samrat-m f9 wat abt u?
Gunjan- m gud
Samrat- fragile at the moment..
Uday-.broken actually.
Gunjan-hey!nothoing like tht
Sumi- wat happened?
Gunjan-its nothing
Sheena looked at sumi carefully she was very plain sweet n simple her exact opposite perhaps in nature too?
Nupur-hii
Sumi- well let me guess u r nupur?
Nupur- ya... m sure u knw abt all of us?
Sumi- ya well lets c ..
It was clear she was opening up,,,,very friendly too
"naughty eyes.. cool dude..benji's best friend samrat?"
Samrat-ya thts right
"muscular, u must b Uday!"
"yup!"
"And well sheena! very famous u knw at first i dint believe him..but then saw u guys pics n i was like WOW!"
All of them smiled.
Benji- ok sumi this is
Sumi- nono lemme guess.
"if m not wrong the diva of the college dia n the famous hunk or basketball player of college RV!?"
Dia-ya thts right
'"and mayank n nupur the lovely couple n still are!?"
Mayank n nupur looked at each other smiled n nodded.
Sumi- ermm u are?
Sumi asked looking at CJ
Benji laughed "there!!!! pics are not enough to knw a person"
Sumi- ok then
CJ- m CJ
Sumi - wat!?really!
Cj nodded she felt quite wierd talking to a person whom she dint knw n even worse tht the person knew evrything!
Sumi- god u hv changed
B-ok all this later hv a seat first
They all sat together n discussed abt each other.
After dinner
Gunjan- Sumi where r u staying?
Mayank- here with benji?
Sumi-actually no...ma aunt stays here too...so m gonna stay at her place
Nupur- but y dont u join us..i mean we all can make place for u...u can shift here.
Sumi -uh thnks but i guess its better if i stay at ma aunts place
Uday-but
Sheena- its ok if she wants to stay at her aunts place guys..dont force her...and nyways u r gonna spend the day with us na?
Sumi- no actually i just came to meet u all..n thought of giving benji a surprise...thts it
Samrat- No no thts not working ...you are gonna spend this entire month with us
Sumi-month! no no u frnds must enjoy urself
Samrat-nope
Sumi- u all are very sweet.
Uday- tht we know
Sumi- ok i better leave now ..ma aunt would b worried too
Benji-ok i'll drop u
Sumi-no its ok i'll take a taxi
B- are u kidding me? no ways m gonna drop u..
Sumi-really n how? tumhare pass car hai?
Sheena -Benji here
she threw the keys for benji to catch
He caught it "thnx...to chale"
Sumi smiled "sure"
Sheena's smile turned into a sad one which went unnoticed by the rest of the gang
Sumi is indeed the perfect girl for Benji....Bubbly,funny,good humour,sweet,beautiful n very friendly and they both love each other ....a perfect made for each other couple..m simply interfering in all this, i better stay away
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Posted: 15 years ago
Benji and Sumi
Benji was driving
Sumi- so did u like the surprise?
Benji- I loved it...m so glad u r here!
Sumi- me too...woh khadus boss hai na leave hi nahin de raha tha ..itna patana pada tab jaake to do hafte ki leave mili
Benji- hmm woh maine bhi ek mahine ki leave li hai na shayad isliye
Sumi- ya tumhe radio station main sab bohut yaad karte hain..kehte hain ki RJ station ki ronak kam ho gaye hai tumhare jaane ke baad.
B- woh to hai ...par u knw i feel i hv attained heaven here ...among frnds it feels so gud.
Sumi smiled she was very happy to see benji glowing in happiness..never had she seen him this happy.
Sumi- U r very happy n tht makes me happy too..by the way ur frnds r very sweet.
Benji- yup
Sumi- n it was very sweet of them to invite me too.
B-yesss..n you are coming
Sumi-but
Benji-no buts
Sumi-lekin Benji woh tumhare dost hain tum apne doston ke saath yahan enjoy karne aaye ho mere saath to baad main bhi time spend kar sakte ho...
Benji-baat yeh nahin hai..main chahta hoon ki tum mere doston ko jaano aur woh tumhe...jaise woh mere dost hain waise tum bhi ..to phir donon saath kyun nahin ho sakte..?
Sumi- hmm baat to sahi hai..,.chalo tum chahte ho to main bhi tumhare saath aajaongey..
Benji- thts gud...day after we are all going to sheena's uncle's farmhouse u join us der too
Sumi- ok..ermm Sheena was ur girlfriend na?
Benji- ermm ya
Sumi-u never told me how u two broke up..
Benji-its not important to knw either, is it?
Sumi- ya but..i felt she still loves u
Benji- but… wat!?
Sumi-nothing she dint talk much
Benji- ohh thts coz u knw now she is a star so shes got a rep to handle….haha kidding shes not tht friendly actually
Sumi-oke and even CJ
Benji- same shes not tht friendly either
Sumi-hmmm
Benji- There..this is ur aunts place na
Sumi-yup
Sumi exits the car
Benji- ok bye
Sumi-bye n luv u
Benji-luv u too
Chapter ENDS

Is evrything as fine as it seems? is Jia over before it could even start? AND MANY OTHER QUESTIONS!!😃

next one is chap 14 and the title is FAMILY!? PITY!? Wat the hell??
Precap-
"nothing i was feeling a bit lonely thts it.." she replied
"oke can i ask u sumthin?"i got seated on the sofa.she looked at me "ya ..go on"
"Is there nything thts bothering u ..nythinn u wanna share?"
Her expression turned from horror to tht of fear she looked at her hands ..i got up to approached her just when i saw tears falling in her hand.
"Hey baby ..what happened?" i enquired. She shook her head.
"Dont cry please just tell me the prob and i'll fix it" I assured her
She looked at me hopefully "you will?"
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It was quiet and then I heard him call louder, "Samrat Uday! come here I think Dia or Gunjan were in the bathroom and something happened!" I listened as I heard Samrat's door swing open immediately and then he came to the door, Gunjan?Dia? Who's in there and are you okay?"

So next chap...tomorrow morning!!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
its awesome zeejay

loved the benji sumi talk

haey the nxt part seems more intresting

cant wait to read iit

thanks for the pm

im first!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

love pebbzzyy


Edited by ..pebo.. - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesomeeeee updt
luved it...
do cont soon..
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey ,
awesome chapter
you know wat jia is better then benji and sumi
try making tat angle work
anyways update soon
u rock
ps:thanks 4 the pm
with love,
ardhana
Edited by ardhana - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

as usual fantastic mindblowing update ..

what happened to gunji and dia hope not anything serious...

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Posted: 15 years ago
@pebo- thnx a ton, yes a lot is gonna happen in the next chap....:) will post tomorrow morning:)

@jyotika- thnx dear:) glad u liked it:D

@ardhana- actually i wrote this ff last yr..only posting it now, here in I-F...and dont worry as the summary says its Jia all the way:D....but things are not gonna be easy....there's a lot of mess to be cleared:) thanks for the review..am glad u liked it:DBR]
@aarthi- thnx dear😃 actually it is quite serious, but ah well better if u find out urself abt it tomorrow morning wen i post the chap, or else i will give out the contents:P

m overwhelmed guys! thnx a ton:D

Edited by VampirePrincess - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
ITS AWESOME THANKS FOR PM
AnotherAdmirer thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: LOVEBARBIE

<font color="#000000">ITS AWESOME THANKS FOR PM</font>



thnx dear 😳

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