Kaisa ye Pyar hai - part 16 page 60 16/05/2010 - Page 9

awesome update dear... luved it to da core!!!!

oh gosh aruna..😲..
full speed mein ho yaar...
6 parts likh dale.....
Awesum updates..👏.. want more MN romance.....
pls update soon...🤗
-supriya

Originally posted by: arunabehere

hey guys ,Thanks a lot for ur comments

It mean a lot to me

All of actually rt ,

I will concentrate more on MAYUR in the next update

But i need to plot all this drama bcoz as i said others also have to grow in parallel

It is MN ff so what you are expecting is correct and i need to work on it

I will try to update it by this friday

Part 7

In the night at mayank's house

Mayank called N

N : Hi mayank

M : hi nupur ,kaisi ho?

N ( in teasing tone) : oh to rat ke 12 baje aapne mera hal chal puchane ke liye phone kiya hai,vaise achhi hu?

M : kyon main apni hone wali biwi se kya uska hal chal bhi nahi puch sakta?

N : nahi aapka haq hai bilkul puch sakte hai.,main to aise hi kah rahi thi

M : vaise tumase kuch puchana tha , main tumase akele me milana chahta hu

(forcing himself ,mayank bol date par jana chahta hu)

N : office me to daily hi milte hai na ( very smart)

M : are main vaise nahi milna chahta

N : to kaise milna chahte hai

M: Achha thik hai main tumhe date par le jana chahta hu,fine? To tayar ho

N: Aaj hi chalana hai kya nahi itni rat ko nahi (again teasing)

M : nupur

N : mayank

M : tum kal office aa rahi ho na

N: haan par achanak se date aur office

M : nahi actually kal Sunday hai na isliye puch raha tha

N : oh mujhe yad hi nahi tha ,(sad tone ) thik hai Monday ko milte hai phir

M : thik hai main akele hi office chala jaunga

N : par aapne kaha tha ki kal Sunday hai

M : haa wo to sabke liye par mujhe ek deal final karni hai to uska kam hai

N : thik hai phir main bhi aa jaungi

M : (happy but behaving as of he does not want to trouble her) nahi nupur tum kal rest kar lo abhi to exams huye hai.

N : Nahi thik hai mujhe koi rest nahi karma hai ( Kitni mushkil se itne din kate hai aur kal office me koi nahi hoga ,she is praying plz na mat kaho)

M : thik hai kal milte hai ,aur main tumhe pick kar lunga .Good night

N : good night

Next day morning

Mayank left early today ,without having breakfast.Gen he does not do it but he was not able to control himself to keep away from his life.

Nupur's house – she was al set to go with him and was waitning for him eagerly.

As soon as mayank reached he called her and nupur without wasting a min ran towards the door and benji se takara gayi

B : kya di kaise chal rahi ho tum bhi?

N : main jaldi me hu benji ,tere jijaji wait kar rahe hai.

B : ohhhhhhh jijaji

Nupur never referred him as jijaji and she was surprised but to avoid it

N : thik hai main bad me bat karti hu tujhase

She was running towards the car and mayank can watch her from far

Nupur has wore red suit ,her hairs are tied nicely and she has put light makeup

Mayank is mesmerised with her beauty,how can a person look so beautiful and yet so innocent and cute

Other side Nupur has not seen mayank anytime in half jacket and the brown lower and with the simple sporty watch

She is thinking k mayank bahut handsome hai par aaj to bahut hi hot lag rahe hai

And she is blushing after what she is thinking

He opens the door for her and they move towards office

Mayank and nupur both are happy after seeing each other suddenly mayank plays music

And the song is " Pyar ko ho jane do ,pyar me kho jane de "

As soon as this song starts mayank looks to nupur and she is trying to avoid his gaze

Soon mayank looks in the front (he is driving the car c –mon he should look in the front rt )

Now nupur is looking at mayank and she did not realize when they reach to office ,and mayank shakes her

M : nupur office aa gaya hai and then she comes out of her thought

N ( kya ho gaya hai mujhe ,main aise kyon behave kar rahi hu,mayank kya sochenge mere bare me)

They enter in the office and started working on the project which they have to finish soon

Achanak se nupur ko ek quotation ki file milti hai jisme Malhotra & Malhotra ki ki details hai

N : M ye deal to bahut achhi lagti hai

M : kaunsi nupur witout looking at her ?

N : Malhotra's ki ,aapne dekhi nahi

M : dekhi hai par main isme interested nahi hu , mujhe usme kuch khas profit najar nahi aaya

N : par mujhe to ye deal buri nahi lag rahi hai,khair aap jyada jante hai is bare me

M (achha hua nupur ne aur kuch nahi pucha is deal ke bare me)

M : vaise nupur tum ghar par pure din karti kya ho?

N : meri subah to bhiya aur benji ke sath hoti hai ,unka dhayan rakhana ,samay raha to painting aur ghar decorate karna, aur aapko (she did not spek after this)

M : aur kya nupur?

N : aur kuch nahi ,aur kya hoga ( nupur is looking at other side bcoz mayank will easily get to know that she is lying)

M : pakka aur kuch nahi and he smiles with his cute dimples

Achanak se hamari nupur ko mayank ko compliment dene ka man kiya

N : aapke dimples bahut cute hai

M : bus dimples hi cute hai ?vaise CJ bhi yahi kahti thi

N : CJ?

M : haan wo meri dance partner thi college me

N : dance partner ,her eyes are wide by now ,to aap dance bhi karte the

M : haan salsa,actually CJ ko dance ka bahut shauk tha aur main hi use sikhata tha,uske sath wqat ka to jaise pata hi nahi chalta tha,she was very pretty and intelligent

N : (jalan or jealousy ) oh to bahut pretty thi aur bahut intelligent bhi thi

M : (he can make out easily ) haan aur to aur understanding bhi thi

N : aur kuch baki rah gaya hoga to wo bhi bata do?dikhane me bhi sundar hi hogi

M : haan ,ab meri dost thi to sundar to hogi hi ( smiling from one corner and enjoying it)

N : oh to sirf dost hi thi ,aapko pasand to karti hi hogi hai na?

M : haan bilkul ab ye bhi koi puchane ki bat hai nupur

Now it is out of control for nupur to listen abt CJ –she did not like him praising CJ and burst out

N : oh to mujhase kyon shadi kar rahe ho usase hi kar lete?

M : par nupur abhi wo US me hai ,agar yaha hoti to soch sakta tha

Now enough

N: thik hai main ghar ja rahi hu ,aap apni CJ ke khayalo me hi rahiye and tears formed in her eyes but her anger is not allowing her to cry

M –lag raha hai kuch jyada hi ho gaya hai

When nupur turns ,he just holds her hand and takes her to the sofa where he asks her to sit

N sat in anger and mayank also sat next to her one hand on his leg and another back side of nupur but on the sofa

M : to tum mujhase naraj ho

N : nahi hona chahiye kya ,apne hone wale pati ke munh se kisi aur ladki ke bare me sunkar mujhe koi khushi nahi ho rahi hai?agar aapko wo itni hi achhi lagti thi to aap usase hi shadi karte mujhase kyon kar rahe hai?( all in one breath)

M smiles : pahle to kabhi itne gusse me nahi dekha hai tumhe ,vaise CJ to sirf friend hai meri aur wo pahle se hi kisi aur ko pasand karti hai nupur.par mujhe achha laga tumhara mere liye itna possessive hona.

(nupur is blushing and looking at floor)

Aur vaise bhi meri life me tum bhi utani hi special ho jitni ki SS,S and G.main tumhare bina apni life soch bhi nahi sakta.

(N looks into his eyes and finds only love ,honesty and respect for her ,she is lost in him while mayank is still talking to her )

Janti ho nupur maine bachpan se G aur S ko bachho ki tarah sambhala hai,papa ki death ke bad maa ne hume her khushi di par unke pas samay nahi hota tha par mujhe isase koi shikyat nahi hai kyonki unhone hamesha hume hi priority di hai.

( m has not open himself in front of anyone like this but N ke samane wo apne aapko bahut comfortable feel karta hai )

Aur tumhe tension lene ki jarurat nahi hai ,meri life me na to tumase pahli koi thin a tumhare bad koi hogi nupur and i mean it.main tumase bahut pyar karta hu nupur. I really love you

(While mayank is telling all this they did not realise ki he is actually holding her shoulder and she is holding his hand with both of her hand )

They are close to each other and felt a force which made them to hug each other

Nupur burries her head in his chest while mayank caressing her hair ,they both are lost and this is the first time they actually felt love inside and ek dusare ke pas aaye.

Both are in no mood to leave each other but hi re kismet phone ki ghanti baji and they separated and N is like sharam se pani pani ,while mayank was taking maje ,he was constantly looking at N

M :hello

G : bhai time up aapko date par jana hai

M : haan sweety chalo bye

N : sweety ???????

M : koi nahi hai baba Gunjan hi hai and then both of them started laughing

M : nupur hamara kam to lagbhag ho gaya hai ,i will drop u now ,get ready by 8 i ll come and pick you for our very first date

N to vaise hi pahle hug wali bat se hi nahi nikali thi to date sunkar use jaise jhataka hi lag gaya ,no no no koi aisa vaisa jhataka nahi ye pyar ka jhataka tha and she thought ki aaj wo apni feelings mayank ko jarur bata degi

Mayank ne N ko drop kiya and he came exactly at 8 and called nupur

Mayank is looking at nupur

(he is almost half dead after looking his love and life nupur

(She wore a very beautiful chiffon saree in yellow colour ,her feminine curves are clearly visible.it had very light work on the saree.Her hairs are bit wet and opened.very light makeup and dozen of bengels in her hand.)

Mayank is not aware when she came and sat next to him and when she saw mayank

( black shirt half sleeves ,blue jeans he was as usual looking handsome and dashing ,any girl would love to fall for him )

They would not have moved if there would not have been a honk

Achanak se dono wapas apne sense me aaye and now both were blushing

M : tum bahut gorgeous lag rahi ho? ( ye kya kah raha hai mayank)

N : thanks ( kab se yahi to sunana chah rahi thi par mayank aur gorgeous)

Mayank started the car and there was a silence in the car ,par ye hai Mumbai meri jan

It started raining ,and then m and n were very upset ( i know nupur ko barish pasand hai par itni ready hokar nikali hai aur barish wo bhi pahli date par mayank ke sath no ways –first time in life she was cursing rain )

M : oh is barish ko bhi abhi hona tha kya ? nupur mujhe lag raha hai ki hume thodi der iske rukane ka wait karna padega ,i guess samne ek hotel hai waha chale

N : haan thik hai

They entered into the hotel and then mayank took permission from nupur and went to call U and SS as they will be late due to rain ( thr was no coverage that is the reason he went out )

Nupur was sitting alone and looking happy but suddenly some one came ane she was bit tensed after looking at this face

Yes guys he is Purab

P : hi nupur

N : hi purab

P : achhi lag rahi ho ,vaise yaha kiske sath aai ho?

N : thanks main mayank ke sath aai hu

P : sorry nupur us din maine galatfahmi me aakar is rishte ko toda tha,par hum ise abhi bhi jod sakte hai

N :shocked after listening this

(Mayank was coming and he stopped suddenly he saw that P asked N to talk few things so he took her outside,mayank was tensed and he had a fear of loosing her ,but he does not want to stop nupur so he just went back of them)

P : Haan nupur maine kaha na ki main abhi bhi tumase shadi ke liye tayar hu

N : achha laga jankar kit um mujhase shadi karna chahte ho par purab ye bhi to ho sakta hai na ki meri engagement ke bad mere aur mayank ke bich sach me bahut kuch hua ho

P : main tumhe janta hu nupur ki tum aisa kuch nahi karogi ?

N : tum mujhe shayad kabhi jante hi nahi the purab ,aur ab ye nupur sirf mayank se pyar karti hai aur ek bat ,mayank itne jyada ache hai ki main unhe kisi bhi chij ke liye mana nahi karungi kyonki main janti hu ki wo mere sath kabhi galat kar hi nahi sakte hai.wo unlogo me nahi hai ki apni hone wali biwi par bharosa hi na kare

P : oh c'mon nupur pyar vyar kuch nahi hota hai aur tum malhotra and malhotra ke eklaute waris matlab purab malhotra se shadi karogi to shan se jiogi tumhare pair jameen par nahi padenge

( M& M oh to ye karan tha mayank ka is project me koi interest nahi dikhane ka)

N : achha laga ye bhi jankar kit um itne bade empire ke malik ho par tum galat jagah par apni shan dikha rahe ho. Mujhe paiso me na to kabhi interest tha aur na hi hoga. Main rishto ki kimat paiso me nahi lagati hu aur mayank mere liye koi business deal nahi hai isliye ab better hoga kit um mujhe apna face na hi dikhao.

(M is happy to hear all this from nupur ,he is no more scare that nupur will leave him)

So he came in between N and P

Nupur holded mayank's shoulder and hided herself at his back.

P : Dekho mayank tum nahi jante ki mere aur N ke bich kya hua hai

M : aur janane me interested bhi nahi hu purab ab better yahi hoga kit um hamari zindagi me dakhal na hi do kyonki mujhe tumhare photo ya kahaniyo se koi fark nahi padta hai

Nupur is crying holding mayank's shoulder and purab left

M is happy and sad at the same time – he is thinking n met p bcoz of the date only

M : I am sorry nupur meri wajah se

In middle only

N : haan mayank aapki wajah se main aaj sach ka samna kar pai aur aapko sorry bolne ki jarurat nahi hai ,mujhe pata chal gaya hai ki aap M & M ki deal me interested kyon nahi the.aur tension mat lijiye main bilkul thik hu

M turns back : oh to M & M ki deal cancel kar di isliye ro rahi ho?

N : mayank

M : nupur mere liye mera parivar sabse jyada jaruri hai,aur tum mere parivar ka ek bahut special hissa ho.

N : purab ki bato ne mujhe ye ehsas dila diya ki meri life me aap kitne special ho and first time she says " I Love You " and hugs him tightly

M : I love you too nupur (now he has the tears in his eyes but it is khushi ke aansoo)

Guys still MAYUR not gone for date so real romance will be there but plz keep in mind n is very traditional so plz expectation low and keep it high after there marriage

This update is long but without any R

brilliant part!!

I lovedddd nupurs jealousy!! hope to see more of her possesiveness....i really loved the way mayank was really understanding when he saw her with purab and the way nupur stood up for mayank!!

and she finallyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy confessed her love...YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY :)

continue soon...loved this part!

Fabulous part Aruna....

loved the part cont. soon