Kaisa ye Pyar hai - part 16 page 60 16/05/2010

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Here is the new FF

I will write both in English and hindi but mostly in Hindi As it is my comfort language but do not worry i will try to make it understandable

Basically it is a MAYUR ff but Each of the character is imprtant here.

So here the Character sketch

We have three families First i will go with Sharma Family

Mayank Sharma :Age 24

He is very handsome hunk ,intelligent,Dashing ,Down to earth and very responsible,He is into construction field.In his life his mother is his Adarsh.He loves hi sister Gunjan and Suhani and very protective and possessive about them.Once upon a time he was very outspoken but due to his responsibility he became silent ,He respects women a lot as he has 3 women his life.

Gunjan Sharma : Age 21

She is the youngest of Sharma family.She loves her brother more than any one.She is princess in the Sharma mansion.She is very outgoing ,chirpy and fun loving but will not go against her brother.Still she likes to have her food with Mayank and in the same plate. She is very possessive for Suhani too.She will fight for her if someone calls her that suhani is not there own sister.She is in the same college Excel and class mate and friend of Diya and benji.

Suhani Sharma :Age 22

suhani

She is elder than Gunjan but younger then Mayank.she is mature and shy girl. even if she is hurted she will not anyone realize abt it.But she can not lie and hide anything from Mayank.She is not there own sister.She is one of his father's friend's daughter,her parents expired when she was just 4.She knows the truth but she also knows that mayank does not like her telling that she is not own sister.She is more possessive abt mayank and will fight for him with anyone. She is a very good friend of Nupur they share a good friendship and very close to each other

Shilpa Shrama

She is the Mayank,Suhani and gunjan mother.Very understanding and loves her kids a lot. She knows in and out abput them,she helps then to take there decision.She is working as a CEO.

Now switch over to Bhushan family

Uday Bhushan : age 25

dodo

He is business tycoon.He is the eldest in Bhushan family.He is handling the empire alone.

He is very responsible and loves his family a lot.He loves and admires his sister.When there parents expired from then she is handling the family.

Nupur Bhushan : age 22

She is the younger in bhushan family.She is shy and down to earth.she loves decorating home basically interior designer.she is very traditional.loves the family a lot and can do anything for the family.She is a very good friend of Suhani they share a good friendship and very close to each other

Benji Bhushan : Age 21

benji Youngest in Bhushan's family.He is not exactly flirt but likes to prank with gilrs.He loves his sis nupur and obey's her like mom.she is the one who brought him when parents expired. He is Diya and gunjan's class mate in excel.and 3 of them are good friends.

Next family is Shergil's family

Adhiraj Shergil : age 25

He is eldest in shergil's.He is a CA working in a very good firm.He is also self made person and likes ppl those who are simple and honest.he loves his princess (his sister).He is like the family head in the shergil family.

Samrat Shergil : age 23

He is the charming,handsome and fun loving guy not like adhiraj always serious.But he too loves his brother and can do anything for him.He is a lazy bug and always like to sleep.He loves his sister a lot and always obeys her whatever she says.he is younger than adhiraj but elder than his sis

He is an engineer and wants to go to abroad for further studies.

Diya Shergil : age 21

She is princess in shergil family.no one scolds here infact no one dares to do that.she is very good heart always helps others and very down to earth.she cares a lot for her family and loves her bros company.she is very good friend of Gunjan and benji.they are class mate in excel.

Purab Malhotra :Age 24

He is very good guy and friend of Uday.He likes nupur a lot later he turns a bad character.

RV :He is a evil person.Classmate of nupur and suhani and back of nupur like anything,

Sheena :She is also evil character and back of Mayank.
Actually i do not have concept still in mind but plz ahead and write ur comments. if you all think that i can start then please comment on the CS.
CS - page 1
Part 1 - Page 2
Part 2 -- page 2
Part 3 - page 3
Part 4 - page 5
Part 5 - page 5
Part 6 - page 9
Part 7 - page 12
part 8 - page 17
part 9 - page 25
Special note on page 19
Part 10 - Page 31
part 11 - page 38
Part 12 - page 41
promo - page 45
Part 13 - page 46
Part 14 - page 52
update : page 51
part 15 - page 55
part 16 - page 60 (last part)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome yaar.kiski der kar rehi ho.ho jao shuru.i m waiting.
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great CS ....do cont soon
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very nice...do continue soon...plzz pm...!!
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hey nice character sketch.
continue soon
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interesting cs dear..pls continue soon..desperately waiting 4 it...
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Thanks for ur comments

Here it goes

Guys : smarat,Gunjan aur benji sone me expert hai isliye her din unke ghar me subah subah melo drama hota hai ye log sidhe tarike se mante hi nahi hai

Shergil Mansion

It is morning and Adhiraj is getting ready to go to office

Diya woke up and prepares breakfast for her brother

They have servant there home but Diya likes to have morning breakfast with her brothers.

Samrat is still sleeping as it is his fav work.

Adhiraj : Diya Samrat kaha hai,abhi tak utha nahi hai

Diya : nahi bhai main gayi thi par wo uth hi nahi raha hai,

Adhiraj : to use main hi uthata hu wo aise nahi manega

He takes a coffee mug and goes to his room

Adhiraj : Samrat samrat......

Samrat is still not awake

Adhiraj : ye aise nahi manega,suddenly he starts smiling

Diya : kya hua bhaiya ??????

Adhiraj : ab dekho ye kaise nahi uthata

Adhiraj samrat ke thumb ko coffee mug me dal deta hai aur samrat chillakar uthata hai

Bhaiyya ye aapne kya kiya

Diya runs towards samrat with glass of water

Diya bhai : apna hath pani me dla do ,bahut jal raha hai na with tears in her eyes (she is very sensitive for her brothers)

Adhiraj knows sam natak kar raha hai

Samrat (complete nautanki style) : Diya is ghar me ek tu hi hai jise meri itni parwah hai warna main to bus akela hi tha

Adhraj ko pata hai ki samrat natak karne me number one hai

Adhiraj : to tu akela hai kyon?

Samrat : nahi bhaiyya main mane wo main aisa kuch nahi kaha and hides back to diya par adhiraj comes to him and looks to his finger and says sorry for what he did

Samrat : are bhaiyya aap bhi na main to majak kar raha tha plz ab aap senti mat hona

And he hugs Adhiraj : and diya also hugs

At Sharma Mansion :

Shilpa Sharma has some urgent work so she is out of town

Suhani is ready to go to college and waiting for gunjan to wake up

Mayank : suhani tum abhi tak college nahi gayi

Suhani : bhai wo gunjan ka wait kar rahi hu,aapne nashta kar liya na?

Mayank : nahi maine nashta nhai kiya soch raha tha aaj office me thoda kam kum hai to tum dono ko college drop kar deta hu

Par ye gunjan abhi tak uthi nahi hai,ye ladki bhi na pata nahi kab samjhegi

In gunjan's room

Mayank : gunji utho beta (he calls gunjan as angel,gunji and beta depends on his mood)

Gunjan : bhai please thodi der aur plzzzzzzz

Mayank : to tumhe college nahi jana hai kya?

Gunjan : half awake and now keeps her head on mayanks lap

Mayank : suhani main ise uthata hu tum ek kam karo iska college bag pack kar do

Mayank : to tum uthogi nahi hai na

Gunjan is very naughty : she knows ki bhai use bina uthaye nahi jayega to she simply gets up and hugs her brother

Gunjan : bhai mujhe uthao na mere pair me dard ho raha hai and mayank makes her to stand but she is still hangs on him

Mayank : gunji ab tum bachhi nahi ho chalo jakar ready ho jao main aur suhani tumhare liye wait kar rahe hai

Gunjan : thik hai bhai par haan main nashta aapki palte me hi karungi isliye mujhe phir se mat kahna hi ki gunji ab tum bachhi nahi ho

Ok baba ab jao ready to ho jao

She comes back to her room and they are having ther breakfast

(As i have told gunjan max time mayank ki plate me hi khati hai)

Mayank :chalo ab main tum logo ko drop kar deta hu nahi to late ho jayega

Gunajn : wow main bhai ke sath aage baithungi

Suhani : Thik hai baba jaha tera man kare wahi baithana par ab chale

(Suhani knows ki gunjan mayank ke liye bahut hi possessive hai ,isliye wo kabhi bhi mayank par apne bhai hone ka haq nahi dikhati par wo bhi mayank ki bahut respect karti hai)

Now Bhushan Mansion :

Nupur is ready and making breakfast for her bro's

Uday is very punctual person he likes discipline

Benji pura ulta hai sone mile to kumbhkaran ko bhi mat de de

Nupur at benji's room

Uth benji chal college nahi jana hai kya?

Benji : di plz thodi der sirf 2 min

Nupur : kyon katoti chal rahi hai kya kal tak to 5 min kah raha tha aaj 2 min

Benji : Di plz di 2 min na plz

Nupur : thik hai main Uday bhaiyya se kah deti hu kit u nahi uth raha hai

Suddenly

Benji is awake : Di kyon meri dushman ke jaise kar rahi ho,main uth raha hu na

Tum to janti ho bhaiyya matlan subah subah ,nahi di main uth gaya dekho

Nupur : by god benji tu itna darta kyon hai ?

Benji : Di pata nahi par mujhe bhaiyya se bahut dar lagta hai

Now they got ready and going college

Next i will update soon so plz comment

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Posted: 15 years ago
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aww....cute update...........bt i lovd d scene in 'Sharma Mansion' d most....Mayank is truly d best brother...😳😳😳...*hw i badly wished us Adhibandar ki jagah Mayank hota in Shergil Mansion......*

nywz plzzzzzz continue soooooon
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interesting plz add me to pm list
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Hi Arunaaaaaaaaaaa

lovely Cs

and ur first part was fabulous.

i enjoyed it a lot.

loved mayank and gunji convo and their bonding.

it was really very sweet,

waiting 4 mayur meetings.

update soon

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