Kaisa ye Pyar hai - part 16 page 60 16/05/2010 - Page 7

Part 6

I hope you would have enjoyed the journey till now

This update will be more of Gunjan ,Sammy , Suhani

As you all know ki Mayank ke bare me nupur bahut kuch janane lagi hai par ab mayank has to know lil abt nupur also

If you feel I am not doing any justification please shout or PM

I will try to write accordingly

Now aage

After the rain they are at home

Nupur in her room : kabhi kabhi aisa lagta hai ki main hi hamesha akeli kyon hoti hu jise chaha wo chutate gaya

Pahle maa papa ,phir purab

Par ab aisa lag raha hai ki maa papa ke jane ke bad bhaiyya main aur benji ek dusare ke kitne karib aa gaye hai

Aur jab Purab ne is shadi se inkar kiya tab hi jakar mayank meri zindagi me aaye ,aur jo maine unke liye aaj feel kiya vaisa to maine Purab ke liye kabhi feel hi nahi kiya

Infact purab ke sath main jitney bhi samay thi mujhe ye mahsus hota tha ki samay kitne dheere dheere ja raha hai par mayank ke sath to subah se sham kaise hoti hai pata hi nahi chalta hai ,matlab main bhi unhe and she bluhes

She holds her hands together and bhagwan ko thanks kahti hai

At mayank's home

Mayank tum jante bhi ho ki nupur kya soch rahi hogi.aaj jo bhi hua.

Par mujhe nahi lagta ki wo kuch sochegi ,maine uske sath kuch galat to nahi kiya aur moreover main apni feelings use bata chukka hu aur janana sirf itna hai ki wo kya sochati hai

As the time goes MAYUR are becoming close friends and more than that ( I know they are engaged , and mayank has told his feelings to Nupur but remember nupur ne kuch nahi kaha)

This is the exam time in nupur's college

So she took a week off from office forcefully –She did not want to take but mayank made her to take as she will not study in office.

It is the first time happening when mayank is not with nupur in office and nupur has her exam

He wishes her best of luck almost for all exams and then goes to office

Mayank in the office – Oh aaj samay kat hi nai raha hai ,nupur sath hoti hai to lagta hai ki jaise time ko par lag gaye ho aur itni speed se nikal jata hai par aaj to jaise ghadi ne chalana hi band kar diya hai ,pata nahi next 3 days kaise jayenge

Idea kyon na aaj main suhani ,nupur aur gunjan ko lunch par lekar jau

Isi bahane nupur se bhi mil lunga. And he smiles

It is 12 and nupur will finish her paper in another hour .

Suhani finishes the paper soon but she feels some how drowsy she leaves to home and tells nupur that she is going

N : thik hai

After the exam

M left from the office but will be bit late to reach there so he calls N

M to N : nupur tum college me hi ho na?

N : haan par aapne abhi kaise call kiya

M : aur exam kaisa raha by the way kya main tumhe call nahi kar sakta?

N : maine aisa to nahi kaha, aur exam achha tha ,maine to aapse kaha tha ki main exam aur office handle kar lungi

M : par main nahi chahta ki tum stress lo ,thik hai main thodi der me college pahunch raha hu ,soch raha tha ki lunch sath me kar lenge

N : thik hai main gunjan ko dekhati hu ,suhani ko thodi tabiyat thik nahi lag rahi thi to usane kaha ki wo ja rahi hai

M : kya hua hai use ?

N : are aap jante hai use kal soyi nahi hogi bus aur kuch nahi.

M : tumhe kaise pata chal jata hai ki main tumase kya kahne wala hu?

N : Ab main aapko itna to janti hu ,chaliye phir abhi phone rakhati hu

M : chalo bye and L…… but he stops

N : blushes and says bye

In the college

N is searching G

But someone says that G has gone to the back side of College

N : wo piche kya kar rahi hai ?

G : are mujhe diya ne yaha bulaya aur khud kaha chali gayibut she is surprised to see RV there

G : tum yaha ?

RV : to tum yaha kise expect kar rahi ho

G : kam se kam tumhe to nahi

RV : par diya yaha nahi aayegi,wo to maine hi tumhe yaha bulaya tha,aur dekh lo yaha koi tumhari madad ke liye nahi aayega

He goes close to Gunjan par wo is RV se darati to nahi hi hai

G : haan aisi giri harkate tumase hi expect kar sakte hai

RV : tumhare bhai ne mujhase nupur ko chinkar achha nahi kiya aur use ye ab pata chalega ki dard kya hota hai?

G : bhaiyya ne bhabhi ko tumase china hi nahi hai aur Bhabhi tumase nafrat karti hia infact bhabhi hi kyon is college ki sab ladkiya tumase nafrat hi karti hai bus us ina meena sheena ke alawa

RV is in anger and he goes near to gunjan she pushes him par hard luck

RV goes close to her she tries to slap him but he holds her and slaps Gunji

Blood is coming out of her lips and now she feels bit scared

Then he moves close to her and he tares her sleeve

Just then nupur comes from back

And RV turns

A very tight slap on RV's face definitely Nupur ne gift kiya hai

She is damn angry

N : to tumhe dang se samjhane se samjh nahi aata hai RV maine kaha dur raho mere parivar se

By now gunjan comes and hugs nupur

Suddenly RV takes the knife out and tries to attack on nupur

Suddenly she turns and the knife hurts her hand

But someone is there who gives nicely punches to RV and RV ran from there

But who is he

Oh he is not Mayank

Not even Benji

Adhiraj – how will he come

Uday - no waysssssss

Purab – uska koi kam hi nahi hai yaha ??????

Then yes my dear he is the one the handsome hunk ,dashing and cool dude "Samrat "

Nupur looks at him and thanks for the help

When he looks at gunjan ,she is actually feeling shy to come in front and he understands and gives his jacket to nupur aur nupur use gunjan ko cover karti hai

By now our Mayu is in college premises and he calls nupur again

All of them come to Parking lot and Mayank is watching them and surprised

Gunjan is crying and holding tightly to nupur

What is that blood is on nupur's hand still she is caressing Gunjan ,not feeling pain or not thinking of herself

He runs towards them and after looking him Gunaj hugs him and cries badly

Nupur explains him everything and mayank is about to go and kill RV just then

Samrat tell him – No use Mayank bhaiyya he ran off

Mayank tries to console Gunjan but she is not ready to leave him

S : Gunjan dekho hum sab tumhare sath hai wo RV bhag chukka hai par she still does not leave Mayank

M : looks at gunjan's face and blood and after looking her scary face uska blood boil hone lagta hai

(par aap sab soch rahe honge ki Samrat college ke piche kya kar raha tha –actually me Diya is also having exams and during this time samrat drops her and picks ,so he was waitning for her ,and RV was aware that Diya will be going from back side so he took advantage of the situation and hence Gunjan also did not think ki it will be his plan)

M calls N : tumhare hath par to bahut chot lagi hai Nupur

N : nahi mujhe kuch nahi hua hai aur abhi aapki jarurat G ko jyada hai main thik hu

As Gunjan is not leaving M . S tells ki better we will go to Hospital N and G both needs the treatment now only

By then B and D also came –and D took keys from Samrat and said Bhai aap hospital jao main bhi Benji ke sath aa rahi hu

They took the keys and went

Samrat was driving M's car and Gunjan ,M and N at the back

Samrat ( I will kill that RV how dare he touch to gunjan)

N ( Thankk God samrat came ontime)

M ( aaj agar nupur aur samrat nahi hote to pata nahi kya hota)

After coming out from hospital

Samrat : Gunjan dekho tumhe tension lene ki koi jarurat nahi hai ,sab hai tumhare sath aura b us RV ka kuch na kuch intjam to karma hi padega

G : hardly able to speak still Thanks Samrat aaj agar tum nahi aate to Wo RV and again scare is on her face

Samrat : to koi aura a jata tha aur gunjan ache logo ke sath achha hi hota hai

So B D and S left now M N and G

N : main yaha se taxi laker chali jati hu

M : nupur main tumhe drop kar dunga ,taxi lene ki koi jarurat nahi hai

G : haan bhabhi aap hamare sath chalo

Now M is driving and G is ok

She is sitting with nupur

M : kya traffic hai aaj? Pata nahi kitni der aur lagegi

N : han kuch jyada hi traffic hai

Gunjan slept holding nupur ,as she cried a lot

At home

After looking SS G went and cried again

SS was too tensed she has not seen her till now crying like this

M told all to SS ,by then Suhani also came to hall and when she saw gunjan she was all red in Anger ( suhanj will bare anything which happens to her but for gunjan she is very protective,she can not see a single drop of tear )

Suhani takes G to her room and makes her to get freshen up

And she is about to leave the room but G holds her hand and ask her to be with her

Suhani tells her that she will be with her and SS also comes there but she does not want to discuss anything so that gunjan should feel ok

They discuss few thing and G feels relaxed

Parallel M went to drop N

On the way

M : thanks nupur aaj tumane hamari zindagi ki khushiya hi jaise wapas la di hai

N : ab aap mujhe thanks bhi kahenge kya?main gunjan ki kuch nahi lagti ?

Aur vaise bhi Gunjan mere liye choti bahan jaise hai aapko shayad yad hoga ki wo meri nanad se pahle suhani (meri best friend ki sister hai) ,ye rishta to bad me aaya hai par main to ye sab insaniyat ke liye bhi karti.

Mayank was listening all this n kept quite

He got to know the caring nupur who can do anything if it comes to her family or friends.

M: par nupur tumhe bhi to tu chot lag sakti thi mera matlab hai ki tumhari jan ko bhi khatara ho sakta than a

N : Mayank hum jinse pyar karte hai unke liye jan ki parwah karte hai kya?

Nahi na phir aapne aisa kaise socha ki main gunjan ko khatare me dekhkar waha se aise hi chali jati

M : Tum bahut achhi ho nupur and I am really lucky ki tum meri life partner banogi

N was happy to hear and they saw that home has come

She gets down and goes and M is looking her and wants her to turn back

( main janta hu nupur ki tum bhi mujhe pasand karti ho par shayad ab main us paand ko pyar me badalate dekhana chahta hu he wants her to turn and keeps on staring her

and at last b4 entering to the home nupur turns and smiles ,and wave her hand)

Mayank also gives a 1000W smile with cute dimples

At mayank's home

G slept with suhani and she holded her very tightly .

S in thoughts ( I will show this RV ki suhani ki bahan se lagne ka kya matlab hai)

By the time M came suhani and gunjan slept

SS to M : mayu ye thik nahi hua,G bahut dar gayi hai

M : haan maa man to kar raha hai ki us RV ka khun kar du with anger

SS : nahi beta aisa koi kadam mat uthana ,aaj to N aur Samrat ne sab sambhal liya par mujhe bahut fikr ho rahi hai

M : maa main bhi wahi soch raha hu,par tum tension mat lo main hu na sab thik ho jayega

SS : main tere liye khana laga deti hu

M : maa man nahi kar raha hai ,Gunji aur suhani ne kha liya?

SS : suhani ne bahut mushkil se G ko khilyaha hai, mujhe to bahut mana kar rahi thi par Suhani ke kahne par thoda bahut khaya usane

M : thik hai maa Suhani kabhi bhi galat bat ke liye force nahi karti hai na aur Angel ko ye pata hai isliye usane mana nahi kiya hoga

They both go to there bedroom

M goes to his room gets freshen up and goes to Suhani's room

And caressing Gunjan and he does not know when he fall asleep

So now M ,G and S are sleeping and in the morning when suhani is awake

Gunjan has not change her position but is sleeping properly

M and S are awake

M : tum jakar exam ke liye ready ho jao aaj G ka paper nahi hai to main tumhe college drop karke office chala jaunga

S : bhai Gunjan bahut dar gayi hai

M : tension mat lo main D aur B ko yaha bula leta hu unki comp se ise achha lagega

Then M calls B and D

M and S are leaving for college

On the way S is thinking (aaj is RV ko din me tare nahi dikhaye to mera name Suhani Sharma nahi )

Aur college me N and S going towards the exam room

M did not meet to N and left ,as he does not want to feel again lonely when she leaves him

In the college

Suhani finishes her exam and has a plan ki RV ko kaise lesson de

She is topper in the college and good heart girl so entire college respects infect obeys her

Apart from sheena type girls

So she has got a majority of the girls and plan against RV

RV got a letter

" Dear plz meet me back of the college –Urs only"

RV comes there and Suhani's back is shown

RV : hey sweety who are you and I know ki hamara charm kisi bhi ladki ko hamare bus me kar sakta hai

Suhani : haan RV wo to tumane sach kaha par mujhe nahi lagta ki mujh par tumhara koi charm kam kar paya

RV : hey babes ab tak nahi chala to ab chalega

He moves closer to her and she says u better stop where you are

RV does not stop and comes very close

Isase pahle ki wo kuch kare suhani ka ek ishara aur college ki jitni bhi girls hai apne hath me chappal (there sandal ) lekar RV ki dhunai karti hai

Aur iske bad uske munh ko kala karke Use gadhe par bitha deti hai

No one in home knows even N is not aware otherwise Suhani ko wo aisa karne nahi deti

S came back to home and did not tell anything to anyone

M in office

M Calls nupur

M : hi nupur kaisi ho aur ab hath ka dard kaisa hai?

N : (mujhe to laga tha ki aaj phone hi nahi aayega) Hi mayank mujhe to laga ki aap mujhe bhul hi gaye (suddenly she remembers ki kya kah rahi hu main) ,ab dard nahi hai aur exam bhi achha hi hua

M : vaise tumhe aisa kyon laga ki main tumhe bhul gaya hu?

N : aise hi main to majak kar rahi thi ,no other answer she got

M : aisa kabhi nahi hoga nupur aur haan ab office kab se join karma hai mere khayal se tumhare exam to ho gaye hai na ???

N : maine to pahle bhi kaha tha ki mujhe to office se koi problem nahi hai par aapne hi force kiya tha.

Main kal se aa jaungi.,thik hai na

M : haan bilkul thik hai aur vaise bhi tumhara office hai jabman kare aa jana.

N : thik hai chaliye main phone rakhati hu Bhaiyya bula rahe hai

M: Nupur ……( no mood but what to do) achha thik hai main tumase bad me bat karta hu

N : chaliye bye

(Plz logic mat lagana mujhe story aage badani hai bahut drag kar chuki hu nupur aur Suhani ke PG exam khatam )

At Shergil's home

Samrat is thinking to call or not to call

Suddenly he thinks kya loveguru tu kabse ladkiyo ko call karne se darne laga?

Par yaar wo bhabhi ki bahan hai aur kal itna dar gayi thi ki mujhe ab tak uska scary face dikh raha hai

Par mere phone se wo naraj na ho jaye

S dials the number

G : hello (in low tone)

S : no reply

G : again hello (bit high )

S : no reply

G : now loudly ,kan me cotton dal rakha hai kya ?jab bat nahi karni hai to phone kyon karte hai log pata nahi.kaise pagal log hai is duniya me

S : ( ab thik hai ) Hi Gunjan main samrat

G : receiver hi chut gaya ,hey bhagwan tu bhi na gunjan kisi ko bhi kuch bhi kah deti hai

Sorry samrat wo mujhe laga koi badatmiji kar raha hai

S : are sorry ki koi jarurat nahi hai .tumane bilkul sahi kiya ,infect main to D ko bhi yahi kahta hu ki use aisa hi hona chahiye

G is happy to hear ki uske ideas koi to manata hai

S does not want to talk with her for y'day thing so he speaks random things

They spoke around 20 mins and G is laughing very loudly

S ,SS and M are looking at her and all are happy ki wo hans to rahi hai

S to G: kiska phone hai ,

G : are Di samrat ka phone hai

S : ek min dena jara

S to S : hi Samrat Suhani bol rahi hu aur meri bahan ke sath kya bate chal rahi hai

Sam shocked : bhabhi kya bate karunga actually kal ki bat ke bad G bahut udas thi to maine bus aise hi PJ sunaye wur wo hasne lagi

Suhani : Thanks Samrat meri bahan ki madad karne ke liye

Sam : Bhabhi aap mujhe sharminda kar rahi hai ,agar Diya hoti to kya main uski madad nahi karta

Su : to G aur D tumhare liye ek jaise hai ,bahan (teasing mode) ????

Sam : nahi bhabhi aap kya kah rahi hai maine aisa to nahi kaha tha

Su : tumane hi to kaha tha ki G and D ek jaisi hai

M to SS and G ( dekho maa Suhani bhi kam nahi hai use mauka mila to Samrat ki band baj gayi aaj)

Chaliye hum chalet hai Bhukh lag rahi hai

Sam : bhabhi ab dono ladkiya hai na aur main to humanity ( insaniyat ) ki bat kar raha tha

S : oh mujhe laga ki kuch aur bat kar rahe the,koi bat nahi hai Samrat chalo maa bula rahi hai main tumhe bad me phone lagati hu.

In the night

Adhiraj called Suhani : Suhani mujhe Sam se pata chala ki kal G ke sath

S : haan wo RV hai hi bahut bura

A : sorry main shahar me hi nahi tha

S : aap tension mat lijiye sab samajhate hai

A : ab ghar me sab kaise hai ?

S : sab thik hai aur Aaj samrat ke phone ke bad gunjan bhi pahle jaise chahak rahi hai 1-2 din me sab thik ho jayenge

A : maine tumhe ek kam se phone kiya tha

S : haan kahiye na

A : agar main tumhe 1-2 hr ke liye bahar lekar jana chahu to tum chalogi kya ?

S : Adhiraj main actually me

A : no hesitation tum na kah sakti ho?

(G is very naughty she got to know ki S and A are on phone she picked up the parallel phone)

S : nahi aisi koi bat nahi hai par G abhi bahi sambhli hai aur main chahti hu ki wo puri tarah thik ho jaye

G thinking (ye nahi sudharegi main to thik hu phir bhi)

A : thik hai Suhani main tumhe force nahi karuna jab tumhara man kare hum tab sath me challenge

G : Are jiju ruko

S & A : surprised Gunjan tum ?????

G : haan main

S : G ye buri bat hai bado ki bat aise suntan hai kya koi?

G : Di aap log kitne boring ho ek to jiju bechare kitne pyar se aapko Date par le jana chahte hai aur ek aap ho ki unki ummeedo par pata nahi kitna pani dal rahi ho?

By then S drops the call and G is not aware

S takes SS and goes to G's room

G : dekhiye jiju maine kaha tha na ki meri Di aur Mayank bhaiyya bahut bore hai ye dono romance ka R bhi nahi jante hai ab to aap fans gaye ho,

And she was going on and A was listening (actually A already spoke many times with G so he is aware with her nature and he to loves her same as Diya ,so he does not interrupt)

SS : gunjan kya hai ye?

G : Jiju bad me bat karti hu bye

Bit scared and thodi si smile : kya hai maa?

Aapka beta aur beti kitne bore hai aapko pata hai M over hears it

M : kya kaha tune?

G : kyon aapne suna nahi kya?aap to abhi tak bhabhi ko Date par lekar nahi gaye hai aur ek ye hai bechare jiju puchkar thak gaye hai aur ye to jaise ghar se nikalane ke name hi nahi leti hai

SS : vaise Gunjan tu sahi kah rahi hai M aur S sach me boring hi hai

G : now showing finger to S dekha Di aur Bhai main aur maa ekdum sahi hai

Aur haan kal aap dono date par ja rahe hai Aap bhabhi ke sath aur Di tum Jiju ke sath

And she calls A : haan gunjan bolo

G : Are jiju kal ki meeting cancel aap kal Di ko date par lekar ja rahe ho full and final now bye.

S : G kya kar rahi hai

G: main kar chuki hu ,ab bhabhi ki bari hai

M holds her hand and : gunjan beta tu aisa kuch nahi karegi

G: kyon nahi karungi main karungi

M: mujhe nupur ko date par laker jane ki kya jarurat hai hum to daily office me hi milte hai na?

G : to aap office me kam nahi karte ho?

M : karta hu na ,par bate hoti to hai na angel

G : mujhe jyada maska mat lagaiye , aap khud call karoge ya main dial karu

M ( no way mayank ab ye log nahi manenge ) : thik hai main kal jaunga nupur ke sath

G : bhai maine kaha Kal aap Date par ja rahe ho

M : haan baba date par ,aur main khud hi use call kar lunga

Ab thik hai na ?

G : haan thik hai bhai and hugs

( Gunjan – you will not find her sitting alone,if she is sitting with M,S or SS ,she will always hang on them or hug them)

All went to sleep

SAJAN will be close or there will not be anything?

Nupur has to face purab again ,what will be her reaction ?

CJ was there in mayank's life but what was she ?was she mayank's friend or something else?

Adhani ki date par kya hoga?

So stayed tune with me on "Kaisa ye pyar hai "

I will not update if I do not see comments J ,so plz criticize as much as u can

Do not worry ye dhamki nahi chetavani hai ,jitni speed se comments aayenge utni speed se next part bhi update hoga

So till then Sayonara ………………………

great update dear..i will kill that rv 4 sure...mayur r such a sweetheart....loved the update,...and pls wanaa see some great mayur scenes...its juz a request...hope u will fulfill my wish/...

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

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Originally posted by: achoose

great update dear..i will kill that rv 4 sure...mayur r such a sweetheart....loved the update,...and pls wanaa see some great mayur scenes...its juz a request...hope u will fulfill my wish/...